Reading Activities: Girls on the Rise by Amanda Gorman, illustrated by Loveis Wise

Girls on the Rise
Author: Amanda Gorman
Illustrator: Loveis Wise
7 January 2025
Viking Books for Young Readers
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “Who are we? We are a billion voices, bright and brave; we are light, standing together in the fight.

Girls are strong and powerful alone, but even stronger when they work to uplift one another. In this galvanizing original poem by presidential inaugural poet Amanda Gorman, girls and girlhood are celebrated in their many forms, all beautiful, not for how they look but for how they look into the face of fear. Creating a rousing rallying cry with vivid illustrations by Loveis Wise, Gorman reminds us how girls have shaped our history while marching boldly into the future.”

Need some reviews of Girls on the Rise?

Here’s an NPR interview with Gorman about this title.


Reading Activities inspired by Girls on the Rise:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front cover: 
    • What do you notice about the art, colors, faces, clothing, background details?
    • What does the word “rise” make you picture, movement, emotion, or both?
    • Who do you think this book is speaking to, one person, or a whole group?
    • What questions would you like to ask the author or illustrator before reading the book?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • What does “being brave” mean in this book, and what does it look like?
    • Where do you see teamwork or community in the words and pictures?
    • How do the illustrations add to the meaning of the poem?
    • What lines felt like a chant or a cheer you could say out loud?
    • What does the book suggest about fear, and what helps girls move through it?
    • Would you recommend this book to a friend? Why or why not?
  • Rise Chant Remix: Write three new lines that match the book’s voice. Start each with one of these stems.
    We are…
    We can…
    We will…
    Read your lines out loud like a chant. Try it whisper-​quiet, then proud-​and-​strong. Which version fits your message best?
  • Courage Map: Draw a simple path across a page. Label the start Fear and the finish Rise. Along the path, add 5 stepping-​stones a girl might use to move forward, such as a friend, practice, asking for help, deep breath, telling the truth. Consider illustrating each stepping-​stone with a small symbol.
  • Bravery Portrait Gallery: Create a portrait of a girl who is being brave in an everyday way, raising her hand, joining a game, learning something hard, standing up for someone. Add three labels around the portrait.
    Her strength
    Her voice
    Her support
  • Make a Community “We” Mural: On one big sheet (or taped pages), draw a crowd of many different kids standing together. Each person gets one speech bubble with a short line, such as “I help,” “I try again,” “I tell the truth,” “I listen.” This turns the poem into a classroom or family chorus.
  • History Ripple Cards: The book nods toward how girls shape the future. Make three cards.
    Card 1: A girl who changed something in your family or community
    Card 2: A girl who changed something in history
    Card 3: A girl who will change something tomorrow (imagined)
    On the back of each card, write one sentence about the change and one sentence about the courage it took.
  • Books, Books, and More Books! Check out these picture books about confidence, courage, and girls using their voices:

The impressive true story of Clara Lemlich, a young immigrant who stood up, spoke out, and helped spark a massive labor movement when the stakes were high and the risks were real.


I Am Enough by Grace Byers, illustrated by Keturah A. Bobo
An affirming poem that centers self-​worth, kindness, and belonging, inviting readers to slow down and see themselves as whole and valuable just as they are.


Malala’s Magic Pencil by Malala Yousafzai, illustrated by Kerascoët
Malala reflects on her childhood wish for a magic pencil and how that wish grew into the courage to speak up for education and change, even when it was dangerous to do so.

She Persisted by Chelsea Clinton, illustrated by Alexandra Boiger
Short portraits of women who faced obstacles, refused to quit, and reshaped history by continuing to push forward when others told them to stop.


Sulwe by Lupita Nyong’o, illustrated by Vashti Harrison
A tender rich story about a girl learning to see her own beauty, exploring colorism, self-​acceptance, and the quiet power of self-love.

Author Interview: Irene Latham

Irene Latham - Highlights FoundationHere we go with another OPB Author Interview! Today we’re spotlighting Irene Latham, whose well-​wrought picture books keep winning hearts (and awards). I had the joy of editing The Museum on the Moon: The Curious Objects on the Lunar Surface, and I can confirm: Irene’s writing ability shines.

You may know her for Can I Touch Your Hair? (with Charles Waters), the Caldecott Honor book The Cat Man of Aleppo (with Karim Shamsi-​Basha), the kindness-​forward Be a Bridge (with Charles Waters), and her anthologies like The Mistakes That Made Us. Whether she’s writing persona poems, curating other poets’ voices, or sneaking science into verse, Irene’s work invites kids to look closely, feel deeply, and live language out loud.

Let’s learn more about her and her work right now!


RVC: When did you realize you were a poet?
IL: Family legend says I’ve been writing poems since I could wield a crayon—love poems, for my mother. But I am a shy person by nature and didn’t share my work with others or pursue publication until I was in my late twenties.

Writer's Digest Magazine September/October 2024 Cover RevealRVC: What kind of training do you have that supports that writing interest?
IL: I’m self-​taught. Each day I’m learning to be a poet through reading poems, of course, and also consuming craft books, podcasts, and articles. I spend part of each day in nature (we live on a lake), and I have attended many a conference and poetry reading. My first stop once I decided to try and get my work published was to join my state’s poetry society. Also, for decades now, my sister has gifted me a subscription to Writer’s Digest magazine (where I have seen lots of your articles, Ryan!).

RVC: Aw, shucks. Thanks!
IL: Much of my writing education has come from those pages!

Leaving Gee's Bend: A NovelRVC: What’s the story behind the first picture book you wrote and published?
IL: I started in the children’s market as a middle grade novelist with Leaving Gee’s Bend (Penguin, 2010). I still love writing novels, but before anything else, I am a poet. So I started sending picture book poetry collection manuscripts to my agent Rosemary Stimola, and together we worked up a list of editors who might be interested. Several manuscripts got rounds of rejections before I wrote Dear Wandering Wildebeest: And Other Poems from the Water Hole. Carol Hinz at Lerner acquired that book, and it was published with illustrations by Anna Wadham in 2014. Carol and I have worked together many times since then! The book received some starred reviews and awards, which was super encouraging. It, along with a companion title When the Sun Shines on Antarctica: And Other Poems About the Frozen Continent (Lerner, 2016) will be released in paperback in 2026.

RVC: The biggest lesson that experience taught you?
IL: Dear Wandering Wildebeest features poems with nonfiction text boxes. I learned pretty quickly that the text boxes are not simply “extra” information. These two pieces—the poem and the text box—should work in tandem. It’s important to include information in the text box that readers may need to decode the poem, and/​or information that anticipates a question a reader may have after reading the poem. And keep it SHORT.

RVC: This is GREAT advice.
IL: In some ways, the text boxes are like prose poems, leaning heavily on poetic elements of economy and precision of language.

RVC: Love that, thanks. Now let’s jump ahead to the book we worked on together—The Museum on the Moon. When you realized “hey, there’s a whole museum’s worth of artifacts on the Moon,” what clicked first—the book concept or a specific poem?
IL: I was a “space” kid who followed the NASA program, and later my oldest son had a childhood obsession with space travel. We also live near the U.S. Space and Rocket Center in Alabama. So I had been collecting moon facts for many years. One day, when reviewing my file of facts (I keep all sorts of files of potential book ideas that often arise from my general obsessions, and add to them over time.), I noticed quite a few things had been left on the moon. I jumped on the internet and found even MORE things! Given the number and variety of items, the history and science connections, and the innate kid appeal, I thought, hmm, this could be fun…and I started writing!

RVC: Craft nuts-​and-​bolts question here. Museum pairs poems with tight prose sidebars. How did you balance music with accuracy?
IL: It’s important to me that a poem be a poem. There should be a surprising image or word choice, some musicality, and it shouldn’t be just a recitation of clunky facts. There are myriad of other factual space books available to readers, so I felt my job was to really focus, to “explode the moment.” Which meant being ruthless when cutting and paring both the poems and text boxes. (Confession: there’s one poem in the collection that still feels a bit clunky to me, and every time I read it, I wish I’d spent a little more time unleashing its music!)

RVC: Dear blog readers, that last comment is something all book creators feel at one time or another. It’s okay–truly. You do your best and move on to next projects. Trust me on this. Now, let’s dig back into the book. It features a variety of poetry forms. What was the process for determining which poem formats got used in the book, and for which topics?
IL: The “matching” of subject matter to poetry form is an intuitive process. Mostly it just takes time and trust, allowing oneself to sit with it, to experiment, and allow the answer to arise on the page. The opening poem, “Welcome Earthlings!” is a triolet, an 8‑line form which features one line that repeats 3 times, and a second line that repeats 2 times. This repetition felt “right” to me because the moon also repeats, returning each night…and that became the focus of the poem, how even though you may see the moon every night, you don’t know everything about the moon. It has secrets, and now it’s here to share those secrets. It felt like a perfect marriage of form and content.

RVC: Agree! What’s your favorite spread to see illustrated by Myriam Wares, and why that one?
IL: I loved seeing Myriam’s rendering of the closing poem “This Poem is an Outpost.” We don’t know yet what a habitat on the Moon will actually look like, so I was super curious to get a glimpse into Myriam’s imagination. Her moon habitat is so inviting—who wouldn’t want to stay there before cruising out to Mars?

RVC: What’s one object on the Moon that surprised even you once you researched it?
IL: It surprised me to learn that Charles Duke (Apollo 16) left a photograph of his family on the moon. There’s something so tender and human about that—it was his way of making his loved ones part of the experience. Beautiful! (Though the photo is likely faded beyond recognition at this point.)

RVC: If UNESCO-​style protections ever extended to lunar sites, which locations belong at the top of your “heritage” list?
IL: The first footprints, number one. Probably my number two would be the lunar rover that holds the one book on the Moon—a red Bible. Truly, I could argue for them all! Perhaps there really does need to be a museum on the Moon?!

RVC: Let’s talk about collaboration. You and Charles Waters have built a true creative partnership. What’s his writing/​collaborating superpower?
IL: For fun, Charles and I named ourselves the I & C Construction Co.: Building Books One Word at a Time Since 2015.

RVC: HAH. Love it.
IL: We are friends first, and collaborators second, and we’ve been super fortunate to work on a variety of projects. Our current focus is on co-​curating poetry anthologies for children. Charles has multiple superpowers, but one that has really impacted me is how good he is at acknowledging all the others who help make a book. Our presentations always include slides of folks who helped along the way: from childhood teachers, to librarians who aided our research, to editors and book designers…Charles is a great connector, and he makes it his business to really “see” people.

RVC: How does your collaborative process work? And how/​when/​where/​why do the book ideas emerge?
IL: Each project has been different, and our process continues to evolve. I’m mostly the idea person, but our next book, a poetry anthology titled For the Win: Poems Celebrating Phenomenal Athletes (Lerner, March 3,  2026) evolved out of an idea Charles had many years ago to do a sports anthology. I’m not a sports person, but when he came to me the idea, I pondered it for a while and eventually suggested we focus not on biography, but on moments in each athlete’s life, from introduction to the sport, training, setbacks, achievements, and also what happens after the great achievement. Such inspiring subject matter, whether one likes sports or not!

RVC: IT sounds terrific.
IL: In terms of our day-​to-​day work together, we currently love Google Docs, because we can both be working inside a document simultaneously. Sometimes we have these marathon phone calls where we’re talking through things and also making corrections in the document. Other times we work independently, and take turns responding or adding material. Some things we address through texting. We divvy tasks as best we can, allowing each of us to do the things we want to do, are best at, or feel called to do. I trust Charles, and he trusts me. Somehow it all works out!

RVC: In Be a Bridge, you distilled big, bridge-​building ideas for very young readers. What did “every word counts” look like in revision?
IL: Be a Bridge was a tough one! It emerged out of our efforts to bring the subject matter of Can I Touch Your Hair? Poems of Race, Mistakes, and Friendship to a younger audience. Carol Hinz rejected several of our manuscripts before we finally got to Bridge, so we’d already been revising and revising…There’s a didacticism inherent in the premise—I mean, the title itself is instructive!—and we wanted to “soften” that, but we were also hemmed in by these rhyming couplets. Taking out a single word seemed to unravel the whole thing! And then, after the book was illustrated, a sensitivity reader found some issues that needed further revising. It’s all a bit of a blur in my memory, but what makes it all worthwhile is hearing from educators and families how meaningful the book has been to them. A LOT of work goes into a picture book, that’s for sure!

RVC: The Mistakes That Made Us anthology invited poets to get autobiographical. What editorial promise did you and Charles make to contributors to help them go brave?
IL: We asked each poet to share a mistake from their own lives, write a poem about it, and then craft a nonfiction text box sharing how the mistake impacted their lives—what did they learn from it? Charles and I shared our own responses to the prompt, and we leaned into what impact this kind of vulnerability may have on our child readers. Our goal was to inspire and normalize mistake-​making. It’s just part of life! Not surprisingly given the generosity of poets, our contributors really came through, from Allan Wolf sharing how embarrassing it was to score a soccer goal for the wrong team to Naomi Shihab Nye sharing an incident from First Grade involving a fellow student taking too long at the pencil sharpener, a pencil, and bloodshed! As editors, our job was to stay out of the way of this truth-​telling as much as possible, stepping in only to help clarify or to eliminate unnecessary distractions on the page.

RVC: Speaking of collaborations, how do you handle art notes?
IL: I use them as sparingly as possible. One of my most favorite things about creating picture books is seeing what magic the illustrator conjures, so I want to give a wide berth! However, I have worked on a few historical books, both fiction and nonfiction, and it’s my responsibility to provide art notes, which can be links to historic photos or general research—anything that will help ensure our book will reflect the story’s time, place, people, and culture accurately.

RVC: This Poem Is a Nest is such a fine idea—turning one long poem into a ton of “nestlings.” What moment told you this wasn’t just a poem experiment but a full book?
IL: Of all my books, This Poem Is a Nest is probably the most joyful creative experience I’ve had. I was fortunate to work with Rebecca Davis (WordSong), and she acquired it when I’d only written about 30 nestlings. She believe in the book and invited me to have fun with it, so I did! Neither of us could have anticipated I would have had 161 poems worth of fun. As a creator, I’m so grateful to have been given this kind of freedom.

RVC: What’s one simple way families or classrooms can try their own found poems at home?
IL: You can find poems in the mail that arrives in your mailbox! Or on your bookshelf or magazine rack. Or you can download a pack of free poems from my website designed for just this purpose:

RVC: Let’s talk persona poems. What’s your checklist for writing ethically and vividly in another voice—especially for picture-​book readers?
IL: Do your research, of course. And not just about the person/​animal/​object, but also about the place and time where/​when the person/​animal lives or lived. Imagination is the building block of empathy, so really, all persona work is an exercise in empathy. To make these (or any type poem) more vivid, aim to include not only the sense of sight, but other senses as well. I have a new poetry collection coming from Astra/​WordSong in 2026 called Come In! Come In! Wordspinners to Welcome You Home, and the very last revision pass I did was for the sense of smell. At last gasp, I realized smell was underrepresented in the collection, so I made it my aim to bring in some more scents.

RVC: I’ve read that you’re a cellist. Has learning an instrument changed your line breaks or sound play on the page?
IL: That’s a great question. Playing the cello influences my writing in myriad ways! A musical phrase is not unlike a poetic one, and just as silence is a placeholder for emotion in music, white space serves the same purpose in poetry. More importantly, I’ve learned to appreciate the process of music-​making or poetry-​making, to focus on creating a connection with my audience rather than impressing anyone. Music, and poetry, is a place for me to just be me.

RVC: What can you tell us about the importance of community in a writer’s life?
IL: Truly this is a business of relationships. I love surrounding myself with book/​poetry people, people who share the impulse to use language and stories to attempt to discover the world and share ourselves on the page. I’ve learned community isn’t about numbers—so you can stop obsessing about growing your list of followers on social media! Community is about walking this world with kindness and openness and surrounding yourself with people who support what you’re doing, lift you up, and listen to your dreams and disappointments. This can be as simple as one other person, or two. The most important thing is to be authentic, and to be the kind of person who invites others to be authentic, too.

RVC: What’s one museum (on Earth!) you’d love to partner with for a poetry program, and what you do there?
IL: Ooh, I can’t think of a museum I wouldn’t want to partner with! I love museums—the big, flashy ones and the labor-​of-​love, local ones. Art, history, science…every trip I take includes a visit to one or more of these type of museums.

Also, since 2015, I’ve created a public art project on my blog called ArtSpeak!, in which I post an ekphrastic poem (poem inspired by art) to my blog. I love and have written on such a wide variety of art—you can find hundreds of these free poems on my website, and I am still just as in love with the project as I was ten years ago. Once, long ago, I did partner with Birmingham artist Liz Reed, and we mounted two “Poetry & Paint” shows in which she created art after I wrote, and I wrote poems after she painted. I’d love to do that again.

RVC: Last question for this part of the interview. What’s next in your picture-​book/​poetry world that you can tease?
IL: I have three picture books releasing in 2026, and two of them are poetry. the (third) poetry anthology I’ve co-​curated with Charles Waters, For the Win: Poems Celebrating Phenomenal Athlete (Lerner); a narrative picture book titled A Good Morning for Giddo (Penguin Random House), I wrote with my friend Dahlia Hamza Constantine, featuring a little girl and her giddo (grandfather) exploring Egyptian arts and culture at the Cairo market; and a solo collection of 66 poems called Come In! Come In! Wordspinners to Welcome You Home (Astra Publishing). Imagine a Richard Scarry book, but instead of just words, readers get short poems.

RVC: Okay, Irene. It’s time for the SPEED ROUND! Quick questions and fast answers please. Ready?
IL: Let’s go!

RVC: If you could only have one app on your phone…
IL: Music tuning app.

RVC: Pick one: personal chef, house cleaner, or masseuse?
IL: Personal chef.

RVC: What outdated slang do you use the most?
IL: Is “Awesome” considered outdated? I say that and “Excellent” fairly often. As a Southerner, I also enjoy words like “yonder,” “reckon and “piddle, ” and I use “y’all” and “fixin’ to” pretty regularly—but those words feel timeless to me!

RVC: First line that pops into your head when someone says “write a moon haiku—go!”
IL: The moon makes music

RVC: A poet every picture-​book writer should read.
IL: Valerie Worth.

RVC: One word you want kids to feel after reading your picture books.
IL: Loved.

RVC: Thanks so much, Irene!

Picture Book Review: Candy Corn Christmas by Jonathan Fenske

Candy Corn Christmas
Author: Jonathan Fenske
Illustrator: Jonathan Fenske
Little Simon
9 September 2025
40 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and freelance illustrator Edna Cabcabin Moran.

Ryan’s Review of the Writing

Candy Corn Christmas! has a playful premise: the candy corn left behind after Halloween get tired of waiting in their pumpkin pail and wander straight into Christmas. That jump is the book’s best move. The candy corn feel like kids discovering a holiday for the first time, bouncing from tree to stockings to eggnog with total confidence and zero understanding of boundaries. That sense of mischief gives the book oomph. The pacing stays quick, almost episodic, which works well for a story built on discovery—it keeps kids moving right along with the candy corn.

The art does most of the heavy lifting, and Fenske’s illustrations are lively and fun. The spreads are busy in the best way, full of tiny jokes and expressive candy faces that kids will spot right away. When the candy corn zip across ornaments or dunk themselves in nog, the pages pop. I’ll let Edna talk far more concretely about the art, but to my eye? The whole visual world feels loose, bright, and energetic. There’s also an easy, chatty confidence to the narration that helps the candy corn feel like a little chorus of eager kids, which gives the book a friendly, accessible voice from page one.

The emotional moment arrives when a candy cane tries to shove them back to “their” holiday. It’s clear, simple conflict that sets up Santa’s entrance. Santa’s brief mix-​up and quick course-​correct land well, and the ending settles into a cheerful, everyone-​belongs kind of holiday note without overworking the message. Kids will instantly recognize the moment when someone says, “You don’t belong here,” so the book’s turn toward welcome lands in a way little readers can feel even before the text explains it.

The book’s rhyme has enthusiasm, and Fenske hits those end rhymes with confidence. The rhythm getting there wobbles now and then, though, in a way adults will hear but still remain fun for kids. It’s charming in its own loose, bouncy way even if the scansion isn’t fully locked in.

Overall, the idea is cute, the art is genuinely fun, and kids will enjoy the candy-​corn-​chaos of it all. The visuals and the concept pull readers through with plenty of good-​natured holiday energy.

4 out of 5 candy corns


Edna’s Review of the Illustrations

As someone who isn’t a fan of the orange, yellow, and white-​striped confections, I found myself completely won over by a charming throng of candy corn creatures. These rollicking fellows with their antics and liveliness greatly enhance Jonathan Fenske’s rhyming picture book, Candy Corn Christmas. Illustrations tinged with subversive humor pulled this reader into a sharply-​drawn world and storyline that kept me at the edge of my seat.

Fenske’s line art candy corns are a standout in each cleanly-​rendered, digitally-​painted page. The candy corns themselves are given active and expressive personalities which make them easy to follow. Candy corns all look alike, right? So, the artist did well to give these guys expressive faces and distinguishing features with different types of mouths and teeth, googly eyes with eyebrows and, in some cases, costume pieces. Look for the candy corn wearing the green elf hat and one donning a Canadian maple leaf flag.

The use of line art as a narrative device is a wise artist choice providing readers a chance to appreciate candy corns as individual characters. This is especially important given that the pace of the story moves so quickly that there’s a risk of noticing gags more than caring about the characters themselves. 

Line art highlights details such as candy corns feeling bored and stale around an old familiar pumpkin pail, and candy corns showing interest in the sound of singing and bells coming from another room. When the candy corns invade the Christmas confections’ space, Fenske’s use of line art successfully shows displeasure and worry emanating from the sugar plums, chocolate log, and candy cane.

**Spoiler alert in the next paragraph!**

Tensions rise when Santa shows up and he does the unthinkable, taking an actual bite (though it’s mentioned as a nibble) from a candy corn. The artist’s repetition of layout and close-​up action serves to increase story tension plus provide some comic relief. There’s Santa down on the ground examining the band of candy corns right before an extreme close up of Santa bringing a candy corn to his mouth. Then there’s another page showing Santa standing next to the candy corns (in the same line up as before) with one of them saying “My baby,” followed by a page showing a smiling, carefree Santa holding a traumatized, gooey candy corn in his palm. These pages will render this book less suitable for younger kids. While the graphic details surprised and cracked me up as an adult, I welcomed the relief of knowing that the candy corn did survive.

As mentioned earlier, this book contains both funny and subversive elements fueled by illustrations that will hold reader interest up to the very end. An entertaining book filled with details and visual intrigue for the older picture book set, pre‑K, and above.

4.5 out of 5 candy canes 

Edna Cabcabin Moran is an author/​illustrator, multi-​disciplined artist, and STEAM and integrative arts educator. Her latest picture book, Honu and Moa received an Aesop Accolades. Edna is currently working in picture books and comics and has a middle grade graphic novel in progress. Edna has a comic in the newly-​released middle grade anthology, Let’s Go!: A Kids Comics Studio Anthology. She is also a contributing poet in the upcoming March 2026 anthology, For the Win: Poems Celebrating Phenomenal Athletes (Carolrhoda Books).

https://kidlitedna.com

IG: @kidlitedna

Industry Insights: The “So What?” Test

In lieu of an industry interview, we’re going a different route today. Since this is the Season of Thanks, I’m offering something I think writers will be thankful for. It’s something editors and agents wish more writers understood: your picture book needs to answer one question fast—so what?

Not in a mean way. But more like a who is this for and why will it matter to them? way.

Because here’s the thing: your manuscript doesn’t just need to convince5 So Whats: Prioritizing Improvement Opportunities - CX Journey™ an editor. It needs to work for the art director planning page turns, the sales rep pitching to Barnes & Noble, the librarian deciding what to order, the teacher choosing a readaloud book for the classroom, and the grandparent standing in the aisle at Target.

If you can’t answer “So What?” clearly, nobody else can either.

What “So What?” Actually Means

It’s two things:

  1. Who needs this book? (Age range + the specific kid experience you’re addressing)
  2. What does it give them? (Not a theme. A benefit they can feel.)

Example:

  • Weak: “It’s about friendship.”
  • Strong: “It’s for 4–6 year olds learning how to navigate their first disagreements with friends. It shows them that saying sorry doesn’t mean you’re wrong, just that you care.”

See the difference? The second one tells everyone in the pipeline exactly who to sell it to and why a parent or teacher would buy it.

How to Prove It in Your Manuscript

Once you know your “So What?,” make sure your manuscript delivers it across all 32 (or more!) pages.

  • Does your main character’s problem match the reader’s real-​life struggle?
  • Does the story show (not tell!) how to handle that struggle in a way kids can try themselves?
  • Does the story create natural visual moments and pacing that support the So What?

If you can’t clearly picture the shelf it belongs on or the specific kid who needs it after reading your opening, that’s your revision signal.

The “So What?” Statement

Try this: This book is for [age] about [specific kid problem]. It helps them [what they’ll learn/​feel/​do] through [the story’s approach].

If you can say that out loud without hedge words like “kind of” or “explores the idea of,” you’re on the right track.

Let’s look at a real example:

The Rabbit Listened is for 3–6 year olds who’ve experienced something upsetting and don’t know how to feel better. It helps them understand that sometimes you don’t need solutions or advice—you just need someone to sit with you and listen—through a story where different animals offer different types of comfort until Rabbit shows up and simply stays.”

That’s a “So What?” every role in the pipeline can work with. The editor knows it’s a social-​emotional title. The art director can visualize quiet, tender moments. The sales rep can pitch it to the feelings/​comfort shelf. And the parent shopping at their local indie bookstore immediately knows if their kid needs this book right now.

Your turn. Write the “So What?” for your current manuscript. If it lands clearly—no hemming and hawing, no vague language—you’ve got a solid foundation. But if you’re struggling to articulate it? That’s valuable information too. It usually means the manuscript itself needs clearer focus before it’s ready to send out.

Reading Activities: Sleep Tight, Disgusting Blob by Huw Aaron

Sleep Tight, Disgusting Blob
Author: Huw Aaron
Illustrator: Huw Aaron
1 July 2025
Viking Books for Young Readers
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “Whether you are a vampire or a ghost, a werewolf or a yeti, a bedtime routine is absolutely essential for a good night’s sleep. Adults and children will fall in love with Blob and the whole cast of monsters as they brush their teeth, put on their pajamas, and get tucked up in bed.

Warm, loving and slimy, this hilarious rhyming picture book is the perfect addition to bedtime reading, ending with a kiss and sweet dreams for all.”


Need some reviews of Sleep Tight, Disgusting Blob?


Reading Activities inspired by Sleep Tight, Disgusting Blob:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front cover: 
    • What kind of creature do you think the “disgusting blob” is?
    • How does the cover mix scary and funny details?
    • What do the colors on the cover make you feel? Cozy? Creepy? Something else?
    • What bedtime items can you spot? What do they tell you about this world?
    • What questions would you like to ask Huw Aaron before reading the book?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • How does the parent blob show love, even while calling the child “disgusting”?
    • What bedtime routines in the story are like yours?
    • Which part of the rhyme made you laugh or cringe the most?
    • What do the pictures show that the words don’t say?
    • Why do you think the author ends the story with “I love you, disgusting blob”?
    • How does this book make bedtime feel less scary and more funny?
    • If you could ask the author one question about this story work, what would it be?
  • Night Check Patrol: In the story, bedtime is a full operation — teeth, pajamas, settling the chaos of many different monsters. Pretend you’re Head of Night Patrol. Walk through your bedroom with a clipboard and list 3 things that need to be “secured for the night.” (Example: “All crayons capped,” “Lego trap cleared,” “Snacks moved away from ooze.”)
  • Gross-​but-​Sweet Poetry: The book uses bouncy rhyme to tuck a monster in with love and patience. Try writing a 4‑line bedtime rhyme to a creature of your choice.
    Example:
    “My little swamp goblin, it’s time to lie down.
    Wipe off the grave dirt, remove your frown…”

    Challenge yourself to mix gross details and actual tenderness, the way Mummy Blob does.
  • Create Your Own Disgusting Blob: Fold a blank page in half. On the left, draw your blob during the day (chaotic, sticky, maybe throwing slime). On the right, draw the same blob at bedtime (pajamas, story time, tucked into a “lovely damp” pillow). Add labels like “bed goo,” “eyestalk warmer,” “charging cable,” etc.
  • Make a Monster Bedtime Chart: Draw a list of nighttime steps for a new monster: brushing fangs, folding wings, feeding pets, etc. Add silly drawings and sound effects for each step.
  • Monster Room Design: Imagine what the Blob’s bedroom looks like. Sketch or collage it. What’s on the walls? What’s under the bed? What counts as “cozy” in a monster world?
  • Books, Books, and More Books! Check out these picture books that celebrate bedtime, comfort, and slightly chaotic evenings:

Good Night, Little Monster by Helen Ketteman, illustrated by Bonnie Leick
A bedtime routine book where a young monster resists sleep while Monster Mama patiently guides the process.


Library Lion by Michelle Knudsen, illustrated by Kevin Hawkes
A gentle, love-​the-​library story about calm, rules, and care at closing time.


Llama Llama Red Pajama by Anna Dewdney
Classic panic-​at-​bedtime energy filled with big feelings, reassurance, and a loving reminder that comfort always returns.


Pigeon Needs a Bath! by Mo Willems
One very opinionated pigeon insists he’s perfectly clean until bath time finally turns into bubbles, calm, and bedtime readiness.


The Quickest Bedtime Story Ever! by Louise Fitzgerald, illustrated by Kate Hindley
A fast-​talking narrator tries to rush a kid to sleep in record time, with silly interruptions and increasingly desperate bargaining — great for bedtime power struggles.

Author Interview: Keyshawn Johnson & Bettina Bush

Each year, I work as a ghostwriter on a few celebrity kidlit projects. No oneKeyshawn Johnson Wants the N.F.L. to Remember Its ‘Forgotten Four ... knows which ones, of course. That’s the “ghost” part of the equation.

Every so often, I get to collaborate instead of ghost, which means I can actually talk about the process. Today’s post is about one of those rare projects: a picture book I co-​created with Super Bowl champion and sports commentator Keyshawn Johnson and voice actress and singer Bettina Bush.

Once Upon a You—Keyshawn’s first picture book—shows kids everywhere that they’re the authors of their own destinies. Let’s hear more from Keyshawn and Bettina about the book, their creative process, and their friendship.Bettina Bush | Host, Speaker, Voice Artist & Advocate for Multiculturalism


RVC: So, the two of you are a creative powerhouse. How did your relationship first begin?

BB: That’s a funny story actually! [Laughs] About 15 years ago.…

KJ: Bettina and I go way back. We’re neighbors and she was walking down the street with her baby daughter. I came out the front door and Cassie pointed at me and said, “Daddy!” [Laughs]

Bettina was like “You look nothing like my husband but she must be thinking of my dad!” It was an immediate friendship. Bettina and my wife Jen are very tight and our kids and families have always been close.

RVC: When did you first realize you might want to create something together?

BB: It sort of evolved naturally. We’d talk about our kids, about legacy, and about how powerful stories can be in shaping who we become. One day we realized—wait, this is the story we should be telling.

KJ: Bettina’s got this incredible creative energy, so when she said let’s start with a children’s book and see where we want to go from there, I said, “Okay, I trust you.  Let’s go!”

RVC: Hah. Love it.

KJ: And I’ll definitely say we’re just getting started.

RVC: What drew you both to picture books—and this idea in particular?

BB: I’ve always believed stories are the bridge between imagination and identity. Picture books are where that starts. You see yourself reflected in these beautiful images and words, and it shapes the way you dream.

RVC: Absolutely!

KJ: Picture books are special. They’re one of the first places where a kid starts to dream big. I’ve read to my kids plenty of nights, and I know the kind of magic that happens when a story really lands. This idea—Once Upon a You—was about showing kids that their story matters, that they have control over their own path. That spoke to both of us.

RVC: The title Once Upon a You sounds like an invitation. How did that phrase come about?

KJ: We wanted something that felt classic, like a fairy tale—but flipped. “Once upon a time” is what we all know, but this is your story. You’re you. When Bettina said “Once Upon a You,” I was like, “That’s it right there.” It’s simple, but powerful.

RVC: Keyshawn, what surprised you most about the world of children’s publishing once you jumped in?

KJ: How collaborative it is. I mean, I’ve been part of teams my whole life, but this is a different kind of teamwork. There are editors, illustrators, designers—all focused on every detail to make sure it connects. And I’ll be real, I didn’t know how much time and heart goes into one 32-​page book. It’s a grind, but a rewarding one.

RVC: Bettina, as someone who’s worked in voice and music, how did your storytelling instincts translate into this medium?

BB: It’s actually very natural. Music, voice acting, writing—they all come from rhythm and emotion. With picture books, you’re writing a kind of song. Every line has a cadence, every page turn is a beat. You have to feel the flow of it. My background in performing helps me hear the story in my head—the tone, the warmth, the rise and fall. It’s all about creating an emotional melody through words.

RVC: What did collaboration look like day-​to-​day? Were you trading drafts, voice notes, Zoom calls, or late-​night texts?

KJ: All of the above! [Laughs]

We’d text ideas at random hours, hop on calls, send each other notes—it was constant communication. We both have busy lives, but when something feels right creatively, you find the time. It was like running a two-​minute drill, but for storytelling.

BB: The energy was always flowing. What made it special was that there was such mutual respect—we trust each other’s instincts, and that made the process really joyful.

RVC: How did seeing the illustrations for the first time change how you felt about the story?

BB: That was honestly magical. When we saw the art come to life, I teared up. You have this vision in your mind, and then suddenly there it is, breathing and full of color and emotion. The illustrator captured the heart of the story perfectly—it was like watching your imagination step off the page and smile back at you.

KJ: Oh man, that was emotional. The first time I saw the art, it hit me how real it all was. You write these words, you talk about concepts, but when an illustrator brings that to life—it’s like seeing your vision walk off the page. It gave me chills.

RVC: The book’s message—“you’re the author of your own destiny”—feels both empowering and personal. Why was that message important to you?

BB: Because it’s true for every single one of us. I’ve lived many creative lives—music, acting, producing—and through all of it, I’ve learned that no one writes your story but you. I want every child to feel that sense of agency and possibility. That message is something I live by, and it’s something I want to gift to my own kids and to every reader.

RVC: Love it. How about for you, Key? 

KJ: Because that’s my life, straight up. I wasn’t handed anything. I had to work, stay focused, believe in myself even when others didn’t. That’s what I want kids to understand—it doesn’t matter where you start, you have the power to shape your story. That’s the message I wish someone had told me when I was young.

RVC: Was there a line or image in the book that hit you emotionally once it was on the page?

BB: There’s a moment that talks about “the light that lives inside you.” That one really got me. It’s such a simple line, but it holds so much truth. We all have that light—it just needs to be seen, nurtured, and believed in. Seeing that line surrounded by such beautiful illustrations—it gave me goosebumps.

KJ: The part where it talks about “the moments that make you you.” That hit me hard. It reminded me of my kids, my journey, all the things that shaped me along the way. It’s not just about success—it’s about identity, and being proud of who you are.

RVC: What do you hope kids (and parents) take away after reading Once Upon a You together?

BB: I hope they take away a sense of wonder and ownership over their stories. For kids, that they can dream big and define who they are. For parents, I hope it opens up conversations about self-​belief and creativity—and maybe even helps them see themselves through their children’s eyes again.

KJ: For kids, I want them to know they’re capable of amazing things and to ignore anyone who tells them otherwise. For parents, I hope it sparks conversations—about dreams, resilience, and love. Reading together can be such a grounding moment.

RVC: Since COVID, I often ask a health and wellness question in OPB interviews. With both of you being so busy with work and family, I’m really curious—what do you do to destress? 

BB: Music is my therapy. I’ll sing, write, or just put on a playlist and let myself breathe. And honestly, being outside helps—whether walking my dog, going to the beach, or just sitting in the sun. I also try to unplug and be present with my family.

KJ: For me, it’s simple—working out, getting outside, spending time with my family. I need that balance. I’ll hit the gym, then come home and just watch a game with my kids. That’s the reset button right there.

RVC: So, every author interview at OPB has two parts: the main interview, and then the SPEED ROUND. And it’s time to get zippy. Are you both ready for quick questions and fast answers?

BB: Yep!

KJ: Let’s do it!

RVC: What’s one thing fans would be surprised to learn about you?

BB: I climbed Mt. Kilimanjaro when my kids were little!

KJ: I can’t swim.

RVC: What snack fuels your creativity?

BB: French fries with ranch.

KJ: Chips and really good salsa.

RVC: You can invite any three people—real or fictional—to storytime. Who’s on the rug?

BB: My dad and my two kids. I’d give anything to watch them together at this age.  I’m 100% certain they’d blow each other’s minds in the best ways.

KJ: Three kids who don’t have books.

RVC: If Once Upon a You had a mascot, what would it be?

BB: A butterfly. Magical growth and beauty.

KJ: Probably a lion. Courage and heart—the stuff we want kids to feel when they read the book.

RVC: A picture book you loved as a kid that still sticks with you?

BB: Where the Wild Things Are. It’s about imagination, courage, and coming home to yourself. That story never leaves you—it grows with you.

KJ: The Giving Tree. That one’s timeless. Simple message, deep meaning. I’ve read it to my kids too, and it still hits the same.

RVC: What’s one word that captures Once Upon a You?

BB: Becoming. Because it’s all about the journey of who you are, who you’ve been, and who you’re meant to be.

KJ: Empowerment. That’s it. It’s about owning your story—no matter where it starts or where it goes.

RVC: That was terrific—thank you both for sharing the behind-​the-​scenes magic!