Picture Book Review: The Ribbon by Tessa Blackham

The Ribbon
Author: Tessa Blackham
Illustrator: Tessa Blackham
Atheneum Books for Young Readers
29 September 2026
40 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

Anytime OPB covers a wordless or nearly wordless picture book, I ask myself–do I skip my part? Should the artist do the entire review? Let’s see.

The premise is rather simple. A young dancer freezes up when it’s showtime. Instead of facing the stage, she slips off and hides. It seems important to note that the girl loves dancing and has practiced, practiced, practiced. Her anxiety never comes across as stemming from being unprepared. With almost no text on the page, the storytelling has to make those feelings clear without explaining them.

The few words that appear (“time to go” and “time to hide”) carry a lot of weight. I almost read them as section or chapter headings for the emotional plotline.

The seasoned dancer who finds the girl hiding handles things so impressively. Even if this book had hundreds of words, I don’t think there’d be a pep talk or lecture. The red ribbon she gives the young girl works as emotional shorthand. That small gesture ends up carrying the story a lot farther than I imagined it could.

We watch the young dancer grow older and have a minor crisis when the ribbon is misplaced. But she steps onstage without it and performs wonderfully. This keeps the ribbon from becoming some magical talisman. And when she finds another young dancer hiding as she once did, she knows just what to do.

Passing on that ribbon is an act of kindness that can move from person to person. Yes, this is a story about confidence and performing, but it’s also about remembering who helped you along the way and how you can–and probably should–help others down the road, too.

The Ribbon is a lovely book with a quiet-​but-​vital message that rises above the expected “believe in yourself” angle.

4.25 out of 5 red ribbons


—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

It’s impossible to discuss the artwork in The Ribbon without discussing the story a bit, because author-​illustrator Tessa Blackham has created a truly integrated sequential narrative spare on verbiage, but full of emotional impact. So, pardon me if I intrude on Ryan’s territory a little this time.

Blackham’s masterfully crafted layouts summarize better than words the work that goes into perfecting a craft, and becoming the best version of yourself you can be The time and effort and attention that goes into pursuing a dream, only to be faced with unexpected and seemingly insurmountable barriers in its pursuit

Through point-​of-​view panels, we can sense the ballerina’s fear, and her sense of becoming as she basks in the spotlight. Beautifully charming and exquisitely paced sequences cause the reader to become as attached to the ribbon as the dancer is.

The cartooning is direct and approachable, from gestural pencil-​and-​watercolor sketches to more rendered conté crayon and stenciled compositions full of subtext, and the same deceptively effortless movements as the dancer’s. Finding a satisfying dynamic range between the pastels chosen to represent the ballerina’s world is no small feat, but the scenes never feel muted or washed out. Each sumptuously textural page portrays stage light (and offstage light) as convincingly subtle and stark by turns. Just like ballet, the drawings seem to come alive and hover midair, untouched by gravity.

Through it all, the ribbon entwines a visual cue for the support of the masters and fellow artists from whom we learn and draw inspiration. Blackham’s ballerina learns a powerful lesson for children and the modern world about the self-​discovery that happens between wishing to be able to do a thing, actually learning how, and passing it on.

5 out of 5 conté crayons


Austin McKinley is the creator of the graphic novel RIOT Force: Tools of the Rich, and the illustrator of Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia and Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 6: Blood for Blood for Source Point Press. His most recent comic/​video game series, Stellarator, invades in February 2027 from Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: How Do You Eat Color? by Mabi David, illustrated by Yas Doctor, translated by Karen Llagas

Author: Mabi David
Translator: Karen Llagas
Illustrator: Yas Doctor
Eerdmans Books for Young Readers
12 March 2024
40 pages
This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

Some books teach. Some books delight. How Do You Eat Color? does both, inviting readers on a sensory journey through a rainbow of foods. Originally published in the Philippines and translated by Karen Llagas, Mabi David’s text transforms something as simple as eating fruits and vegetables into a bright, imaginative experience.

Right from the opening lines, David frames color as something to be savored: “Do you know how red tastes? Does it tickle the tongue?” The text moves like a poem, full of playful repetition and evocative phrasing that encourages readers to think about food in new ways. Colors are seen, yes, but they’re also felt, smelled, and experienced. Green is crisp and fresh in leafy greens, yellow is syrupy sweet in mangoes, and purple sighs into the deep quiet of night. The language invites young readers to slow down and engage with their senses, making the book as much about mindfulness as it is about nutrition.

One of the book’s strengths is how naturally it weaves in food literacy without ever feeling like a lesson. Instead of a straightforward “eat the rainbow” message, David embeds the idea within a day’s journey, letting readers explore colors through time—waking up to the brightness of tomatoes and pineapples, winding down with the earthy comfort of yams and plums. This structure gives the book a gentle rhythm, making it a soothing read-​aloud that works well for bedtime or storytime.

Adding to the book’s depth is its robust back matter, which expands on the nutritional and cultural significance of various fruits and vegetables. It introduces young readers to foods they may not be familiar with—moringa, bitter melon, and dragon fruit, among others—while explaining their health benefits and offering ideas on how to try them. There’s also a section on how families can incorporate more plant-​based foods into their diets, reinforcing the book’s gentle encouragement toward curiosity and exploration.

If there’s one small area where the book might not connect with every reader, it’s that the experience is more sensory than story-​driven. The poetic style is engaging, and the journey through colors is immersive, but some readers may wish for a clearer narrative thread tying the moments together. Rather than following a traditional plot, the book leans into mood and atmosphere, which makes it a rich and inviting read but may leave some younger listeners looking for a bit more structure.

That said, How Do You Eat Color? is a fun celebration of food, culture, and the joy of discovery. Fans of April Pulley Sayre’s Rah, Rah, Radishes! (for its joyful food exploration) will likely appreciate what David has created here. Paired with Yas Doctor’s lush, textured illustrations (which Austin will dive into below), this is a book that encourages kids to engage with food using all their senses—one delectable color at a time.

4.25 out of 5 fruit baskets

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

It seems almost like gilding the lily to describe illustrations that are visual poetry on their own. They really need to be seen to be experienced.

Over the course of 13 incredibly colorful spreads, two young children and a friendly chameleon explore landscapes of giant fruit and veg that are as delicious to look at as it is implied they taste.

A landscape of house-​sized pineapples as far as the eye can see, mangondolas, and regiments of carrots. A citrus sunset, a garlic clove clutch and plum pillows.

Especially fun is the fact that, since this book originated in the Philippines, the selection of edibles includes options not often featured in American children’s books. Dragon fruit, red beans, hibiscus and rambutan all make an appearance.

It’s a figurative turn for artist Yas Doctor, whose Instagram features more abstract work in a fine art vein. It’s definitely worth exploring if you like the watercolor washes and whimsical cartooning.

Yas Doctor’s bio in the jacket describes a love of gardening, and that clearly translates to the lavishly textural treatment of the plant matter that populates each of these artworks.

There is objective work—line art and kinetic shapes—to be seen in her online portfolio @heypatatas, as interesting and conceptual as the work in the book. It’s easy to see why she was a good choice for the project.

Nothing in that catalog, however, suggests the kind of horticultural focus and variety of palette we see displayed in How Do You Eat Color? We can be glad she had the opportunity to explore this medium and creative brief, too.

Aimed at very young readers—think Very Hungry Caterpillar—How Do You Eat Color? makes an equally valid scientific observation: fruits that are especially colorful and pleasing to the eye are also the most nutrient rich and healthful.

The point is made that a variety of multicolored plant life on your plate is more than aesthetically appealing, it’s a good nutritional strategy too.

Also that if you live in an incredibly colorful landscape, a chameleon capable of reflecting it makes an especially beautiful pet.

Your little one will no doubt be entranced by the imaginative world of How Do You Eat Color? and perhaps enticed to eat their vegetables, too!

4 out of 5 melon moons


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.

Most recently, he illustrated graphic novel Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, and wrote and illustrated RIOT Force: Tools of the Rich, a creator-​owned graphic novel, both for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: Daisy the Daydreamer by Jennifer P. Goldfinger

DAISY THE DAYDREAMER

Neal Porter Books
12 March 2024
32 pages
This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

Daisy the Daydreamer is more than just a charming picture book; it’s a useful lesson in the power of “show, don’t tell” storytelling. In this new picture book, Jennifer P. Goldfinger uses vivid language and relatable scenarios to paint a picture of Daisy’s imaginative world without ever explicitly labeling her a daydreamer beyond the title. However, it’s worth noting that other picture books share the exact same “Daisy the Daydreamer” title, which makes me wonder if another option might be more effective.

The book’s opening lines immediately set the stage: “She walks with her feet on the ground and her head in the clouds.” This simple image evokes a sense of whimsical distraction, subtly introducing the core theme. The story continues weaving this theme through Daisy’s daily life. Instead of telling us she’s lost in thought, we see it visually through the expressive illustrations that often depict her battling a whimsical cloud of distraction–Austin will talk about that in more detail in a moment. This creative choice allows young readers to discover Daisy’s personality for themselves, making the connection stronger.

The book also understands the importance of emotional beats. When Daisy initially misses her chance to be line leader, the weight of her disappointment is palpable. Goldfinger uses simple language (“Daisy’s cloud rains”) and a shift in the illustrations to convey her sadness. This emotional authenticity allows readers to empathize with Daisy, making her triumph all the sweeter.

The resolution, where Daisy’s artistic ability earns her a special role, is well done. It affirms that while daydreaming might get in the way sometimes, our unique perspectives and talents hold value. This message is delivered organically through the narrative, making it far more impactful than a direct statement.

While Daisy the Daydreamer is endearing, it does leave room for deeper exploration. Subtly hinting at learning differences without explicitly naming them aligns with the author’s intent, as revealed in her note, but might be even more impactful with direct exploration. Additionally, a more nuanced ending hinting at Daisy’s continuing journey could offer an additional level to readers.

Overall, Goldfinger’s new picture book is a example of how picture books can teach valuable lessons about self-​expression and finding your place in the world. Its gentle storytelling and heartwarming message will likely resonate with child and adult readers alike.

4 out of 5 pencils

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

Bias alert–one of the themes of “Daisy the Daydreamer” is that what artists have to offer–our leadership, our value, our specialness–can be in knowing just what to draw for the occasion. Cartoonist Jennifer P. Goldfinger exemplifies that perfectly in Daisy, synthesizing both text and visual language to create a gestalt few writer/​illustrator teams achieve. To enrich the words of this charming coming-​of-​age story, Goldfinger has developed a sophisticated primitivism that seems childlike at first blush but unfolds with layers of adroit observation and intentional playfulness. Easy to suggest, hard to accomplish.

Look at how the texture in the mother’s polka dots are postmarks from Geneva, or how the print of the teacher’s dress is text from a dictionary. How the back of a sketchbook clutched to the chest creates an interaction with the surrounding white space. The gentle pools of watercolor that both ground us in the world or envelop us in each cleverly staged narrative moment. All of it embellishes Goldfinger’s expressive cartooning of the figure in the simplest terms. How Daisy slouches at her desk, grovels in supplication, beams with delight.

The lifting of the story is shared–sometimes carried by the text, sometimes the picture alone, shifting seamlessly between showing and telling to say only what most needs to be said.

No child or adult who needs this story could fail to identify with the visual shorthand of Daisy’s head enveloped in a swirling cloud of ideas and possibilities, constantly making lateral connections from a deep well of imagination. Nor miss the danger of being too disconnected from the here and now.

Whether it’s the cloud of daydreams raining or drawing Daisy high into the stratosphere of opportunity, the artwork perfectly captures the emotional subtext of the story. They show you how it feels to be in it. The frustration of struggling to keep the clouds of creativity from your eyes long enough to capture words you should be hearing before they tumble to the floor. Of being weighed down by it, and occasionally, using it to express an idea that can’t be expressed in any other way.

Even if the reader isn’t a person challenged with occasionally discordant aptitudes, seeing how it feels can only help in the development of empathy and support for those so blessed. Through Jennifer Goldfinger’s compelling narrative illustrations, anybody can see what it feels like to be Daisy, and thereby know the Daisys in their lives a little better.

4 out of 5 crayons


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.

Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel, BLAZE ya Dead Homie, a one-​shot comic book, and wrote and illustrated RIOT Force, a creator-​owned comic series for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: I’m Gonna Paint: Ralph Fasanella, Artist of the People by Anne Broyles, illustrated by Victoria Tentler-Krylov

Holiday House
7 November 2023
48 pages
This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

I’m Gonna Paint: Ralph Fasanella, Artist of the People, authored by Anne Broyles and vibrantly illustrated by Victoria Tentler-​Krylov, is a welcome children’s picture book that paints a portrait of Ralph Fasanella’s life with the same fervor and detail the artist himself devoted to his canvases. The book captures Ralph’s journey from a tenacious New York kid to an iconic artist, echoing his dedication to portraying the working-​class experience.

Broyles’ prose dances between simplicity and evocativeness, achieving a balance that engages young readers while touching on mature themes. For instance, in describing Ralph’s early life, Broyles writes, “Ralph often wandered the city until dinnertime, observing the colors, shapes, and textures of the glowing streetlights against the brick buildings. Instead of going to school, he taught himself how to read by studying newspapers on the subway.” Such language not only builds Ralph’s world but also immerses the reader in the symphony of city life that influenced his art.

Tentler-​Krylov’s illustrations must be praised for their dynamism and how they echo Fasanella’s own style—bold, colorful, and brimming with narrative. One can almost feel the texture of the city’s energy in the spread that captures Ralph amidst the clamor and chaos of a labor protest. I’ll let Austin say more about that below in his part.

The narrative deftly weaves Fasanella’s passion for social justice with his artistic development. In a powerful scene, Broyles describes how “It took Ralph three years to create eighteen paintings of workers protesting, union leaders making speeches, militiamen with bayonets, mill owners watching from inside the mills, and more. It was his masterpiece.” This parallel between Ralph’s art and the movement of the American workforce underscores the book’s theme of solidarity and community.

Geared towards children aged 4–8, the book doesn’t shy away from difficult topics like labor rights, instead presenting them through the lens of art and storytelling, making complex concepts a bit more accessible and relatable. The story champions the idea that everyone has the power to create change, aligning with current educational values promoting agency and expression.

In sum, I’m Gonna Paint is an homage to a self-​made artist and a call to recognize the beauty and power in one’s own creativity. It’s a vivid reminder of art’s ability to capture and change the zeitgeist, likely resonating with young readers, educators, and parents for its depth and beauty.

4 out of 5 pencils

 

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

For an illustrator to tackle a children’s book celebrating the life and work of a recognizable modern artist is no simple undertaking. Especially when the artist in question is a primitive whose primary subject matter is a psychological impression of the world in which he grew up. It means that a lot of the reductionist tools an illustrator might use to simplify, streamline, and evoke the spirit of the book’s hero conflict with the journalistic need to echo the subject’s own sensibility; to represent his world, work, and legacy in a specific and recognizable way.

In short, how was Victoria Tentler-​Krylov supposed to give us a picture book that looked and felt like the world as artist Ralph Fasanella saw it, and pay homage to that interpretation without directly imitating his style? How, indeed, can a reviewer begin to describe the work of one without comparing and contrasting it with the other? It is reviewing an interpretation of an interpretation. And yet, Tentler-​Krylov surmounts this challenge with impressive skill, sensitivity and grace, so I will attempt to follow her example.

As an immigrant son, reform school survivor, and former labor organizer, when Ralph Fasanella became a self-​taught painter later in life, he took a forthright and direct approach to create a visual chronicle of the lived experience of the people and the world that he knew, as well as those of his parent’s generation. He drew heavily on the kinds of visual shorthand any illustrator might use to communicate their ideas. X‑ray projections, flattened perspectives, subjective color, expressive as well as descriptive mark-​making, and panels that guide the eye through a juxtaposition of scale are all visual syntax a picture book illustrator especially might rely upon regardless of the biographical subject.

Unfazed, Tentler-​Krylov supplies many touches of her own that make her vision of Fasanella’s epic world uniquely hers, even as it complements Fasanella’s. Her colors are ever so slightly more naturalistic and objective, her perspective and compositions as grounded as they are whimsical, her focus more sharply moment to moment. Her Van Gogh-​esque, Post-​Impressionist hatching used with even more deliberate intent. Where Fasanella described the timelessness of a specific world, its moments played out cyclically like the thrum of a thousand sewing machines, Tentler-​Krylov gives us specific moments in time surrounding the life of an individual person, and by extension, a hint of the seeds of the artistic vision those experiences would germinate.

Compare the family supper Tentler-​Krylov shows us on page 11 with the one Fasanella painted in 1972. Where Fasanella’s depictions of people were hauntingly expressionless, his architecture shaky and his tone somewhat inscrutable beyond the circumstantial, Tentler-Krylov’s settings crackle with life, her dynamic gestures and characterizations sharpened by the wit of a master cartoonist and observer. We can practically smell the bread on the table. Where Fasanella’s compositions are grand and sprawling, Tentler-Krylov’s are as inventive and immediate as any in the medium without ever letting you forget it’s the life of an artist with a very specific vision she’s depicting. In the hands of a lesser illustrator, intimate vignettes like Fasanella stretching canvas or imagining the world he intends to paint as he contemplates the easel wouldn’t have nearly the power they do here.

And as generationally timely as Fasanella’s work was in his era, Tentler-Krylov’s work in this volume is equally so. Especially powerful is the image of Fasanella as a sixty-​year-​old artist in the 1970s, striding palette in hand through a crowd of striking textile workers in Lawrence Massachusetts circa 1912. Also poignant are the illustrations of modern viewers, swirling in a kind of observational dance around representations of Fasanella paintings. If Fasanella’s work spoke to the power of art to transport a viewer to a time and place and thus keep the lessons of humanity alive, one generation to the next, Tentler-Krylov’s illustrations here do the same. And if Fasanella’s paintings helped in some way to create empathy in viewers for the workers and their families he depicted en masse, Tentler-Krylov’s illustrations create empathy for the scion of a single working family. She shares his tumultuous upbringing with us, and through it the artistic drive, passion, dedication and conscience that gave those workers he championed a voice.

5 out of 5 crayons


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.

Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel, BLAZE ya Dead Homie, a one-​shot comic book, and wrote and illustrated RIOT Force, a creator-​owned comic series for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: Library Girl: How Nancy Pearl Became America’s Most Celebrated Librarian, by Karen Henry Clark

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

Karen Henry Clark’s new picture book, Library Girl, shares the story of how Detroit native Nancy Pearl transformed her childhood love for books into a lifelong mission. From the start, Nancy was able to ignore how her peers teased her because her best friends were in books (“all those characters tucked into pages”). Clark cleverly uses bookish language throughout the text, such as how when the school librarian told Pearl about a nearby public library that was open on Saturdays, “Hope fluttered like pages turning in Nancy’s heart.”

Two sweet librarians at the public library encouraged Nancy’s imagination and her love for horses (Nancy had toy horses in her bedroom and she even imagined her bicycle was a horse named Charger). Though she hid her new library books to avoid more teasing, Nancy “read through rows of fantasies, trilogies, diaries, anthologies, dictionaries, histories, biographies, and mysteries.” And as so often happens to voracious young readers, all those stories led to this powerful realization–“I can be anything when I grow up.”

Nancy didn’t remain a solitary bookworm. When her librarian friends asked her to give a talk about horse books to the other kids, she couldn’t say no. Their belief in her was that strong, though she was understandably nervous. Even a spill on her bike en route to the library to give the talk didn’t spoil things. The other kids were “spellbound,” and when she was done, they clapped and the librarians “glowed.” I’ll let Austin talk about the art but I’ll add that many of the spreads have a magical glow to them, even when Nancy’s imagination isn’t being depicted in action.

After Nancy’s successful talk, the book fast-​forwards to where she has found her future as an adult librarian who helps other kids discover their own magic in books. An Author’s Note explains some of Nancy’s successes as a champion for books, reading, and libraries, though one of the most memorable moments is Nancy’s response to being challenged to write a six-​word memoir: “Girl discovers books, then discovers life.” The back matter also briefly lists awards Nancy won, books she wrote, and recognition she received.

While Nancy Pearl isn’t a household name, her sweet, empowering story will resonate with many readers. Book lovers, teachers, and librarians in specific will surely see some part of themselves in Library Girl.

4.5 out of 5 pencils

 

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

It may seem obvious to say the work of an illustrator is to supply the “show” in “show and tell;” to provide tone and context beyond the reach of words alone. That’s exactly what Sheryl Murray’s depictions of the world of librarian Nancy Pearl’s childhood in the early 1950s accomplish.

Of the five books Murray has illustrated to date, Library Girl is the only one with a non-​fiction, biographical subject, but Murray’s fanciful sensibilities serve her well here, infusing Nancy’s experience with constant companions in sparkling azure shades, especially horses. Each scene is suffused with a magical pastel glow, a consistent palette perfectly suited to the romanticism of Nancy’s imagination. We would be remiss, however, if we failed to appreciate the subtle clues that set the mise en scene firmly in its historical context–the rolled-​up jeans, the milkman, and who could fail to be inspired by the palatial renderings of Detroit’s Parkman Branch Library?

An author herself as well as an illustrator, Murray’s firm grasp of visual storytelling are on dramatic display here. Beyond the warmth and approachability of Murray’s style, her framing and inclusion of evocative elements of the narrative add a textural richness to the reading experience: the dotted line of the map to the library, the bird landing nearby when the text mentions fluttering pages. The pulled back pictures that underscore Nancy’s emotional state when she feels small and insecure, the shots over her shoulder that put us in her black and white saddle shoes, which is especially appropriate in the story of a librarian who famously encouraged everyone in Seattle to read the same book at the same time. Murray’s illustrations allow us to see through Nancy’s eyes without telling us exactly how to feel. They give us permission to ask ourselves–as Nancy’s librarian mentors do–what helps us feel brave?

Nancy Pearl’s accomplished career as a librarian focused on outreach has been about understanding through shared experiences in books, and Murray’s charming compositions help enrich just such an experience for us–the readers of Nancy’s story.

4.5 out of 5 crayons


 

Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.
Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: Mommy’s Hometown by Hope Lim

Author: Hope Lim
Illustrator: Jaime Kim
Candlewick
12 April 2022
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Joshua Walls (an OPB newcomer!) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.


—Joshua’s Review of the Writing—

Hope Lim’s third picture book, Mommy’s Hometown, shares a timeless story about a young child who travels overseas with his mother to visit her childhood hometown in South Korea. Despite his surprise at discovering how much her town has changed since she left, he can still relive his mother’s memories while creating new ones with her.

Every night at home, as part of their bedtime routine, the mother paints vivid pictures of her memories for her son. “She and her friends would walk to the river and play there all day. They caught fish, unearthed treasures beneath rocks, splashed each other, and dried themselves on the pebbled riverbank.” As a boy, I dreamed about where my family members grew up, and even today, I still do this with my friends living abroad, creating colorful images in my mind. When a story tugs at your memories, you know you’re in for a treat.

After listening to all his mother’s stories, the day finally comes for the boy to visit the town he has only imagined. Upon arriving, however, he discovers that it’s different. The little town he pictured has become a bustling city. “The new replaced the old,” his mother explains. The son doubts it’s the same place his mother grew up, but with help from his family, he overcomes uncertainties and discovers the town he envisioned in the present.

I adore how the story ends. The son and his mother visit the river where they play together, and the son discovers his mother’s younger side. Then, hearing Grandma call to them, the boy and his mother “run home together,” allowing the reader to reflect on the joy of shared moments. I’ll let Austin go into detail about the art, but I love the final illustrations of the mother and son, both as kids running home through the town the boy always imagined. The last page slowly resets back to reality, with both characters clearly having the time of their lives. These three pages make an already compelling story even more impactful.

Lim uses simple language that’ll make the reader finds themselves wanting to share their childhood tales as they tell her story. The son’s character arc is delightful. While it never hurts to get help, the boy shakes off his doubts and accepts the town’s changes, allowing him to build his own childhood memories. His experiences provide wonderful discussion opportunities. The reader can reassure a child that changes may happen, but change is okay. While things may not always be as we imagine, we may discover they’re even better.

Lim narrates a gentle, heartfelt story that I absolutely loved reading. It reminds me a lot of my hometown, Duluth, Georgia, and how it continues to evolve from a small Atlanta suburb into a prosperous, diverse community, rich in its own history. Mommy’s Hometown captures how places may appear different than described. It’s wonderful when a picture book taps into a timeless theme. I look forward to one day reading this story with my own curious child.

4.75 out of 5 unearthed treasures

 

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

It’s the trip of a lifetime for the child narrator, as he discovers the world of his mother’s bedtime stories is neither as he imagined nor as she described them, because time has moved on. As Hope Lim crafts this tale of a child first confronted with the four-​dimensional shape of the world, illustrator Jaime Kim brings the experience to life in a series of lush two-​page spreads and sequential vignettes which give a subtle glow to both natural and urban landscapes.

Kim is a #1 New York Times bestselling illustrator, and it’s easy to see why. Her figures are universal, simplistic, yet evocative–all that’s necessary to imagine ourselves in their place. The characters are, in a sense, background to the lovingly rendered environment. And yet, when she depicts the child and mother at the same age, running through the laneway hand in hand, its emotional impact is devastating.

By contrast, the landscapes are very specific, but with masterful depth of field, they create just enough detail and texture to make them visceral and sentimental without being saccharine. It’s a genuine experience to which we can easily relate as a child first learns to contemplate the impermanence of life–those things that are timeless, and those that are not.

The pairing of Kim’s paintbrush with this weighty, poignant subject matter is pitch perfect. Perhaps the most so of any of her fifteen books to date. Her eye for creating a toy-​like world and playing with perspective without tilt-​shifting into miniaturization, is on glorious display here. Having seen her realize Lim’s narrative, one can hardly imagine anyone else doing it so well. Readers are so deftly embedded in the world of the artwork that they can almost feel the winds of change blowing through the characters’ hair. Exquisite.

**For an idea of what that looks like, you can check out Kim’s deliciously charming illustrations in animated GIFs on her website.**

5 out of 5 crayons


Joshua Walls is a children’s author and travel writer who isn’t afraid to fuse, challenge, or deconstruct genres in the pursuit of creating compelling stories. Currently, he lives in Sarasota, FL where he’s pursuing a BFA in Creative Writing at Ringling College of Art and Design. He’s also the co-​founder and co-​host of the Fluff It podcast.


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.
Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel for Source Point Press.