Picture Book Review: Daisy the Daydreamer by Jennifer P. Goldfinger

DAISY THE DAYDREAMER

Neal Porter Books
12 March 2024
32 pages
This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

Daisy the Daydreamer is more than just a charming picture book; it’s a useful lesson in the power of “show, don’t tell” storytelling. In this new picture book, Jennifer P. Goldfinger uses vivid language and relatable scenarios to paint a picture of Daisy’s imaginative world without ever explicitly labeling her a daydreamer beyond the title. However, it’s worth noting that other picture books share the exact same “Daisy the Daydreamer” title, which makes me wonder if another option might be more effective.

The book’s opening lines immediately set the stage: “She walks with her feet on the ground and her head in the clouds.” This simple image evokes a sense of whimsical distraction, subtly introducing the core theme. The story continues weaving this theme through Daisy’s daily life. Instead of telling us she’s lost in thought, we see it visually through the expressive illustrations that often depict her battling a whimsical cloud of distraction–Austin will talk about that in more detail in a moment. This creative choice allows young readers to discover Daisy’s personality for themselves, making the connection stronger.

The book also understands the importance of emotional beats. When Daisy initially misses her chance to be line leader, the weight of her disappointment is palpable. Goldfinger uses simple language (“Daisy’s cloud rains”) and a shift in the illustrations to convey her sadness. This emotional authenticity allows readers to empathize with Daisy, making her triumph all the sweeter.

The resolution, where Daisy’s artistic ability earns her a special role, is well done. It affirms that while daydreaming might get in the way sometimes, our unique perspectives and talents hold value. This message is delivered organically through the narrative, making it far more impactful than a direct statement.

While Daisy the Daydreamer is endearing, it does leave room for deeper exploration. Subtly hinting at learning differences without explicitly naming them aligns with the author’s intent, as revealed in her note, but might be even more impactful with direct exploration. Additionally, a more nuanced ending hinting at Daisy’s continuing journey could offer an additional level to readers.

Overall, Goldfinger’s new picture book is a example of how picture books can teach valuable lessons about self-​expression and finding your place in the world. Its gentle storytelling and heartwarming message will likely resonate with child and adult readers alike.

4 out of 5 pencils

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

Bias alert–one of the themes of “Daisy the Daydreamer” is that what artists have to offer–our leadership, our value, our specialness–can be in knowing just what to draw for the occasion. Cartoonist Jennifer P. Goldfinger exemplifies that perfectly in Daisy, synthesizing both text and visual language to create a gestalt few writer/​illustrator teams achieve. To enrich the words of this charming coming-​of-​age story, Goldfinger has developed a sophisticated primitivism that seems childlike at first blush but unfolds with layers of adroit observation and intentional playfulness. Easy to suggest, hard to accomplish.

Look at how the texture in the mother’s polka dots are postmarks from Geneva, or how the print of the teacher’s dress is text from a dictionary. How the back of a sketchbook clutched to the chest creates an interaction with the surrounding white space. The gentle pools of watercolor that both ground us in the world or envelop us in each cleverly staged narrative moment. All of it embellishes Goldfinger’s expressive cartooning of the figure in the simplest terms. How Daisy slouches at her desk, grovels in supplication, beams with delight.

The lifting of the story is shared–sometimes carried by the text, sometimes the picture alone, shifting seamlessly between showing and telling to say only what most needs to be said.

No child or adult who needs this story could fail to identify with the visual shorthand of Daisy’s head enveloped in a swirling cloud of ideas and possibilities, constantly making lateral connections from a deep well of imagination. Nor miss the danger of being too disconnected from the here and now.

Whether it’s the cloud of daydreams raining or drawing Daisy high into the stratosphere of opportunity, the artwork perfectly captures the emotional subtext of the story. They show you how it feels to be in it. The frustration of struggling to keep the clouds of creativity from your eyes long enough to capture words you should be hearing before they tumble to the floor. Of being weighed down by it, and occasionally, using it to express an idea that can’t be expressed in any other way.

Even if the reader isn’t a person challenged with occasionally discordant aptitudes, seeing how it feels can only help in the development of empathy and support for those so blessed. Through Jennifer Goldfinger’s compelling narrative illustrations, anybody can see what it feels like to be Daisy, and thereby know the Daisys in their lives a little better.

4 out of 5 crayons


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.

Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel, BLAZE ya Dead Homie, a one-​shot comic book, and wrote and illustrated RIOT Force, a creator-​owned comic series for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: I’m Gonna Paint: Ralph Fasanella, Artist of the People by Anne Broyles, illustrated by Victoria Tentler-Krylov

Holiday House
7 November 2023
48 pages
This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

I’m Gonna Paint: Ralph Fasanella, Artist of the People, authored by Anne Broyles and vibrantly illustrated by Victoria Tentler-​Krylov, is a welcome children’s picture book that paints a portrait of Ralph Fasanella’s life with the same fervor and detail the artist himself devoted to his canvases. The book captures Ralph’s journey from a tenacious New York kid to an iconic artist, echoing his dedication to portraying the working-​class experience.

Broyles’ prose dances between simplicity and evocativeness, achieving a balance that engages young readers while touching on mature themes. For instance, in describing Ralph’s early life, Broyles writes, “Ralph often wandered the city until dinnertime, observing the colors, shapes, and textures of the glowing streetlights against the brick buildings. Instead of going to school, he taught himself how to read by studying newspapers on the subway.” Such language not only builds Ralph’s world but also immerses the reader in the symphony of city life that influenced his art.

Tentler-​Krylov’s illustrations must be praised for their dynamism and how they echo Fasanella’s own style—bold, colorful, and brimming with narrative. One can almost feel the texture of the city’s energy in the spread that captures Ralph amidst the clamor and chaos of a labor protest. I’ll let Austin say more about that below in his part.

The narrative deftly weaves Fasanella’s passion for social justice with his artistic development. In a powerful scene, Broyles describes how “It took Ralph three years to create eighteen paintings of workers protesting, union leaders making speeches, militiamen with bayonets, mill owners watching from inside the mills, and more. It was his masterpiece.” This parallel between Ralph’s art and the movement of the American workforce underscores the book’s theme of solidarity and community.

Geared towards children aged 4–8, the book doesn’t shy away from difficult topics like labor rights, instead presenting them through the lens of art and storytelling, making complex concepts a bit more accessible and relatable. The story champions the idea that everyone has the power to create change, aligning with current educational values promoting agency and expression.

In sum, I’m Gonna Paint is an homage to a self-​made artist and a call to recognize the beauty and power in one’s own creativity. It’s a vivid reminder of art’s ability to capture and change the zeitgeist, likely resonating with young readers, educators, and parents for its depth and beauty.

4 out of 5 pencils

 

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

For an illustrator to tackle a children’s book celebrating the life and work of a recognizable modern artist is no simple undertaking. Especially when the artist in question is a primitive whose primary subject matter is a psychological impression of the world in which he grew up. It means that a lot of the reductionist tools an illustrator might use to simplify, streamline, and evoke the spirit of the book’s hero conflict with the journalistic need to echo the subject’s own sensibility; to represent his world, work, and legacy in a specific and recognizable way.

In short, how was Victoria Tentler-​Krylov supposed to give us a picture book that looked and felt like the world as artist Ralph Fasanella saw it, and pay homage to that interpretation without directly imitating his style? How, indeed, can a reviewer begin to describe the work of one without comparing and contrasting it with the other? It is reviewing an interpretation of an interpretation. And yet, Tentler-​Krylov surmounts this challenge with impressive skill, sensitivity and grace, so I will attempt to follow her example.

As an immigrant son, reform school survivor, and former labor organizer, when Ralph Fasanella became a self-​taught painter later in life, he took a forthright and direct approach to create a visual chronicle of the lived experience of the people and the world that he knew, as well as those of his parent’s generation. He drew heavily on the kinds of visual shorthand any illustrator might use to communicate their ideas. X‑ray projections, flattened perspectives, subjective color, expressive as well as descriptive mark-​making, and panels that guide the eye through a juxtaposition of scale are all visual syntax a picture book illustrator especially might rely upon regardless of the biographical subject.

Unfazed, Tentler-​Krylov supplies many touches of her own that make her vision of Fasanella’s epic world uniquely hers, even as it complements Fasanella’s. Her colors are ever so slightly more naturalistic and objective, her perspective and compositions as grounded as they are whimsical, her focus more sharply moment to moment. Her Van Gogh-​esque, Post-​Impressionist hatching used with even more deliberate intent. Where Fasanella described the timelessness of a specific world, its moments played out cyclically like the thrum of a thousand sewing machines, Tentler-​Krylov gives us specific moments in time surrounding the life of an individual person, and by extension, a hint of the seeds of the artistic vision those experiences would germinate.

Compare the family supper Tentler-​Krylov shows us on page 11 with the one Fasanella painted in 1972. Where Fasanella’s depictions of people were hauntingly expressionless, his architecture shaky and his tone somewhat inscrutable beyond the circumstantial, Tentler-Krylov’s settings crackle with life, her dynamic gestures and characterizations sharpened by the wit of a master cartoonist and observer. We can practically smell the bread on the table. Where Fasanella’s compositions are grand and sprawling, Tentler-Krylov’s are as inventive and immediate as any in the medium without ever letting you forget it’s the life of an artist with a very specific vision she’s depicting. In the hands of a lesser illustrator, intimate vignettes like Fasanella stretching canvas or imagining the world he intends to paint as he contemplates the easel wouldn’t have nearly the power they do here.

And as generationally timely as Fasanella’s work was in his era, Tentler-Krylov’s work in this volume is equally so. Especially powerful is the image of Fasanella as a sixty-​year-​old artist in the 1970s, striding palette in hand through a crowd of striking textile workers in Lawrence Massachusetts circa 1912. Also poignant are the illustrations of modern viewers, swirling in a kind of observational dance around representations of Fasanella paintings. If Fasanella’s work spoke to the power of art to transport a viewer to a time and place and thus keep the lessons of humanity alive, one generation to the next, Tentler-Krylov’s illustrations here do the same. And if Fasanella’s paintings helped in some way to create empathy in viewers for the workers and their families he depicted en masse, Tentler-Krylov’s illustrations create empathy for the scion of a single working family. She shares his tumultuous upbringing with us, and through it the artistic drive, passion, dedication and conscience that gave those workers he championed a voice.

5 out of 5 crayons


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.

Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel, BLAZE ya Dead Homie, a one-​shot comic book, and wrote and illustrated RIOT Force, a creator-​owned comic series for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: Library Girl: How Nancy Pearl Became America’s Most Celebrated Librarian, by Karen Henry Clark

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.

—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

Karen Henry Clark’s new picture book, Library Girl, shares the story of how Detroit native Nancy Pearl transformed her childhood love for books into a lifelong mission. From the start, Nancy was able to ignore how her peers teased her because her best friends were in books (“all those characters tucked into pages”). Clark cleverly uses bookish language throughout the text, such as how when the school librarian told Pearl about a nearby public library that was open on Saturdays, “Hope fluttered like pages turning in Nancy’s heart.”

Two sweet librarians at the public library encouraged Nancy’s imagination and her love for horses (Nancy had toy horses in her bedroom and she even imagined her bicycle was a horse named Charger). Though she hid her new library books to avoid more teasing, Nancy “read through rows of fantasies, trilogies, diaries, anthologies, dictionaries, histories, biographies, and mysteries.” And as so often happens to voracious young readers, all those stories led to this powerful realization–“I can be anything when I grow up.”

Nancy didn’t remain a solitary bookworm. When her librarian friends asked her to give a talk about horse books to the other kids, she couldn’t say no. Their belief in her was that strong, though she was understandably nervous. Even a spill on her bike en route to the library to give the talk didn’t spoil things. The other kids were “spellbound,” and when she was done, they clapped and the librarians “glowed.” I’ll let Austin talk about the art but I’ll add that many of the spreads have a magical glow to them, even when Nancy’s imagination isn’t being depicted in action.

After Nancy’s successful talk, the book fast-​forwards to where she has found her future as an adult librarian who helps other kids discover their own magic in books. An Author’s Note explains some of Nancy’s successes as a champion for books, reading, and libraries, though one of the most memorable moments is Nancy’s response to being challenged to write a six-​word memoir: “Girl discovers books, then discovers life.” The back matter also briefly lists awards Nancy won, books she wrote, and recognition she received.

While Nancy Pearl isn’t a household name, her sweet, empowering story will resonate with many readers. Book lovers, teachers, and librarians in specific will surely see some part of themselves in Library Girl.

4.5 out of 5 pencils

 

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

It may seem obvious to say the work of an illustrator is to supply the “show” in “show and tell;” to provide tone and context beyond the reach of words alone. That’s exactly what Sheryl Murray’s depictions of the world of librarian Nancy Pearl’s childhood in the early 1950s accomplish.

Of the five books Murray has illustrated to date, Library Girl is the only one with a non-​fiction, biographical subject, but Murray’s fanciful sensibilities serve her well here, infusing Nancy’s experience with constant companions in sparkling azure shades, especially horses. Each scene is suffused with a magical pastel glow, a consistent palette perfectly suited to the romanticism of Nancy’s imagination. We would be remiss, however, if we failed to appreciate the subtle clues that set the mise en scene firmly in its historical context–the rolled-​up jeans, the milkman, and who could fail to be inspired by the palatial renderings of Detroit’s Parkman Branch Library?

An author herself as well as an illustrator, Murray’s firm grasp of visual storytelling are on dramatic display here. Beyond the warmth and approachability of Murray’s style, her framing and inclusion of evocative elements of the narrative add a textural richness to the reading experience: the dotted line of the map to the library, the bird landing nearby when the text mentions fluttering pages. The pulled back pictures that underscore Nancy’s emotional state when she feels small and insecure, the shots over her shoulder that put us in her black and white saddle shoes, which is especially appropriate in the story of a librarian who famously encouraged everyone in Seattle to read the same book at the same time. Murray’s illustrations allow us to see through Nancy’s eyes without telling us exactly how to feel. They give us permission to ask ourselves–as Nancy’s librarian mentors do–what helps us feel brave?

Nancy Pearl’s accomplished career as a librarian focused on outreach has been about understanding through shared experiences in books, and Murray’s charming compositions help enrich just such an experience for us–the readers of Nancy’s story.

4.5 out of 5 crayons


 

Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.
Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: Mommy’s Hometown by Hope Lim

Author: Hope Lim
Illustrator: Jaime Kim
Candlewick
12 April 2022
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Joshua Walls (an OPB newcomer!) and longtime OPB friend, Austin McKinley.


—Joshua’s Review of the Writing—

Hope Lim’s third picture book, Mommy’s Hometown, shares a timeless story about a young child who travels overseas with his mother to visit her childhood hometown in South Korea. Despite his surprise at discovering how much her town has changed since she left, he can still relive his mother’s memories while creating new ones with her.

Every night at home, as part of their bedtime routine, the mother paints vivid pictures of her memories for her son. “She and her friends would walk to the river and play there all day. They caught fish, unearthed treasures beneath rocks, splashed each other, and dried themselves on the pebbled riverbank.” As a boy, I dreamed about where my family members grew up, and even today, I still do this with my friends living abroad, creating colorful images in my mind. When a story tugs at your memories, you know you’re in for a treat.

After listening to all his mother’s stories, the day finally comes for the boy to visit the town he has only imagined. Upon arriving, however, he discovers that it’s different. The little town he pictured has become a bustling city. “The new replaced the old,” his mother explains. The son doubts it’s the same place his mother grew up, but with help from his family, he overcomes uncertainties and discovers the town he envisioned in the present.

I adore how the story ends. The son and his mother visit the river where they play together, and the son discovers his mother’s younger side. Then, hearing Grandma call to them, the boy and his mother “run home together,” allowing the reader to reflect on the joy of shared moments. I’ll let Austin go into detail about the art, but I love the final illustrations of the mother and son, both as kids running home through the town the boy always imagined. The last page slowly resets back to reality, with both characters clearly having the time of their lives. These three pages make an already compelling story even more impactful.

Lim uses simple language that’ll make the reader finds themselves wanting to share their childhood tales as they tell her story. The son’s character arc is delightful. While it never hurts to get help, the boy shakes off his doubts and accepts the town’s changes, allowing him to build his own childhood memories. His experiences provide wonderful discussion opportunities. The reader can reassure a child that changes may happen, but change is okay. While things may not always be as we imagine, we may discover they’re even better.

Lim narrates a gentle, heartfelt story that I absolutely loved reading. It reminds me a lot of my hometown, Duluth, Georgia, and how it continues to evolve from a small Atlanta suburb into a prosperous, diverse community, rich in its own history. Mommy’s Hometown captures how places may appear different than described. It’s wonderful when a picture book taps into a timeless theme. I look forward to one day reading this story with my own curious child.

4.75 out of 5 unearthed treasures

 

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

It’s the trip of a lifetime for the child narrator, as he discovers the world of his mother’s bedtime stories is neither as he imagined nor as she described them, because time has moved on. As Hope Lim crafts this tale of a child first confronted with the four-​dimensional shape of the world, illustrator Jaime Kim brings the experience to life in a series of lush two-​page spreads and sequential vignettes which give a subtle glow to both natural and urban landscapes.

Kim is a #1 New York Times bestselling illustrator, and it’s easy to see why. Her figures are universal, simplistic, yet evocative–all that’s necessary to imagine ourselves in their place. The characters are, in a sense, background to the lovingly rendered environment. And yet, when she depicts the child and mother at the same age, running through the laneway hand in hand, its emotional impact is devastating.

By contrast, the landscapes are very specific, but with masterful depth of field, they create just enough detail and texture to make them visceral and sentimental without being saccharine. It’s a genuine experience to which we can easily relate as a child first learns to contemplate the impermanence of life–those things that are timeless, and those that are not.

The pairing of Kim’s paintbrush with this weighty, poignant subject matter is pitch perfect. Perhaps the most so of any of her fifteen books to date. Her eye for creating a toy-​like world and playing with perspective without tilt-​shifting into miniaturization, is on glorious display here. Having seen her realize Lim’s narrative, one can hardly imagine anyone else doing it so well. Readers are so deftly embedded in the world of the artwork that they can almost feel the winds of change blowing through the characters’ hair. Exquisite.

**For an idea of what that looks like, you can check out Kim’s deliciously charming illustrations in animated GIFs on her website.**

5 out of 5 crayons


Joshua Walls is a children’s author and travel writer who isn’t afraid to fuse, challenge, or deconstruct genres in the pursuit of creating compelling stories. Currently, he lives in Sarasota, FL where he’s pursuing a BFA in Creative Writing at Ringling College of Art and Design. He’s also the co-​founder and co-​host of the Fluff It podcast.


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.
Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: Hamsters Make Terrible Roommates by Cheryl B. Klein

Author: Cheryl B. Klein
Illustrator: Abhi Alwar
Dial Books for Young Readers
2 November 2021
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and longtime OPB friend Austin McKinley.


—Ryan’s Review of the Writing—

I can’t help but think of The Odd Couple as I read Cheryl Klein’s new picture book where we find an introverted hamster and an extroverted one trying to co-​exist. Or perhaps a more season-​appropriate comparison is the movie Elf, where an over-​exuberant elf character, Buddy (brilliantly played by Will Ferrell), can’t easily win over his grumpy father (played by James Caan) who has more “important” stuff to do and just wants to be left alone.

In Hamsters Make Terrible Roommates, Hamster Henry is downright unhappy at having to share the cage with Hamster Marvin, who’s just endless joy and enthusiasm and talk-​talk-​talk (“Seeds! Seeds are my favorite!!!”). Poor Henry hasn’t had a day of peace in two hundred and five days–he’s sure about that, because he’s keeping track. Marvin simply loves to do everything Henry does not. Talk in the tunnel. Talk when they’re munching hamster kibble. Talk when they’re running on the wheel.

Henry finally has had it up to his hamster neck. On day two hundred and six, he blows up. “Just don’t talk! Go away! And leave me alone!” he screams. And Marvin does.

Neither is happy with the new situation, but they soon discover there’s a way to co-​exist. The exact ending–which I won’t spoil here–is spot-​on perfect. Klein nails it. But, to be fair, she has control of this story from the start with minimalist text that gets at the heart of each scene. She wrote the book on kidlit writing, after all, with The Magic Words: Writing Great Books for Children and Young Adults.

The art here is absolutely adorable, though I’ll leave it to Austin to explain why. The text is equally powerful–the driving plot really comes together in a way that hits home in a (little) sad but (mostly) sweet way. Seeing how Henry and Marvin work through their differences with honesty, grace, and compassion is a lesson that’s easy to digest here, given as it is with a double helping of hamster humor and good kid fun.

If your classroom has a pet hamster, this book is sure to be a scream. But even if your life is currently hamster-​less, Hamsters Make Terrible Roommates still has enough oomph to please and entertain. While I have no insider knowledge about plans for a sequel, these characters are rich enough to easily carry another story–I hope to see that someday!

4.75 out of 5 pencils

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

Cartooning is deceptively simple. It has to iconify, to strip away needless detail and zero in on exactly the broad strokes that will convey the energy, emotion, and humor of the scene. It has to be charming, evocative, consistent, and clear. Abhi Alwar accomplishes all this with each masterful stroke.

Although the rest of her body of work covers a range of textural scales, Hamsters Make Terrible Roommates brings us right up close, seemingly putting the linework under a magnifying glass to reinforce the diminutive story environment. It’s a brave choice that leaves the illustrator nowhere to hide. The gestures and expressions of the characters have to carry each layout with the rest of the mise-​en-​scène fading away into a soft blur. Alwar pulls it off wonderfully.

All of which is even more impressive considering Hamsters is Alwar’s first picture book. The consistency required across the series of images in a picture book is in some ways even more demanding than other mediums. For her one-​off illustrations and comics, Alwar often employs a sketchy, primitive, childlike quality in her linework and color choices. Hamsters preserves that energy, but delivers it in a crisp, polished, fully realized visual syntax with a sophisticated palette and rich, sumptuous textures.

All of this helps to accomplish that most important element of cartooning—the audience’s ability to relate to the characters and their situation. By leaving out irrelevant details, by letting our imagination linger only on the impression of an experience, we’re able to imagine ourselves in the place of these hamsters. We’ve all been these hamsters, known these hamsters. For the children reading or listening to the story, they’re able to have a legitimate and useful narrative experience that helps them practice empathy and theory of mind.

It’s no surprise that writer and artist developed the idea together from a synergy of favorite subject matter and mutual interest in the dramatic premise. That’s when cartooning is at its best, when it’s more than a simple illustration, but provides the narrative underpinnings of the story whether or not there are any words. That overlap of intent is what makes Hamsters feel like what it is: an outpouring of the natural interplay between words and pictures in a naturally harmonious, unified whole.

4 out of 5 crayons


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.
Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel for Source Point Press.

Picture Book Review: Bear Outside by Jane Yolen

Author: Jane Yolen
Illustrator: Jen Corace
Neal Porter Books
2 March 2021
32 pages

For the first time ever, the review of the story-​side of a picture book isn’t being done by Ryan G. Van Cleave (owner/​operator of Only Picture Books).

Don’t worry, though. We’ve brought in ringers to handle things at the same high level we all expect of OPB picture book reviews.

So, without further ado, here’s this month’s picture book review that features insight from Brooklyn-​based editor Octavia Saenz and Florida-​based freelance artist (& OPB superfriend) Austin McKinley.


—Octavia’s Review of the Writing—

Bears are quiet, solitary things, but sometimes, if you look closely enough, you might find profound wisdom. Like the narrator of Bear Outside, the book itself is a quietly wise thing with a simple exterior that hides a deeper truth about what we owe ourselves.

The story is simple—and, like any good picture book, is half told in the details of the art—as the narrator explains how she wears her bear on the outside, as a form of protection, as a companion, as a talisman of courage. Beyond the narrator’s simple words, we see how the bear is a shield against mocking classmates as well as a a collaborator for the narrator having fun on their own. She says, too, that the bear is hers to take care of, and in the artwork we see her taking care of herself. She engages in brave and kind acts, fighting back bees to eat honey, and giving flowers to a neighbor, all with the help of the bear.

Bear Outside, celebrated author Jane Yolen’s 400th book, is an ode to kids who march to their own bear, and a guide for the imaginative ones in touch with their needs and boundaries.

It’s wonderful.

5 out of 5 pencils

—Austin’s Review of the Illustrations—

The central conceit of Bear Outside—that of a child imagining wearing their inner spirit as a kind of protective and companionable aura—is delightfully rich visual territory which the book’s artist, Jen Corace, explores with palpable joy. The sumptuous textural watercolor world she creates, which ranges from soft pastels to vibrant jewel-​toned hues (the red leaves on that giant, two-​page tree spread are chef’s kiss material!) is punctuated by Bear, the only cartoon element in each illustration described with a calligraphic line. As the book jacket explains, it was this conceptual image Corace created—of a girl surrounded by a bear—that formed the impetus for the book proper.

Corace has so much fun depicting Bear reading a book in a blanket fort (more great textures!) riding a bicycle, and jumping on a trampoline, that one can’t help but grin in appreciation. Her character and stage design have that quality of all the best children’s book illustrations: they are warm, inviting, approachable, and deceptively simple. Almost as if a child had done them, but a child with a master’s hand. It reminds us of the way we felt as children, and it makes it look easy.

Little touches–like the girl and Bear riding on the front of the shopping cart, clambering into a tree fort, flailing in water wings, or going to sleep with a night light–are all rendered in flattened perspectives. Overlapping watercolor elements and simplified backgrounds bring the childhood of our mind’s eye into a soft, sensitive focus.

A stroll through the artist’s website reveals there are many things about the imagery for this book that are motifs throughout her work. The little girl with the black bob haircut, the semi-​translucent textures, and the fanciful combinations of people and animals all make regular appearances. Corace’s work here is moodier than her children’s illustration, more akin to what might appear on an indie record’s album art.

What makes Bear Outside unique is not just the more whimsical palette–it’s how charmingly relatable the scenes are, and the humor that arises when the core personality of the narrator and the alter ego of Bear seem to vie for dominance. It makes you want to have such a bear in your life, and the beauty of the book’s message is that you can!

It’s a powerful, inspiring piece of children’s literature, simple to understand, but taking a complex topic like healthy self-​confidence, and making it impossible to forget.

5 out of 5 crayons


Octavia Saenz is an editor and cartoonist based in Brooklyn, NY who creates visual narratives about queer, Puerto Rican diaspora. Octavia grew up in Puerto Rico and has a BFA in Creative Writing and Illustration from Ringling College of Art and Design, as well as a Lambda Fellowship.

Find her on Twitter and Instagram: @shrimpwonder.


Austin McKinley makes comic books, cartoons, movies, video games, screenplays, novels and novellas through his company, Flying Car. He shot and appeared in the award-​winning feature documentary The New 8‑Bit Heroes alongside director Joe Granato. His comic illustrations have also been published by Image Shadowline, Devil’s Due/​1st Comics, Alias/​Blue Water Press, Avatar, Boom!, Blue King Studios, and FC9. He wrote and illustrated Squareasota, a weekly cartoon in the Sarasota Herald-​Tribune for seven years.
Most recently, he illustrated Tales of Mr. Rhee vol. 5: Rockstar Paranoia, a graphic novel for Source Point Press slated for spring 2021.