Editor Interview: Kristine Enderle (Magination Press)

photo credit: Elizabeth Dranitzke

Hello! We’re here today with Kristine Enderle, the Editorial Director of Magination Press. One of the things that intrigues me most is how she came to publishing in such a roundabout way (more on that in a moment!). Her Twitter bio declares her a “full-​time mom, all-​the-​time-​feminist, serious ally, and native Hoosier.” In terms of her publishing career highlights, she offers this sample of titles:

 

Girl: Love, Sex, Romance, and Being You by Karen Rayne (starred review from Publisher’s Weekly; one of Chicago Public Library’s Best of the Best Nonfiction Teen books)

 

This Day in June by Gayle Pitman (Stonewall Award winner; ALA Office of Intellectual Freedom’s Top 100 Challenged Books)

 

My Anxious Mind: A Teen’s Guide to Managing Anxiety and Panic by Michael Tompkins and Katherine Martinez (ABCT Self Help Book Seal of Merit Award)

 

Something Happened In Our Town: A  Child’s Guide to Racial Injustice by Marianne Celano, Marietta Collins, and Ann Hazard (A New York Times and #1 IndieBound bestseller, A Little Free Library Action Book Club Selection, and an NCSS-​CBC 2019 Notable Social Science Trade Book for Young People)

 

Whew! That’s a great start. But let’s move on to the interview to find out a bit more about Kristine and her career.


RVC: As mentioned in the intro above, you might win the award for most unusual path toward becoming an editor—at least in terms of industry insider interviews here at OPB! You’ve got a BS degree in microbiology (minor in psychology) from Indiana U, right? What kind of career goals did you have back then?

KE: I honestly didn’t have any career goals! I was lucky enough to be allowed to just study whatever I wanted in college! I grew up in an enormous old house (with actual bats in the attic) in the middle of the woods in southern Indiana. There was always something smashed on the road that we could poke at, or strange insects or fungi living on rotting logs. My dad was a doctor and my mom was a nurse, so there were always ongoing conversations about medicine and health in my house.

RVC: That sounds like an awesome way to grow up.

KE: You bet! I grew to love the natural world and naturally (hah!) that flowed into biology coursework. Eventually after taking a microbiology course, my sights were set on what is unseen and I became fascinated by fungus and bacteria and have a sweet spot for infectious diseases.

RVC: After college, you worked as an AIDS research tech for the AIDS Vaccine Development Program at the National Cancer Institute, and then as a tech at Northwestern University’s Lurie Cancer Center. Isn’t the latter position where you started taking classes in writing?

KE: Yes. While working at Northwestern I took fiction writing, linguistics, and communication courses. I needed to move away from lab work to exercise the other side of my brain. I always hung out with English majors and musicians in school, so I finally got to take all those classes I missed as an undergrad.

RVC: What’s the most valuable thing you learned in those writing classes?

KE: That I am NOT a fiction writer! I have so much appreciation for storytellers and creative people now. Plus it’s more fun to be the oddball science nerd in the room than the way-​too-​serious poet.

RVC: What was the learning curve like going from a science researcher to a development editor at Human Kinetics, a sports science textbook publisher in Illinois? 

KE: Between working in the lab and my first publishing gig, I was a Medical & Scientific Affairs manager at the Alzheimer’s Association. This was pre-​Internet, so I wrote newsletters and fact sheets for the general public and answered the phone, fielding a ton of questions from families and caregivers about Alzheimer’s disease. Working there taught me to explain complicated concepts and technical language, so maybe this was what got me from the lab to publishing?

RVC: Sounds like GREAT training to be an editor.

KE: At Human Kinetics as a development editor, I had to look at big picture things in planning a textbook–editing and organization becomes a puzzle to solve as you need to figure out a way to fit and package a ton of information into ways people can understand and into one comprehensive and complete book, visually with photos, diagrams, charts, and graphs. I still do that at Magination. Our books combine science and literature (or evidence-​based information and creative expression) into something that is accessible and interesting to read.

A great example of this is Move Your Mood which is a hoot and teaches readers about how physical movement positively affects mood–there is psychological research to support this. Or Layla’s Luck. People tend to attribute a woman’s or girl’s success as them being lucky and not relating to their smarts, skill, and hard work. Layla takes aim at that.

RVC: Let’s dig a bit deeper into your publishing career. These days, you’re the Editorial Director at Magination Press. How does that compare to being a developmental editor? Writers ask me versions of this all the time—what’s the difference in terms of those roles?

KE: Editorial director really means that I am responsible for editorial strategy and focus of the press and oversee major initiatives, budgets, planning, and staff. But having come up through the ranks, I am still developing and editing and acquiring books because I have a hard time leaving that behind. I am still a senior/​acquiring editor and have a nice group of house authors I have been working with since their debut work. Many authors call me their editor (and that’s the best thing ever!)

RVC: Compare that to the roles of your Magination colleagues, Senior Editor Sarah Fell and Editor Katie Ten Hagen.

KE: Sarah and Katie do all that, minus the planning and overseeing, and have a bunch more books than me to develop. And they work with new authors mostly, and I’m technically their boss!

RVC: Thanks for that!

Now, some people might not realize that Magination Press is connected to the APA (American Psychological Association). How does that work?

KE: APA’s mission is to promote the advancement, communication, and application of psychological science and knowledge to benefit society and improve lives. So what that means for Magination Press is that we share world mental health expertise and psychological knowledge to help kids through rough patches. Some of our books deal with serious issues like depression and anxiety; others are more of those everyday things that bug you or that you may confront sometime during your life. Also just recognizing the sometimes-​tough job of being a kid these days. We want kids and teens to know that we are listening, we see what they are dealing with, and might have something that can help.

I’d like to think that books like Bye Bye Pesky Fly, Lucy’s Light, Jacob’s Room to Chooseand Lulu the One and Only really make a difference in the lives and well-​being of kids.

RVC: Here’s something else that people might be surprised by. Not only do you publish books exclusively for kids (ages 4–18), but you’re putting out 20+ books a year! 

KE: Yeah. We are kind of overachievers that way.

RVC: What’s the common denominator with all your kidlit?

KE: The stories (and nonfiction) really must be grounded in evidence-​based research. It’s true that there is a little bit of psychology in everything, but to be a publication of the American Psychological Association, the work must be based on science and fact. It would be irresponsible otherwise!

RVC: How vital is it that your writers have backgrounds in psychology or the sciences? Or know APA style?

KE: We prefer our authors be psychologists or are mental health professionals, but it’s not a prerequisite. If an author doesn’t have those credentials, we will hire a psychologist to write the endmatter/​readers note (to provide the psychological context for the story). Also all of our books are reviewed by our editorial advisory board that is made up of child psychologists. They act as peer reviewers and comment on the accuracy and relevancy of the psychological content and whether the coping strategies have merit.

Extra points for folks using APA Style/​Pub Manual 7!

RVC: Let’s say you publish a picture book on depression and so, too, does a NYC press. What are some of the likely differences in how a Magination picture book covers a topic like that? 

KE: Reviewed and vetted by the American Psychological Association, maybe?

RVC: That’s a key distinction, for sure.

Now, you just signed When Nana Dances, a picture book by Jane Yolen and her granddaughter about the relationship between children and grandparents, and how dance can be at its core. This isn’t as clear of an “issue book” as some of your others. Why did you have to snatch this one up?

KE: Because Jane Yolen!

No, really it’s a joyful celebration that combats ageism and models mentally healthy and happy intergenerational relationships. You know that emotional stress can speed up aging at the cellular level. So, this is stress-​relief and mental wellness at its core!

RVC: Your press is always at the trade shows—in fact, that’s how I learned about it. I chatted with one of your sales reps at BEA (Book Expo America) at the Javits Center in NYC a couple years ago, and I was impressed by the quality of the books and topics covered. 

KE: Thank you! You can find us all over, from the Bologna Children Book Fair to the Texas Library Association annual meeting to National Council for Teachers of English. We also attend psychological conferences like American Counseling Association, and of course APA’s Annual Convention.

RVC: For people considering writing for your press, what’s the most important thing they should know or understand?

KE: Despite our serious and sensitive topics, we love humor, humility, and honesty. Not sure what that means exactly for books… might speak more to who we are and our community of authors and illustrators we take up with.

Otherwise a couple things come to mind:

  • Do your research. Before submitting a proposal, please review our catalog: we don’t repeat topics year after year and are unlikely to acquire new titles on already-​covered topics.
  • Keep it universal. We are not interested in autobiography, reflections on childhood, or personal stories about family members, pets, or friends. Keep the appeal wide and general and keep the focus on interesting characters and good storytelling. Be careful with first-​person narrative. Good stories and excellent topics can sour with unrealistic, adult-​sounding, or dated dialog.

RVC: In all your experience with editing picture books, what has most surprised you?

KE: Just how many books I have signed after just reading the cover letter. Another book hooked me immediately with its proposed title–There’s a Cat in My Class!

RVC: One final question for this part of the interview. Your Twitter bio says you’re a “part-​time troublemaker.” Care to support that impressive claim with evidence?

KE: I live in the Capitol Hill neighborhood in Washington, DC. Marching and protesting is what we do!

RVC: Okay, Kristine. We’ve now reached the SPEED ROUND. Speedy questions and even faster answers. Ready?

KE: Ready!

RVC: “If I didn’t have a career in publishing or science, I’d be…”

KE: A park ranger!

RVC: Fave secret lunch spot in DC?

KE: Indigo!

RVC: If you could be any picture book character for a day, who would it be?

KE: Nancy Drew!

RVC: Something that’s on your picture book wish list?

KE: A book about a whale.

RVC: An underappreciated Magination picture book that you simply adore?

KE: Underappreciated? I’m a huge fan of King Calm: Mindful Gorilla in the City. But I also adore our more recent relatively unknown activity book, How Do You Doodle: Drawing Your Feelings and Emotions.

RVC: The one must-​have for every picture book you acquire?

KE: A good pun or a dog.

RVC: Thanks so much, Kristine!

Educational Activities: The True Story of Zippy Chippy by Artie Bennett

The True Story of Zippy Chippy: The Little Horse That Couldn’t
Author: Artie Bennett
Illustrator: Dave Szalay
25 February 2020
NorthSouth Books
40 pages

This book has sat on my MAYBE/​PROBABLY pile for some time, and this month, Zippy Chippy is the little horse that could.

Book description: “A true story about the famed racehorse who lost every race but won everyone’s heart.

The bell rings and they’re off! Zippy the racehorse—descended from legends—is destined for glory, but when the other horses bolt from the gate … Zippy stands still. When people try to pet him … he bites their hats and escapes from his stall. What’s an owner to do? Keep on trying! After all, Zippy has become part of Felix’s family—and a close friend of his little daughter. And after 100 straight losses, Zippy shows everyone that—win, lose, or draw—it takes guts to compete and that you can lose and lose and still be a winner.”


Need some reviews of The True Story of Zippy Chippy: The Little Horse That Couldn’t?

And as a bonus, here’s an interview with the author, courtesy of Good Reads with Ronna.


Educational Activities inspired by Artie Bennett’s The True Story of Zippy Chippy: The Little Horse That Couldn’t:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • Where and when does this story seem to take place?
    • What do you know about horses and horse racing?
    • Why do you make of the subtitle “the little horse that couldn’t”?
    • What’s do you think is happening on the back cover?
    • If you could ask the author any one question before you read the book, what would it be?
    • Why do you think the title emphasizes that this is a TRUE story?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • What problem(s) did Zippy Chippy face?
    • What were the most important events in the story?
    • If this book has a lesson, what do you think it is?
    • Which of Zippy Chippy’s actions did you find most amusing? Grabbing people’s hats? Standing still during a race? Dangling Felix by his shirt? Something else?
    • If you were Felix, what would you have tried to get Zippy Chippy to behave?
    • What other story does The True Story of Zippy Chippy remind you of?
    • Though Zippy Chippy lost all 100 races, the book says he won in the end. Do you agree? Why/​why not?
  • Writing–Now that Zippy Chippy has retired from racing with an impressive 0–100 record, what’s next for this amazing horse? Write that story in whatever way you imagine it. Consider the following questions to help make your story come alive on the page: 
    • Where does Zippy Chippy live now?
    • Is Felix still a part of Zippy Chippy’s life?
    • What does Zippy Chippy dream of doing?
    • What does Zippy Chippy worry about?
    • What does Zippy Chippy see/​smell/​taste/​touch?
    • Would drawing pictures improve your story?
  • Activities–With the help of an adult, try some of the following horse-​themed crafts: 
  • Further Reading–Which of these other picture books about horses have you read? (Click on the book cover for more information on any of these titles!)

Author Interview: Anita Amin

This month’s Author Interview is with Tampa Bay writer Anita Amin, an Indian American author of many kidlit books, with more than 100 published short stories and articles in children’s literary magazines (like Ladybug, Spider, Humpty Dumpty, and Highlights) and education resources. And if that doesn’t make you think she’s a hard worker, when I invited her to do this interview, she confessed that she has eleven (11!) chapter and leveled readers books going to be published between now and the end of 2021.

To help us get to know her a bit more, here are five facts about Anita:

  1. Born and raised in the US, she’s the daughter of Indian immigrants. “My family roots stretch across North India, from the royal desert of Rajasthan to the bustling river city of Kolkata.”
  2. She has a Biomedical Engineering and Electrical Engineering degree (from Duke) and an MS in Computer Engineering (NC State).
  3. She used to design microcomputers, and then had a long career in the IT field before becoming a writer.
  4. Her travel bucket list includes: Antarctica, Egypt, Iceland, and Morocco.
  5. She writes secret coded messages for her kids.

One final thing. Anita had two STEM books come out in 2020, and let me tell you, What Would It Take to Make a Hoverboard? is a book I would’ve loved as a kid, though I probably would’ve torn apart my mom’s station wagon to get the parts to try to build it, so maybe it’s a good thing it didn’t come out back then!

In any case, now that we’re all pals, let’s get to the interview and find out more about what makes Anita so prolific!


RVC: In 2006, you left a long-​time career in information technology to become a writer. Was that a sudden thing or had it been brewing for a long time?

AA: Actually, I left my job in 2006 to focus on family. I had no idea I would eventually become a writer, even though that had been my childhood dream.

As a child, I wrote short stories every day. I wanted to attend young writer workshops, instead of summer camps. I remember pausing by the barely open door of a high school literature class, wondering what they were discussing, wishing I could live in their world too. It was the only AP class, for which I hadn’t qualified; I was always stronger in math and science, and so in college, I pushed my dreams aside, believing I could never make it as a writer. I became a business consultant in information technology instead.

But deep down, my passion for writing never completely extinguished. After I left my job, I started to play around with words, writing short stories just for my own fun. Writing became my retreat. It made me feel happy and whole – just like when I was a child.

RVC: How did it actually happen for you?

AA: As I began to write more and more again, I started thinking maybe I could try to get a story published. But I had no idea where to start. Were my stories publishable? Were they the right format for submission? Was I even writing the “right” way? And what market did I want to write for? This is when I started to take classes, and as I learned more, I became serious about writing for children and writing for publication as my goal.

RVC: I think you’re the first OPB interviewee who’s taken classes at the Institute of Children’s Literature. Tell us about that organization, and how did it help you get your start? 

AA: The Institute of Children’s Literature (ICL) was a great way to start learning about the basics of writing for the children’s market. I took three classes: two about writing for magazines and one about picture book writing. In each course, ICL matched me with an experienced children’s editor or author, who critiqued my outlines, manuscripts, and revisions. Communication about assignments was through email.

After ICL, I continued revising many of my assignments through other workshops and critique groups. Many of these revised stories were later published in print magazines and online educational resources such as Super Teacher Worksheets, which provides worksheets to teachers and homeschoolers all over the world. It’s always fun when I see a child bring home one of my stories as a homework assignment!

RVC: What kind of other things did you do to improve your writing skills in those early post-​IT career days?

AA: I joined the Society of Children’s Book Writers & Illustrators (SCBWI), an international organization of children’s writers and illustrators, representing every stage from beginner to seasoned and published. Their discussion boards are helpful for learning more about the craft and industry and for asking questions. They also offer great learning and book promotion opportunities.

During my early post-​IT days, I gravitated toward the magazine market because my first writing course was about short story writing. I identified the magazines I wanted be published in – like Humpty Dumpty and Highlights. I pulled apart the short stories in those magazines. How many sentences did each paragraph typically have? How many words per line and per paragraph? Did they typically run humorous or serious stories? I studied these stories for character growth and plot arcs. Analyzing mentor texts helped me learn how to write.

RVC: One of your early writing career highlights was, aptly enough, landing a short story in Highlights–one of those mags you studied so carefully. Tell us the story of that big success.

AA: Over four years, I tried getting published in Highlights. After several rejections, I took a break from submitting there. Even though I was slowly building up from first reader passes to personal rejections directly from the fiction editor, I had little hope that Highlights would ever accept one of my stories. It just felt impossible.  So, I focused on magazines which had higher acceptance rates.

One ezine needed stories about Valentine’s Day. This theme inspired me to start writing a story, but I missed the ezine’s submissions deadline. I kept working on the story for several months more. Once it had been polished enough, I thought to myself, I really like this story. Maybe I should try submitting it to Highlights. So off it went in the mail (this was before electronic submissions). Imagine my surprise when I received a Bear Card back! Back then, Highlights used to send a “Bear with us” postcard – basically meaning it was seriously being considered for publication. Still, I didn’t want to get my hopes up. Another couple of months went by. And then I received my self-​addressed stamped envelope back from them. I noticed the envelope had been carefully taped so nothing would fall out. But it was thick like several pages of a manuscript had been sent back to me. I opened the envelope and there was my letter. Highlights had accepted my short story, “A Valentine for Nanima,” which was published in their February 2013 issue.

RVC: Congrats on that. But that publication story has a hard-​to-​believe cool bonus element to it. Wanna share?

AA: My acceptance to Highlights came the same day I found out I was going to be a mama – of twins! A boy and a girl, complete opposites and best friends.

RVC: In 2016, you decided to expand your writing to include picture books. How did that transition go?

AA: It was harder than I realized! Initially, I thought writing picture books would be similar to writing magazine stories, because the word counts are about the same. But after taking classes and workshops and analyzing other picture books, I found out I was wrong! Chapter books (I write these as well) are probably a more natural transition from magazines.

In picture books, page turns (how the text ends on a page to make the reader want to turn to the next page) are important. The book relies on art work to tell the story as much as the text. You don’t need to worry about these with short stories.

Joining an organization like Julie Hedlund’s 12 x 12 Picture Book Writing Challenge has been fundamental in learning more about picture book writing and keeping up with the market. Through this organization, I’ve also learned about work-​for-​hire opportunities and have written several leveled readers and chapter books, including What Would It Take to Make a Hoverboard? and What Would It Take to Make a Jet Pack? (Capstone Press, January 2020). It felt good to put my STEM skills to use again.

RVC: Your debut picture book, Raja’s Pet Camel: The Magic of Hope, came out last week.

AA: My publisher, Cardinal Rule Press, organized a live virtual launch on October 1, 2020, the release day for Raja’s Pet Camel: The Magic of Hope. I read the book to viewers, showed some photographs of the Thar Desert, which is where the book is set, and answered questions from my publisher as well as the audience.

RVC: How did the launch go?

AA: The launch went great – above my expectations! This is in large part due to the strength of my publisher and her team, and the amazing support of my family and friends, the kidlit community, my debut picture book group, critique partners, and my launch team. Launching a book is definitely a community effort.

RVC: What’s the elevator pitch for the story?

AA: Raja is a little boy in India who loves his new pet: a mischievous, date-​loving, baby camel named Kamal. But his father is fed up and determined to sell the camel at the next fair. Raja must use the power of hope to try and change his father’s mind or he might lose Kamal forever.

RVC: What was the breakthrough moment with this manuscript? When did it all finally work?

AA: The process for this book spanned 11 years! I happened to come across a photo I had taken in the Thar Desert in Rajasthan, India of a little boy playing with his camel. This inspired me to write a couple of lines in my writing journal: a little boy throws his arms around his camel, not wanting to sell her, while his dad makes a campfire. (This would later form the desert scene in Raja’s Pet Camel.) The idea was for a short story for ages 8 to 12.

My thoughts sat in that notebook for a few years. Then I took an advanced class at the Institute of Children’s Literature and realized maybe my short story idea would make a better picture book.

At around the same time, I started remembering how there are a lot of animals in India, but hardly any pets. My kids had been asking for a pet, but I kept worrying about how much mischief a pet could make.

This is when the pieces fell together, and I realized the story should be a picture book about a little boy in India trying to stop his mischievous pet camel from being sold at the next fair. This story continued to change through workshops and critiques but the theme stayed the same.

RVC: Rumor has it you had a memorable childhood experience with a camel.

AA: Yes! My first trip to India was when I was three years old. I was in awe of all of the camels and wanted to ride one. My dad set me on a camel’s back, and I was just fine – until the camel stood up! It’s pretty high up there for a three-​year-​old. I started crying and screaming, and this is when we realized I’m terrified of heights – and still am.

RVC: Raja’s Pet Camel has interesting back matter about the Thar Desert. What are your goals for back matter? Got a good mentor text or two that uses back matter in a way you admire?

AA: I see back matter as a way to explain cultural elements found in the story or to supplement the story with additional information.

When my publisher asked me to include the top 10 facts about the Thar Desert, I was happy because most of the facts I’ve personally experienced. I drew inspiration from my memories and experiences, when deciding which facts to include so they also have a personal connection to me. I used Evie’s Field Day by Claire Noland as a mentor text for my book; it’s published by Cardinal Rule Press too, so I could see what type of back matter and how much detail my publisher likes.

For back matter I also enjoy reading author notes because they often tell their own story. Some of my favorites have been in Numenia and the Hurricane: Inspired by a True Migration Story by Fiona Halliday and The Boy Who Dreamed of Infinity: A Tale of the Genius Ramanujan, written by Amy Alznauer and illustrated by Daniel Miyares. It was fascinating to learn about the inspiration behind both books.

RVC: Daniel Miyares is one of our grads here from Ringling College. He’s done some great work!

AA: I definitely liked the illustrations for that book!

RVC: I’m watching the #OwnVoices movement in kidlit with great interest. Beyond the obvious—opening the door for more diverse voices to find audiences—what else do you see happening as a result?

AA: Aside from the beauty of seeing more diverse voices and building bridges with other cultures, I think the #OwnVoices movement will help preserve cultural history and track how cultures change over time. Verbal stories can get lost over time. But if we write them down and they’re published for all to see, it will be that much harder to erase a culture and their stories from history.

RVC: What’s your writing process like? How involved is husband Jay and the kids?

AA: Very involved! My husband is my first Editor-​in-​Chief and often critiques my stories. My kids love to be involved, from helping to pick character names to reading my stories and providing feedback. They have some great ideas! My family has been amazingly supportive. I’m so lucky.

My writing process starts with my notebook and pen, even for my longer books like The Legacy of Rashmi Bazaar (Teacher Created Materials, 2019), a short chapter book for middle graders. I detest typing on the computer, so I write as much as I can in my notebook: fragments of ideas, outlines, paragraphs. On the rare occasion I’ll write out the whole story in my notebook, but normally I move to the computer for that. Once I’ve written a full draft, I let it sit for a few days at least – often weeks – and then go back and revise. I’ll let it sit again, revise, repeat, until the manuscript feels right.

RVC: A final question for this part of the interview. Looking back at when you switched to a writing career, where did you think it’d lead you?

AA: My plan in 2006 was to write short stories and eventually have one published in a magazine. I never expected to have one book published, much less seven by the end of 2020, with more forthcoming and so many short stories published in magazines and educational resources. I’ve been lucky and blessed so far!

RVC: Okay, we’ve reached that point in the interview where the point values are doubled, the stakes are raised, and it’s all about zippiness, because…it’s the SPEED ROUND

Anita, are you ready?

AA: Ready!

RVC: Best place in Tampa for Indian food?

AA: Gateway to India, though it’s actually in St. Pete.

RVC: If you had to live the life of a picture book character for a day, who’d it be?

AA: The little girl in Faith Pray’s The Starkeeper because she spreads hope to everyone

RVC: You’re caught singing in the shower. What song’s the likeliest culprit?

AA: None. That’s prime brainstorming time!

RVC: Which of your twins is most likely to become a kidlit writer?

AA: Both. They both love to write short stories and short chapter books.

RVC: What’s the wear-​it-​out favorite picture book in your family?

AA: There are so many! Hmm… My children’s favorites are Isle of You written by David LaRochelle and illustrated by Jaime Kim and Finding Winnie: The True Story of the World’s Most Famous Bear, written by Lindsay Mattick and illustrated by Sophie Blackall.

RVC: The writing motto/​quote you’ve found most useful over the years?

AA: “The purpose of a writer is to keep civilization from destroying itself.” –Albert Camus

RVC: Thanks so much, Anita! 

Picture Book Review: Your House, My House by Marianne Dubuc

22 September 2020
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (chief rabbit aficionado at Only Picture Books) and OPB newcomer, freelance author/​illustrator Kelly Light.

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

Marianne Dubuc’s new picture book, Your House, My House, almost seems like one of those seek-​and-​find books my kids loved so much in their k‑1 years. On every page of this book, a little block of text is tucked into the leaves of a tree at the top left while the rest of the page–the bulk of it–offers a look inside a multi-​level house full of animals engaged in a variety of actions. Yes, it’s a very special day at 3 Maple Street since it’s Little Rabbit’s birthday. But there’s so much more going on at the same time.

I confess that I find it a bit challenging to connect the text to the characters being referenced since the art is disproportionately large on the page. I’m almost more inclined to just peruse the pictures and imagine my own stories to pair up with the interesting characters versus try to bring the existing text into some kind of connection with the art. Is that a good thing? I’m not sure what to think about it.

Since my responsibility in these reviews is to focus on the story, though, I’ll leave it to Kelly to dive deep into the compelling artwork. While I have lots of appreciation for this book as a whole, I’m giving this a slightly lower ranking than I’d give were I reviewing the entire book as a single thing. With it being such a clearly art-​centric book, there’s almost no other option.

It’s worth checking out, though. Let’s not lose track of that fact.

4 out of 5 pencils

 

–Kelly’s Review of the Illustrations–

I’d like to ask Marianne Dubuc if she’s a fan of the book What Do People Do All Day? after pouring over her new book Your House, My House. Before I even received the book to review, the cover of her book struck a chord deep inside of me. I ripped tape off of boxes from my recent move, to find my own tattered copy of Richard Scarry’s book.

Was it the cross-​sectioned home revealing the inside of the building and goings-​on of what appears to be an early twentieth century, very large old apartment building? The viewer never sees the house with its front wall. That invisible wall allows us to take in all that happens on a very, very busy day at 3 Maple Street.

The SUPREMELY detailed drawings in Marianne’s book appear to be done in great, old-​fashioned pencil and watercolor. Simply–the best. Some touches of colored pencil, here and there. The palette emits a sunny day in soft washes with just the right amount of puddling. My inner art geek is dying to know. Did she work to size? (which means the size of the printed book.) I wonder if that’s the case because there is so much detail. I would imagine working larger to fit it all in, but if Marianne did that, perhaps all of this lovely graphite would close up and darken and lose its silvery tone.

These are the thoughts that fill my head when inspecting another illustrator’s work.

The details are ABUNDANT and the art tells most of the story. The writing here is mostly visual but WHOOO BOY, what kinds of lists Marianne must have made to keep this all straight as she drew! The day of the tiny Bunny’s birthday is filled with four floors of activity, one tree, two sides of the house, and the street out front. The inhabitants are all drawn with charm and deceptive simplicity. Marianne manages to convey all kinds of mood and emotion in her characters. An annoyed Owl, a sick Bear, Terrible Two Mice Triplets, Expectant Fox Family, Hedgehogs waiting for Dad, Cats moving in, Rabbits burning baked goods, Birds in the branches, a Post-​Cat, a Goldilocks breaking and entering, a Wolf chasing down some pigs and a Little Red Riding Hood walking on by. The tiniest of the characters, the ghost, the ladybug, the bee, the mice children, and a very odd Gnome are the only ones that are hardest to read.

Some of their drawings got tight. It was the Gnome that made me put this book onto my Cintiq and blow it up. I stared. ”IS THAT A…GNOME? A GNOME, TOO??” I started to question my own eyes and rubbed them and wondered if Marianne had eye strain, too, after creating the art. It is quite a feat to draw what is the visual equivalent to a silent movie. I had to go back through all of the pages and see where and when this crazy Gnome came into 3 Maple Street! By making me do that, I knew, Marianne had hooked me into this book experience.

I imagine a child POURING over this book, over and over and over to see all of the details, just as I did with my own Scarry book. This feels very classic, looks very classic, and is illustrated with a lot of class. It feels very real in these times that we stay so close to home and perhaps feel so much more together than we have for a long time.

My ONLY wish? That the book was BIG. 11x15 BIG , like my old Richard Scarry book.

Pure pencil, pure watercolors, pure picture book perfection.

4 out of 5 colored pencils


Kelly Light lives in Amherst, MA but grew up down the shore in New Jersey surrounded by giant pink dinosaurs, cotton candy colors, and Skee-​Ball sounds. She was schooled on Saturday-​morning cartoons and Sunday funny pages. She picked up a pencil, started drawing, and never stopped.

Kelly is the author/​Illustrator of the Louise series. Louise Loves Art and Louise and Andie, The Art of Friendship are the first two picture books in the series. Louise Loves Bake Sales and Louise and The Class Pet are the first readers in HarperCollins’ I Can Read program.

Kelly has also illustrated Elvis and the Underdogs and Elvis and the Underdogs: Secrets, Secret Service, and Room Service by Jenny Lee, and The Quirks series by Erin Soderberg.

Website: www.kellylight.com