Agent Interview: Jennifer Rofé (Andrea Brown Literary Agency)

Help me welcome this month’s Industry Insider guest, Jennifer Rofé, a senior agent at Andrea Brown Literary Agency! Welcome, welcome, welcome!!!

As much as I truly enjoy creating snarky biographical introductions for OPB guests, when I see something great that someone else created, I must acknowledge it. Given that, here’s Jennifer’s fantabulous Twitter bio.

Children’s lit agent with @AndreaBrownLit who dreams about being a bakery-​owning cowgirl. Never mind that I don’t bake or have a horse. (she/​her)”

Wow, right? [Making a note to improve my own social media bios in light of seeing this one!] 

And since it’s been a few months since we’ve done a Fun Facts section and I miss their pithy biographical goodness, we’re going to finish this introduction with a “7 Fun Facts about Jennifer” list. Here goes!

  • My first job was writing for a wine trade magazine, and they hired me because I knew nothing about wine. I didn’t even know what Merlot was.
  • My favorite color is yellow.
  • My favorite band is, and always has been, and always will be, the Indigo Girls.
  • My comfort meal is white rice with a fried egg and plátanos.
  • Things I love? “Troublemakers,” sass, underdogs, talking animals, and magic.
  • I am good at dream interpretation.
  • I love hidden passages and secret rooms. One day, I will have a house with both.

Thanks so much for that, Jennifer. Now let’s all zip ahead to the interview and uncover a bit more of the elusive recipe for how a literary agent superstar is made!


RVC: Whenever I have a name question, I now ask it aloud instead of quietly wondering about it in silent semi-​embarrassment. It’s a 2023 resolution of mine! So, here come two questions. 

1) Do you prefer Jen or Jennifer? 

Formally, like for work announcements, I go by Jennifer. But in life, I prefer Jen. So please call me Jen.

2) How do you say your last name?

JR: Row-fay. The accent on the e makes it a hard “a.”

RVC: Gotcha. Thanks for that! Now, you earned a BA in English with a minor in Social and Ethnic Relations from UC Davis. What was the intended career plan with that?

JR: Hahahahaha! I have no idea what the intended career plan was. As I was in line graduating college, I realized that I maybe should have studied Classics and Business. But it all worked out. Seems like it was a bit of a winding road, but in hindsight, I can see how I was getting here all along.  

RVC: You worked as a middle grade teacher for five years. What was the best thing(s) about that time in your life?

JR: Those kids were the best. Except for one class that drove me to drink spiked hot tea in the bathtub!

RVC: Oh, I’ve been there, too.

JR: I always appreciated the kids who other teachers didn’t like.

  • The “troublemaker” who was actually very intelligent. (I’m certain this kid is now either an entrepreneur or a criminal.)
  • The kid who came from a family of underperforming students and so the same was expected of him, but he was very smart. (I helped this child get into a private high school.)
  • The kid who brought a water squirter to school and stood behind a post to spray friends during the passing period. (On the inside, I was laughing, but I had to pretend to be mad.)

Being in middle school can be hard, but there’s something about that time that is a magical twilight.

RVC: What was your teaching superpower?

JR: I was good at bringing the low-​performing students to level, and the principal started intentionally giving me those students. I loved working with those kids, and I really didn’t do anything different with them than I did with my more achieving students. I knew they could get it done and I treated them accordingly.

RVC: What convinced you to make the move from teaching to agenting?

JR: I long knew that I wanted to do something pertaining to children’s media. I thought maybe cartoons, but then I had a summer internship at Disney and it was miserable. Then I thought maybe educational publishing, so perhaps I should become a teacher first, which I did. I also always liked kidlit, and I would wander the bookstores perusing the children’s section, but working in traditional publishing never occurred to me.

Then one day, the office admin at the school where I was working asked what I was doing over the weekend, and I told her I’d probably go to Borders (a blast from the past!) at some point to look at books. She said I should go to Book Passage instead, which is a fantastic indie bookstore in the Bay Area, where I had been living at the time. When I got back to school Monday morning, she had put in my box the monthly newsletter from Book Passage. I noticed that they offered workshops, and there was an upcoming one on children’s literature. Lemony Snicket, Megan McDonald, and an editor from Chronicle were presenting. And so was Literary Agent Andrea Brown.

I remember thinking, What’s a literary agent?

I signed up for the conference–which was a lot of money for me at the time–just to find out what a literary agent is. On the last day of the conference, Andrea presented, and I thought, That’s what I’m going to do. I approached her after and asked how I get her job. And here I am.

RVC: Wow!

JR: That office admin has no idea how she changed my life.

RVC: Who was the first client you signed? 

JR: The first client I signed on my own, in 2006, was Meg Medina, for her first book Milagros: The Girl from Away.

RVC: What was the tipping point with that book? What moved you to an “I’m taking it!” decision?

JR: The tipping point happened very quickly–on page 1. And that’s because even though Meg was writing about a fictional island, I could tell immediately that it was influenced by Cuba. My mom was born and raised in Cuba until her family fled the country, and I recognized Cuba from stories I had been told. In fact, if I recall correctly, I believe one of the first things I said to Meg when we spoke was, “You’re writing about Cuba, aren’t you?”

RVC: It’s clear that you’re deeply invested and interested in identity both from the projects you rep and how you represent yourself in the world.

JR: What most interests me about identity is how we’re perceived versus who we know ourselves to be or who we can become, and how that intersects. For instance, when Stranger Things came out, Joyce was my favorite character. She was perceived as a crazy, kooky lady, but she was right all along, and that nobody listened to her didn’t stop her from doing everything to save her son. Eventually, everybody got on board with Joyce.

In story, I am most interested in the character who is misunderstood, underestimated, overlooked. Even the students I appreciated the most when I was teaching were the ones who were underestimated.

RVC: What do you think is the most common misconception people have about the intersection of identity and writing?

JR: No identity is a monolith.

For instance, I’m half Cuban. Some would assume that I’m Catholic or that my mom’s family went to Miami after fleeing. Neither is true. We’re Cuban Jews, and my mom’s family ended up in Los Angeles.

The nuances of identity are infinite.

RVC: Let’s help writers by digging into industry specifics. Some agencies pass around queries/​manuscripts. How often does that happen at ABLA (the cool acronym for the Andrea Brown Literary Agency)?

JR: Every day.

RVC: What’s something most people don’t know about ABLA

JR: I don’t know if people really understand how collaborative we are. I talk with my colleagues every day, we help each other every day, and our hive-​mind approach has made us a strong, dynamic agency.

RVC: If I asked your ABLA colleagues what your agenting superpower is, what might they say?

JR: My in-​house nickname is Bonus Queen. I’m good at getting creative bonus language in contracts. And it’s so satisfying when those bonuses come through and clients earn additional money.

RVC: What’s your ACTUAL agenting superpower?

JR: When it comes to writers, I’d like to think I’m good at asking the questions that encourage them to pinpoint precisely what they’re trying to accomplish or say with a story. When it comes to illustrators, I’m good at spotting potential in the unexpected. For example, I came across the work of a fine artist whose style I thought would translate to picture books. And we very quickly landed her a picture book.

RVC: What trends is ABLA seeing in terms of picture book submissions?

JR: In terms of submissions we receive, we’re recently seeing texts about gardens, food, identity, and Christmas. There’s also been an uptick in stories that take place outside of a contemporary world–fantasy-esque, I guess you could say.

 RVC: I have two words for you. Big + Sur. 

JR: One of my favorite weekends of the year. ABLA runs the Big Sur Writers Workshops in Big Sur, CA, and Cape Cod, MA. Imagine being surrounded by fellow writers in clean, coastal air, workshopping your manuscript with small groups that are led by conference faculty, going away to revise for hours, strolling the redwoods or the sand to think, attending craft sessions from faculty, dining with colleagues. It’s a magical weekend.

 RVC: What’s a success story that emerged out of Big Sur?

JR: We have several Big Sur success stories–writers or illustrators who have joined ABLA or who have found other agencies and have gone on to get published. Two current successes that come to mind are Eric Rosswood, whose picture book Strong recently won the Stonewall Honor, and Angela Joy, whose picture book Choosing Brave has earned an impressive list of accolades, including most recently a Caldecott Honor.

RVC: You’re known for your The “So What?” Factor presentation.

JR: “So What?” started when I was teaching eighth graders essay writing. If Kayla stated that plastic bottles are polluting our oceans, her next sentences had to explain the “So What?” of this statement. This matters because…. And so on. At some point, I realized that I could do this with clients. If a plot point happens in the story, then there needs to be a “So What?” of that moment.

RVC: Why do you think the presentation is so popular? 

JR: I think this presentation became popular because it’s a simple way to think about how you’re moving your story forward. If X happens, then Y. And if you can’t figure out the Y, then rethink the X. Applying this to TV shows and movies is a great way to get the hang of it. Dirty Dancing is an excellent “So What?” vehicle. Johnny is accused of stealing wallets.

  • So What? Baby knows he couldn’t have stolen the wallets because she was with him all night.
  • So What? Protecting Johnny will mean that everybody learns what Baby has been hiding, including her parents.
  • So What? Their perception of her is going to be shattered.
  • So What? Well, lots of things, including that Baby needs that to happen so that she can come into herself as an independent young woman. Also, the dad is going to face his own biases and limitations. Everything that happens in that movie matters and moves the plot forward.

I haven’t entirely pinpointed how to do this with picture book texts because there is variation in the format. It can still generally apply, like with a more narrative structure, but concept books, for instance, might not have a “So What?” I believe I first started “So What?” as an agent with Mike Boldt! When he shares a new idea with me now, he often comes prepared with the “So What?” on hand.

RVC: What’s your best tip for ensuring the “So What?” game stays generative and supportive?

JR: You can certainly “So What?” your manuscript into oblivion. The core of it is understanding how each of your plot points moves the story forward and impacts your characters in a way that matters to the story.

RVC: How often do you participate in other workshops/​conferences?

JR: I mostly participate in SCBWI conferences, but I took a break after having my second child four years ago. Then COVID happened. But I’m slowly starting to do more conferences again. I enjoy them. They satisfy the teacher in me.

RVC: You’re an author, too. How did Piggies in the Pumpkin Patch come about?

JR: That was a happy accident. Mary Peterson was working on the story and we were doing a lot of back-​and-​forth, when suddenly I could see what the story needed. I asked her if I could take some extreme liberties with the text, and she said yes. So, I did, and we decided to team up.

RVC: What’s the most useful lesson that came about from that book?

JR: That revising is really hard. We almost quit during revisions. The experience helped me understand what writers go through. I am a more empathetic agent because of that experience.

RVC: In this post-​COVID world, I like to ask a health and wellness question in interviews. Here’s yours. What do you do to de-stress? 

JR: I build and remodel houses in my mind—I remodel mine almost daily—and look at homes/​interior design stuff online. If I weren’t working in publishing, I’d be interested in working in construction.

RVC: One last question for this part of the interview. What forthcoming projects are you especially excited about? 

JR: I’ll talk only about picture books that have been announced so I’m not spoiling secrets. The dynamo duo of author Dev Petty and illustrator Mike Boldt have a book publishing this year called Elmore the Christmas Moose. It’s a hilarious story about a moose who applies to be one of Santa’s reindeer, except he can’t fly. They also have a second Life Lessons from Chip the Dog book coming next spring, this one called Don’t Trust Cats.

RVC: OPB did an interview with Dev right here! What else are you stoked about?

JR: Author-​illustrator Sasha Mayer has her first book in a new series coming, called Squash, the Cat. It’s a funny and joyful story about a girl named Maggie and her best friend, Squash, who is her cat. And author-​illustrator Renée Kurilla has a book called It’s Fall coming this year. It’s a rhyming story about the delights of fall, and it’s illustrated in a limited fall palette. It’s cozy and wonderful.

RVC: Alright, Jen. You’ve been waiting for it. I’ve been waiting for it. The OPB audience has been waiting for it. And it’s now here!! THE SPEED ROUND!!! Lightning-​fast questions followed by shockingly short answers, please. Are you ready?

JR: Yes.

RVC: Guiltiest reading pleasure?

JR: I don’t feel guilty about any of it.

RVC: If someone narrated your life, who would you want to be the narrator? 

JR: Marin Ireland.

RVC: Which Indigo Girls song would make the best picture book? 

JR: My heart bursts that you ask this question because nobody ever has. And I know the answer because I’ve spent time thinking about it. It’s “Power of Two.” The illustrations would depict a parent picking up a child from school, and then they go on a drive to have a picnic and hike around and play in a field of sorts. Or something like this. Sorry this wasn’t a short answer!

RVC: What’s the One That Got Away?

JR: I will never, ever tell.

RVC: When your kidlit career is finally complete, what text should be on the career tombstone?

JR: “So What?” Juuuust kidding.

RVC: Thanks so much, Jen! This was a real treat.

JR: Thank YOU, Ryan!

Educational Activities: Watch Out for the Lion! by Brooke Hartman

Watch Out for the Lion!
Author: Brooke Hartman
Illustrator: Anna Süßbauer
7 February 2023
Page Street Kids
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “Readers beware—there’s a ferocious lion in this book! The book warns that it has seen the lion already. First its bristly tail, then clashing claws, twitchy ears, fearsome fangs… and it’s lying in wait to turn any unsuspecting passerby into a child cheeseburger or rugrat ravioli.

But does a brushy tail always belong to a lion? When you touch the curvy claws, will they be attached to a paw? You never really know what might be lurking around the corner in this surprising story that challenges readers to face their darkest fears, and maybe even laugh about them.


Educational Activities inspired by Watch Out for the Lion!:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • What do you think this book will be about?
    • Where and when is this story taking place?
    • How do you think this story is going to end?
    • Who do you think the main character is? What do you think they might be like?
    • What are you looking forward to learning or discovering in the book?
    • Have you read any other books by the same author or illustrator? If so, what did you like about them?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • Despite all the warnings about the lion, did you ever feel as if you should stop reading? Why/​why not?
    • Which of the creatures that wasn’t a lion were you most surprised to find in this book?
    • What did you think of the book’s ending?
    • What do you think is the message of the story?
    • Which picture did you like the most? Why?
    • Did you enjoy this book? Why/​why not?
  • Drawing–Much of the fun of this book comes from seeing how part of an animal looks like it could be part of a lion. What other animals could be mistaken for a lion because of their teeth, fur, claws, or other features? (Maybe a snake, elephant, eagle, or hippo?) Use colored pencils, crayons, or markers to show how one or more of these animals might just look like a lion. Consider sharing your work with a friend or family member.
  • Crafting–Lions are awesome, so let’s create some of our own by crafting. Get an adult to help! 
  • Further Reading–Lions are pretty cool, so let’s check out other picture books about these mighty, ferocious animals. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)

Author Interview: Kirsten Larson

This month’s Author Interview is with Kirsten Larson, a Los Angeles writer who “writes books for curious kids.” Not only has she published a number of fine nonfiction picture books, but she’s also created a middle grade graphic nonfiction book and more than two dozen books for the school and library market.

In addition to all of her writing, Kirsten teaches at The Writing Barn and serves as a “nonfiction and query corner ‘elf’” for Julie Hedlund’s popular 12x12 Picture Book Writing Challenge. Kirsten’s also the proud owner of a house “filled with LEGOs, laughter, and lots of books.”

Let’s find out more about how Kirsten does all of this!


 

RVC: It’s strange to think how many interviews I’ve done for this blog with current and former rocket scientists, and you’re in the club, too. There’s probably a STEM joke in there somewhere…

KL: Actually, I’m not a rocket scientist, but I worked WITH rocket scientists at NASA.

RVC: For the purpose of jokemaking, I think that totally counts! But for factual reasons, what did you actually do there?

KL: I handled public relations for NASA’s Space Shuttle and International Space Station programs, as well as their aeronautics programs. It was great training for science storytelling through print, video, and photography as well as for working with news media.

RVC: What’s the most common misconception people have about rocket scientists?

KL: I think many people have a very Big Bang Theory/​Sheldon Cooper perception of rocket scientists, as in they are so smart they don’t have a sense of humor or are almost robots. But most rocket scientists I’ve met are pretty regular people often with great senses of humor and a myriad of interests.

RVC: Now here’s the Saturn V‑sized question we’re all dying to know—how did yet another former NASA person begin writing picture books?

KL: My kids loved nonfiction books when they were little. At the public library, they’d pull books off the shelves about space, weather. Anything, really. As I read the books with them, I began to think I could probably write them, and would love an excuse to become a mini expert in all kinds of different topics.

RVC: Let’s talk about you the writer. What aspect of your writing life gives away where you’re from and how you were raised? 

KL: I write about a lot of different things–art, history, science, engineering. My parents really encouraged a love of learning. My mom was a schoolteacher with shelves of picture books we all read together. And my parents had other shelves packed with mystery novels, poetry, Shakespeare, Russian literature, you name it. And then there was my grandmother with her full set of encyclopedias. I was encouraged to read whatever I wanted. There weren’t any limits. And I read everything.

RVC: Who are some of your kidlit world heroes?

KL: I’m a big fan of Melissa Stewart. She has some of the best classroom resources around for teachers working with students on informational writing. And Melissa is such a champion of nonfiction for kids in general, which can get short shrift by teachers and librarians who often prefer fiction. I just read Melissa’s Tree Hole Homesillustrated by Amy Hevron–which is excellent.

RVC: Let’s zero in on YOUR books. What’s the story behind your first published picture book?

KL: My first picture book was Wood, Wire, Wings: Emma Lilian Todd Invents an Airplane, which is illustrated by Tracy Subisak (Calkins Creek). I learned about Lilian Todd through an illustration in the bestselling book Rosie Revere, Engineer by Andrea Beaty, illustrated by David Roberts. I have lived and worked around airplanes my whole life and had never heard of her! I made it my mission to make sure the world knew about her.

RVC: What’s the most useful lesson that book taught you?

KL: Writing is a lot like engineering. You write a draft. That’s your prototype. But then you test it with your critique group and tweak it to improve it. And failure is always part of the process. You have to persist.

RVC: What part of that book are you most proud of?

KL: I really learned how to write on that book, thanks to my editor, Carolyn Yoder. It took me a long time to figure out how to write emotionally resonant scenes, as well as the structure, which follows the engineering design process.

RVC: Please put the following in order. 

  • I wrote my first picture book.
  • I got an agent.
  • I started writing for the education market.
  • I became a writing coach.
  • I did a glorious interview with the much beloved picture-​book blog, Only Picture Books.

KL:

  1. I wrote my first picture book.
  2. I started writing for the education market.
  3. I got an agent.
  4. I became a writing coach.
  5. I did a glorious interview with the much-​beloved picture-​book blog, Only Picture Books (which is obviously the pinnacle of my career! )

RVC: Love it! Now, in retrospect, would you have done it differently if you could’ve changed the order?

KL: You mean, besides speeding up the whole process from writing my first picture book to getting an agent, which took four years? Just kidding. I’m pretty happy with the way things went.

RVC: How did getting an agent affect your writing career?

KL: I think it’s really tough to work without an agent in today’s market. Fewer and fewer publishers take unsolicited submissions. So, aside from being able to sell work, working with Lara (Perkins of Andrea Brown Literary Agency) has made me a better writer for sure.

RVC: What’s Lara’s agenting superpower?

KL: She’s the right type of editorial agent for me, always asking the right questions or helping me brainstorm, so I can create the books I envision. And she’s great at encouraging me not to give up when I take on hard things and then try to backtrack.

RVC: What would Lara say is your writing superpower?

KL: My superpower is a willingness to completely reimagine manuscripts. We’re talking complete restructuring of a picture book or accepting a challenge to turn a picture book into a graphic novel script. On the latest picture book I’m working on, I tossed out everything but the title. And I’ve done that several times with this particular book.

RVC: I notice that you enjoy using alliteration, even though you’re primarily writing nonfiction picture books vs, say, humorous poetry or read-​a-​loud fiction.

KL: I learned a lot about writing lyrically from Renee LaTulippe of the Lyrical Language Lab. You can punch up any prose with poetic techniques, making it more musical and fun to read.

RVC: What’s your best tip for creating effective alliteration?

KL: My alliteration secret weapon is the Thesaurus.com. Maybe I’ve written that the bee is flying. I can look up synonyms for fly and come up with “the bee buzzes,” for example. My other biggest tip is not to overdo the alliteration, or you might find your reader tripping over the words.

RVC: You write a lot of picture book nonfiction, and not just for the educational market. Why are you so drawn to those?

KL: As you know, picture books take a LONG time, even before you sell them to a publisher. It’s so important to pick stories you are passionate about and don’t mind coming back to over and over again in revision. I have more stamina when it comes to writing nonfiction. I care more deeply about sharing those stories, and I feel more invested in getting them right.

RVC: You’ve got a new picture book coming out this month—The Fire of Stars: The Life and Brilliance of the Woman Who Discovered What Stars Are Made Of. What’s the elevator pitch?

KL:  Astronomer and astrophysicist Cecilia Payne was the first person to discover what burns at the heart of stars. This lyrical picture book biography powerfully parallels the kindling of Cecilia Payne’s own curiosity and her scientific career with the process of a star’s birth, from mere possibility in an expanse of space to an eventual, breathtaking explosion of light.

RVC: Picture books in general, but nonfiction ones in specifics, are all about trimming, trimming, trimming, even though the initial material is often so darn great (and often 5x the length of any sensible picture book). Given that sobering editorial reality, what terrific thing didn’t make it into the final iteration of the new book?

KL: Um, Cecilia Payne’s entire career? The book ends with Cecilia’s discovery that stars are mostly hydrogen and helium. She was 25, and it was her dissertation. She wasn’t even employed as an astronomer yet! But Cecilia’s pursuit of the thrill of discovery was what the book was about. So I had to move so much to the timeline in the back matter, including all her work as an astronomer at Harvard where she eventually became the first woman to serve as head of the Astronomy Department (in 1956, 21 years later!)

RVC: I rarely ask people questions about writing coaching, so I’m going to remedy that right now. What made you choose to become a writing coach?

KL: Even before I began to teach nonfiction writing, people would ask if I did manuscript critiques, but I always declined. Finally, I decided the universe was trying to tell me something, and maybe I did have something to offer my fellow writers. I take a very collaborative approach, trying to help writers achieve their vision for the story and tuning into why the story is so important for them to tell.

RVC: In all of your experience as a writing coach, what has surprised you the most?

KL: I’m always surprised at how it’s far easier to help clients diagnose and fix their manuscripts, but so difficult to see my own work clearly. When your heart is on the page, it’s tough to take a step back and look at the work objectively and ask if it’s achieving what you want it to achieve.

RVC: What’s the best advice you’d give to someone considering hiring a writing coach to help them break into the picture book marketplace?

KL: First, I would say that most of the time, you don’t need to pay a book coach or editor before submitting your picture book to agents or editors. Most people don’t. I think coaches can be helpful when you’ve exhausted your resources, like your critique partners for example, and you are stuck and need a fresh set of eyes. But people also need to remember, hiring a coach isn’t magic. Getting a book published is part luck and timing too, not just great writing. If I knew exactly what would sell at any point in time, I’d have dozens of books under contract.

RVC: One final question for this part of the interview, Kirsten. It’s brag time! What projects do you have on the NASA launch pad beyond The Fire of Stars?

KL: I have two upcoming projects that I’m able to share. I have the graphic novel The Light of Resistance, illustrated by Barbara McClintock (Roaring Brook), the true story of Rose Valland, a French curator turned spy who saved countless precious art works from the Nazis. My next picture book is This Is How You Know, illustrated by Cornelia Li (Little, Brown), a lyrical love letter to science.

RVC: Alrighty! It’s now time for the NASA-​rocketship-​fast SPEED ROUND. Let’s begin with an old black-​and-​white science fiction film countdown to create some delicious drama.

THREE

TWO

ONE

BLAST OFF!!!!

RVC: If you could only have one app on your phone, it’d be… 

KL: Oh, geez. I’ll go with Libby, the library app. I was never a big ebook reader before March 2020. But when libraries shut down, Libby was the only way I could get new books at first. And I learned I loved eBooks (for reading novels, not picture books). I put books on hold and can check them out as they become available or ask the library to come back to me if I’m not ready yet. And I don’t lose my place in line. Plus, how handy is it to have a book in your back pocket or purse at all times for those moments you’re stuck in a long check-​out line?

RVC: What animal or plant should be renamed?

KL: Naked mole rats are neither moles nor rats. Who came up with this name? Interestingly, they are the only eusocial mammals, operating much like honeybees do in their hive.

The naked mole rat shall henceforth be known as HivePup. These guys totally deserve some love.

RVC: If you had a NASA rocket that you wanted to hide, where would you stash it?

KL: Definitely in the back of a giant refrigerator. Based on my experiences with my family, no one would ever move things around and find it. (They tease me that my response to all their “Where is?” questions is, “You have to move some things around.”)

RVC: What are five things you couldn’t do your writing without?

KL: Coffee. Books–and not just for research. I am a big advocate for using books in your category and genre as mentor texts. The internet–I am always amazed at the things I can now get online that I had to read on microfiche 20 years ago. My Macbook–I cannot write on a phone or iPad. Journal–I’m a visual writer, and I often thumbnail out the structure of books spread by spread, especially when revising.

RVC: Who sets the standard for writing STEM picture books?

KL: Rather than pointing out someone who sets the standard, I want to point out the diversity in STEM storytelling these days, which is so amazing. We are really in a golden age of STEM books. You have STEM books showcasing neurodiversity (like Jen Malia’s Too Sticky!) and cultural traditions (like Rajani LaRocca’s Bracelets for Bina’s Brothers). Funny books like Sue Heavenrich’s 13 Ways to Eat a Fly. And lovely, lyrical books like Be a Tree by Maria Gianferrari. There is truly something for everyone.

RVC: What’s the best compliment a child ever gave your writing?

KL:  One of my favorite thank you notes had this riddle: “What do you call a great book? WOOD, WIRE, WINGS!” Kids are so clever.

RVC: Thanks so much, Kirsten!

Picture Book Review: My Baba’s Garden by Jordan Scott

My Baba’s Garden
Author: Jordan Scott
Illustrator: Sydney Smith
Neal Porter Books
7 March 2023
32 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and new OPB friend, Olga Herrera.

–Ryan’s Review of the Writing–

Jordan Scott’s My Baba’s Garden promises to be an unusual–perhaps magical–journey right from the start when the first-​person narrator states “My Baba lives in a chicken coop beside the highway” and that chicken coop is near a sulfur mill that’s “shaped like an Egyptian pyramid.” Pretty cool!

What we quickly realize is that the young boy narrator has an imagination that’s as wide as the ocean. By the second spread we see it in action again as he notices distant mountains that “look like whale bellies.” Of course, Sydney Smith obliged with terrific art that has the right undulations and curves that do suggest whale-ish-ness.

It’s interesting that Dad regularly drops off the child to spend the day with the child’s Baba who is “hiding in the steam of boiling potatoes.” I’ll bet plenty of young readers know life situations like this that are anything but the Leave It to Beaver family that just isn’t realistic any longer. Seeing this kind of alternative childcare situation should prove welcome to those readers.

While Baba lives in a tiny space that indeed might’ve once been a chicken coop, it’s “crammed with food from her garden,” and food becomes a way to connect grandparent and child. “We don’t talk very much,” the boy observes, and it seems clear that there’s a language barrier that’s easily overcome by food, tenderness, and familial love.

After feeding the boy breakfast, his Baba walks him to school. When it rains, however, she pauses and loads up a glass jar with all the worms she can find wriggling on the pavement and in the grass. Later, we find out that she releases the worms in her garden where they do their worm-​work that’s healthy and welcome for any vegetable garden. It’s one of many quiet but important lessons that Baba teaches the narrator (and readers).

But one day, Baba “leaves her chicken coop home and moves in with us.” The reason why isn’t explained, though it’s easy enough to infer that it’s for the health reasons. Leave it to this observant boy to notice that a new big building now stands where her house used to be, and her garden has turned into an uncared-​for jungle.

I won’t spoil the ending, but even though their situation has changed, the boy and his Baba continue to have a special, tender relationship that’s wondrous to witness. Coupled with Sydney Smith’s fine art, the ending of this book is delightful and full of heart.

Even without knowing Jordan Scott’s background as a poet (I recommend his debut collection Silt), I’d recognize the careful, precise use of language one expects from a wordsmith. With sound repetition (“sees worms squirming” and “kneel next”) and vivid similes (“My Baba hums like a night full of bugs when she cooks”), this story is a pleasure to read.

It’s no surprise that an Author’s Note reveals that the narrator had a Baba in his life that did most of the things the book’s Baba does. We should all be so lucky as to have a loving Baba like that in our lives.

Well done, Jordan and Sydney.

4.5 out of 5 pencils

 

–Olga’s Review of the Illustrations–

Sydney Smith’s illustrations in My Baba’s Garden perfectly complement this beautiful and emotional story.

Sydney has painted memories!

Looking at the illustrations in My Baba’s Garden, I feel I’ve entered her home and should whisper as I read this book. Sydney’s loose watercolor helps us see these memories through sometimes teary eyes or when the sun comes through a window and causes you to squint a bit. His expert use of lighting is dramatic and impactful, and so beautiful. In every scene, the light is like a friend, welcoming.

The effect of this dramatic lighting is most pronounced when we meet Baba, the grandmother in the story. The spread where we first see this important character is filled with gorgeous pops of bright gouache color on a muted background and grounded by the strong shadow cast by the grandmother. This spread said everything you need to know about the character, her lifestyle, and her routine. It is breathtaking how much detail is available to us without the use of line.

The simplicity of the character design and the objects themselves balance the complexity of the illustration. Sydney provides just enough information to allow your eye to finish the rest of the story.

I found his use of color, predominantly yellow, very intentional in each panel. It is sparingly used and reserved for areas that are meant to call our attention. In a muted palette, the spots of vibrant yellow and a few reds are gorgeous and feel to float and be more solid than the rest of the painting. These pops of color are like the gestures of love the grandmother shows her grandson with no need for words. It’s no accident when you realize the color yellow is reserved for the boy’s raincoat.

In the spread where the boy explains what has happened to his grandmother’s unique home, we are invited to sit quietly with him in deep thought. It is such a powerful moment–expertly illustrated. The boy’s isolated eye draws us in while we slowly take in the information of what is happening outside of the room, all through reflections on the window. It is breathtaking.

Throughout the book, you will find patterns on cloth, or dishes, that give you a clear understanding of the rich tradition of the grandmother.

The gesture of kissing the food when it falls down is a tradition I am familiar with in my own family, and that moment when the boy kisses the apple slice made my heart ache. Sydney conveys emotion so well, and he does it quietly and elegantly. Speaking of quiet moments, the panel where the close-​up of Baba’s face with lighting from the window and the love in her eyes is gorgeous and wasn’t lost in me how juxtaposing it with the rain scene below ties the two characters in different worlds now. The noisy rain versus the quiet room. And both characters see each other.

In these two connecting scenes, the red of her smiling lips bounced on his boots and cheeks. Once again, a splosh of color balances the sadness of the scene with the love of the relationship.

Painting emotion is one of Sydney’s fortes, and My Baba’s Garden is the perfect harmony of nostalgia and love.

5 out of 5 crayons


Olga Herrera (she/​her) is an author and illustrator of children’s books. She earned her bachelor’s of Fine Arts from the Ringling College of Art and Design with a major in Illustration.

Olga’s hilarious and endearing debut picture book, The Unwelcome Surprise, will be published in April 2023 by Feiwel & Friends, Macmillan.

One of her passion projects is the podcast she co-​founded, Illo Chat, a podcast about the journey into professional Illustration and the world of children’s book publishing.

As a long-​time member of the Society of Children’s Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI), she has served as a writing and illustration mentor for her regional chapter (MD/​DE/​WV) and has won several illustration competitions.

Olga is multicultural, Cuban and Ecuadorian, and is bilingual in Spanish and English. She was born in Miami, Florida, and grew up in Ecuador, a beautifully diverse country that remains close to her heart. As a teenager, she returned to the United States, where she began her interest in the arts. She is a visual storyteller, often looking for a napkin and pen to jot down some fantastic idea that is sure to disappear in the blink of an eye. When she is not creating her content, she teaches Illustration in traditional and digital techniques or creative writing for fiction picture books.

She lives in the picturesque state of Maryland with her husband, two children, and too many pets who patiently listen to her ideas.

You can find out what projects she is working on by following her on Instagram @olgachildrensillustrator, and on Twitter @OlgaIllustrator.

Her website is www.OlgaHerrera.me