Editor Interview: Catherine Laudone (Paula Wiseman Books)

This month’s Industry Insider Interview is with Catherine Laudone, a children’s book editor at Paula Wiseman Books. Prior to joining Simon & Schuster in 2013, she graduated with a BFA in Writing, Literature, and Publishing from Emerson College and completed several internships at children’s publishing houses and literary agencies, including HarperCollins and Sourcebooks. She is also currently pursuing her MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults at Vermont College of Fine Arts.

Over the last nine years, she’s edited picture books, middle grade, and young adult novels in a wide range of genres. Her authors’ titles have been New York Times bestsellers, Junior Library Guild selections, Indies New Voices and Indies Kids’ Next Pick selections. They have also been chosen for state reading and award longlists, and received starred reviews.

When Catherine isn’t editing, writing, or reading, she likes to throw pottery, crochet, bake, play tennis, and watch Gilmore Girls reruns. And, quite reasonably, she’s a devout fan of all things chocolate.

Let’s get to the interview so we can learn more!


RVC: What aspect/​part of you today gives away where you’re from and how you were raised?

CL: Growing up on Long Island, I was very close to my extended family—especially my Nana and cousins. My immediate family moved to New Jersey when I was in seventh grade, but we maintained those close relationships over the years. So, my love of stories centered on family and intergenerational relationships reflects my upbringing.

RVC: What influence did your family have on your love for stories?

CL: Growing up, every week my mom took my brothers and I to the library. We even had a designated “library bag” that we would load up with books. And both my parents would read to us every night before bed, fostering a love of stories and books that continues today.

RVC: That’s such a familiar story with agents and editors–I love it. Now, when you chose to attend Emerson College’s BFA program, were you planning to become a full-​time writer and editor?

CL: Yes, going into college I knew I wanted to write and edit children’s books. So, I chose Emerson’s program because it had the best of both worlds—writing and publishing within one degree.

RVC: What lesson from your time at Emerson do you find most useful today?

CL: Emerson College is where I learned to “speed read” and read multiple books at a time. These skills have been helpful, as I often have to multitask and work on many different projects daily as an editor.

RVC: Care to share a tip on how to speed read?

CL:  Speed reading is a fancy word for skimming. Sometimes when another colleague shares a longer novel for second reads, I skim or “speed read” several chapters to get a sense of voice and the story’s overall direction. Practice is the best tip I can give for learning to speed read or skim.

RVC: How did you land internships in publishing? And how valuable were those in terms of getting a full-​time job as an editor?

CL: I looked up internships online on my own, applied, and interviewed for them. I was fortunate that my parents lived about an hour outside of New York City, so I was able to live at home and intern in the city during the summers, between college semesters. I did a few internships in Boston during my semesters as well. Those internships gave me real-​world experience in the children’s publishing industry and helped when it came time for me to apply for entry level editorial jobs in children’s publishing.

RVC: I’m always interested in imprints named after someone because they feel so specific and distinct. Now, I have my own answer here, but I’m curious—in your mind, what makes a Paula Wiseman book a Paula Wiseman book?

CL: A Paula Wiseman book celebrates the joy of being a child—the excitement and magic of new experiences, learning, and building relationships. And a Paula Wiseman book reflects the wonderfully diverse world that we all live in.

RVC: What’s the story behind the first picture book you acquired?

CL: Some graduating seniors from RISD [Rhode Island School of Design] came into the office one day for a portfolio review. I stopped to flip through the portfolio of a talented young woman named Hanna Cha. There was a stunning color sketch of a girl riding on a huge tiger’s back. I asked “Is there a story that goes with this art?” Hanna explained that she had a partial rough dummy that she’d done for school but the story itself was unfinished. I asked her to send it to me and from there we worked on the story together until it was ready to share at my editorial staff meeting. I was given the greenlight to acquire it and that story became Tiny Feet Between the Mountains.

RVC: If you had to summarize the most important lesson you learned over the start-​to-​finish process of that book getting published, what would it be?

CL: I learned that there is no “formula” for editing picture books. I had shadow-​edited other picture books with my supervisor prior to acquiring this one, but parts of his process didn’t naturally fit into how Hanna and I worked together. So, I adapted his process based on what worked for us and figured out the rest as I went. It was Hanna’s debut picture book as well, so it was nice to experience the learning curve together. That’s what makes editing picture books—or any book for that matter—so much fun. Each story is a unique puzzle waiting to be pieced together.

RVC: Describe a typical workday as an Editor at Paula Wiseman Books.

CL: Things have changed since the pandemic. I used to start my day with a long commute and lots of in-​person interactions, but now I work from home and Zoom with colleagues. But the job has remained the same. On a typical day, I am providing feedback on interiors of a picture book, editing a novel, giving my thoughts on a jacket design and art, writing catalog copy, sending requested materials to our Sales or Publicity teams, answering agents’ and authors’ questions via email, and attending meetings and acquiring books.

It’s a fast-​paced, hands-​in-​every-​cookie-​jar kind of job and that’s what I love about it. I’m never bored.

RVC: How much time do you have these days to read for pleasure?

CL: For a few years I fell behind on reading for pleasure—when you’re reading all day for work, sometimes it’s the last thing you want to do when you’re off the clock. But starting my MFA program at Vermont College of Fine Arts a year and a half ago made me get back into reading. I read a minimum of 50 children’s books per semester and annotate/​write critical essays on some of them.

RVC: Wow!

CL: Today, I make time to read for pleasure (and for school), and I go to the library once a week to check out picture books and graphic novels. Although I will admit that I consume novels mostly in the audiobook format these days. It’s easier to listen while doing the dishes, making dinner, or driving somewhere than it is to find time to sit down and read a physical copy.

RVC: No shame there–I do the same, which helps me justify having a commute. Please tell me about a time when things didn’t go the way you wanted. 

CL: There have been times when I gave notes and asked an author to do a revision and resubmit, in the hopes that I could bring the revision to my staff meeting and get the greenlight to take it to acquisitions. But sometimes those projects I’ve given notes on just don’t pan out and I have to pass. It’s disappointing in those cases but I always hope that my notes helped the author make the story a little stronger and that they will find the right home for their project, even if it’s not with me.

RVC: What’s one of your favorite success stories as an editor?

CL: That’s easy—Share Some Kindness, Bring Some Light, Apryl Stott’s New York Times bestselling debut picture book is one of my favorite success stories. When we used to be in the office, I would sometimes get postcards from illustrators advertising their work. One day I received one from Apryl, showing a little girl and a bear in the wintry woods. The bear wore a Santa Lucia wreath and red scarf. I was so charmed by the art that I cold-​emailed Apryl’s agent and asked if she had a story for these two adorable characters.

From there, Apryl and I spent months working on the story together and I went on to acquire it. Fast-​forward to when the book comes out during the height of the pandemic in 2020, and Barnes & Noble picks it for a holiday promotion! Then the Library of Congress picks the story for their National Holiday Read-​Aloud! With all this love for Apryl, the book hits the New York Times bestseller list for a few consecutive weeks. It was a major milestone for both me and Apryl and a true homegrown author-​illustrator success story.

RVC: What do you think of the state of kidlit right now?

CL: I think the kidlit landscape is in a state of evolution. Sure, there are some growing pains that come with that, but I’m encouraged to see so many new voices emerging and telling the stories of underrepresented groups of children and teens.

RVC: Your debut picture book—She Kept Dancing: The True Story of a Professional Dancer with a Limb Difference—comes out from Macmillan in fall 2023. Congrats on becoming an author!

CL: Thank you so much!

RVC: She Kept Dancing is co-​authored. What’s the story behind how this book and your writing partnership came to be?

CL: I have always loved watching the Radio City Rockettes at the Radio City Christmas Spectacular and on TV during the Macy’s Thanksgiving Day Parade. So, I was intrigued when I saw an online article about Sydney Mesher, the first Radio City Rockette with a visible disability. I instantly read it and was so inspired by Sydney’s story. My first thought was “wow, this would make an incredible picture book.” I cold-​emailed Sydney and her two agencies, asking if she’d be interested in discussing the possibility of a picture book. I was delighted when Sydney herself responded and said she was interested. I started interviewing Sydney and the story of her career and her levels of determination and perseverance were incredible. I assumed I would hire a cowriter to help tell the story and I would be the editor of the book.

Things came to a halt when we went into COVID lockdown and the initial proposal wasn’t approved by the Radio City Rockettes. But I couldn’t get Sydney’s story out of my mind—and the more I thought about it, the more I wanted to be the one to help write and tell her story. I reached out again and Sydney and I reconnected. I asked if Sydney would be open to coauthoring the book with me and she agreed. Then we came up with an entirely new angle for her story and that’s the version that wound up finding a home with Emily Settle at Macmillan. I am incredibly grateful to have Sydney as my coauthor and Natelle Quek as our illustrator—it’s been a fantastic collaboration all around.

RVC: How is the process different for an established editor like yourself in terms of submitting a picture book manuscript?

CL: It’s actually not different for me at all! I still have my literary agent submit a picture book manuscript to editors on my behalf. I have to wait for their feedback and receive rejections and requests for revise and resubmits the same as anyone else.

RVC: How has the process (so far!) with She Kept Dancing informed your work as an editor? 

CL: While working on She Kept Dancing, I really had to be sensitive and thoughtful about how I portrayed Sydney as a disabled individual—I had to make sure to capture who she was as a person apart from her disability, while also still make sure that her limb difference and her challenges were portrayed accurately. And I had to put myself in her shoes emotionally and mentally to make sure her character arc was genuine and compelling. As an editor, I look for the same level of care and sensitivity at the craft level when reviewing submissions, especially those featuring disabled characters.

RVC: What’s the most interesting thing about Sydney Mesher that didn’t make it into the book?

CL: I think we managed to get everything in there, actually! So, you’ll have to read the book and decide for yourself what is the most interesting fact about Sydney.

RVC: You’re currently pursuing an MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults at Vermont College of Fine Arts. You’ve already got a successful career in the industry, so do you find it a little weird?

CL: Not really, because they are two separate careers within the same industry. Yes, there is some overlap when it comes to application of craft. But when I’m an editor, I’m helping another author or illustrator tell the best story they can and make their dreams a reality. When I’m an author, I’m telling my own stories and going after my own writing dreams. I chose to pursue my MFA in Writing for Children and Young Adults to take my own writing to the next level. Being able to apply what I’ve learned to my editor career is an added bonus.

RVC: How many times has a classmate (or a teacher?) pitched you an idea for Paula Wiseman Books?

CL: I’m pleased to say that this has never happened. Sure, sometimes a classmate or advisor might ask my opinion on something publishing-​related if they know I’m an editor. But they never pitch their own books to me. That’s what I love about VCFA—in the program I’m just another fellow writer and student who is there to learn and grow. And people are very respectful of that boundary.

RVC: Editor, author, consultant, freelancer, student. How do your various roles feed each other?

CL: All my roles feed each other in an endless cycle of creativity and critical thinking. I have to be creative in coming up with my own stories and offering feedback on authors’ and illustrators’ stories. And I think critically to find craft-​based solutions and ask the right questions that help both myself and my authors and illustrators best execute those stories.

RVC: You sound busy! What do you do to de-stress?

CL: Going to the gym or for a walk helps a lot. And I like to refill my creative well by learning new things. During the last two years I learned how to throw pottery, but lately I’ve gotten back into crocheting and trying new, harder patterns. Spending time with family and friends is also a great way to de-stress.

RVC: One last question for this part of the interview. What upcoming projects are you most excited about?

CL: As an author, I’m of course excited about She Kept Dancing. And I have a few other works-​in-​progress that I’m excited about but can’t share at the moment. As an editor, I am very excited about some new books that my authors and illustrators have coming out:

RVC: Okay, Catherine. It’s time for the LIGHTNING ROUND. Zippy questions and zoomy answers, please. Are you ready?

CL: Bring it on!

RVC: Gilmore Girls…great TV show or the greatest TV show?

CL: Great TV show—it’s a classic but it does have its flaws.

RVC: Most underappreciated Gilmore Girls character?

CL: That’s a tie between Kirk and Lane! Kirk is great comedic relief, and Lane is the BFF that Rory never deserved or truly appreciated, I think.

RVC: Favorite recipe from (or inspired by) the show?

CL: I own the Gilmore Girls recipe books! So, I have to say Sookie’s blueberry lemon shortcake was delicious!

RVC: What’s your most important good habit/​routine as an editor?

CL: Never answering work emails on the weekend. It’s a good habit, to help keep a healthy balance between my professional and personal life.

RVC: A favorite picture book of 2021 that you didn’t edit?

CL: What Isabella Wanted: Isabella Stewart Gardner Builds a Museum by Candace Fleming and illustrated by Matt Cordell.

RVC: Your picture book philosophy in five words or fewer?

CL: It needs an emotional hook.

RVC: Thanks so much, Catherine.

CL: Thank you for this opportunity!

Educational Activities: K is for Kindness by Rina Horiuchi

K Is for Kindness
Author: Rina Horiuchi
Illustrator: Risa Horiuchi
26 April 2022
Viking Books for Young Readers
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “From aardvark to zebra, this delightful cast of animal characters illustrates the many ways to show kindness to others, while teaching the youngest readers their ABCs.

Debut author/​illustrator and sister duo Rina Horiuchi and Risa Horiuchi have crafted a warm and tender gift that affirms kindness can be found anywhere.”


Need some reviews on K Is for Kindness?

As a bonus, here’s a Storytime Read-​a-​loud of K Is for Kindness.


Educational Activities inspired by K Is for Kindness:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • What’s happening on the cover?
    • What does “kindness” mean to you?
    • What does “empathy” mean to you?
    • What questions would you like to ask the author before you read the book?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • Which of the animals were you most surprised to see in this book?
    • Which rhyme was your favorite? Why?
    • Which picture did you like the most? Why?
    • The book asks “What’s something nice that you might do today?” What’s your answer?
    • What did you think of the book’s ending?
    • Did you like this book? Why/​why not?
  • Writing–What other acts of kindness might have been included in this story? Write your own scene with animal characters doing their own kind actions. See if you can match the rhyme pattern found in the book. Use colored pencils, crayons, or markers to create your own art, if you want. Consider sharing your work with a friend or family member.
  • Crafting–This book includes a lot of animal characters. Let’s stick with that theme and make crafts that feature some of the animals from K Is for Kindness.
  • Further Reading–Learn more about kindness by reading these related books. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)

Author Interview: Jocelyn Watkinson

This month’s Author Interview is with Jocelyn Watkinson. The idea for her debut picture book–The Three Canadian Pigs: A Hockey Story, which releases in August 2022–didn’t come out of nowhere. She’s from Canada, after all! Plus, she attended a lot of hockey games to see her little brother play goalie for the local rep hockey team. (Yeah, she brought along books and read in the stands the whole time, she admits!)

Today, Jocelyn lives in California, where she:

  • plays soccer
  • enjoys board games
  • sips hot tea
  • refurbishes old furniture

To find out more about her and her debut picture book, let’s get to the interview!


RVC: We have to start things off with the #1 question that everyone has. On a scale of 5 to 5,000, how much do you miss Tim Horton’s double double?

JW: Haha–great lead question! Can I answer infinity??

For those that don’t know, a “double double” is a coffee with two creams and two sugars–known to be the most popular order at Timmies! But since I am a non-​coffee drinker (crazy, eh?), I only drink tea. But there is no comparison to Tim Horton’s Steeped Tea, which I miss dearly!

RVC: Since I’m a fellow non-​coffee-​drinker, I fully appreciate your answer. But let’s circle back to the beginning. What’s the story of how you got interested in writing?

JW: The short version of the story is that my husband got hired at a California university as a professor so we would be moving to the United States. Because of visa reasons and employment restrictions at the time, I was ineligible to work, so I found writing to keep me busy! Right before we made our move south of the border, our dog George got sick and we had to put him down. With all the hectic moving plans, the grief didn’t sink in until I was sitting alone in my new California apartment. For some reason, the idea of a kids book to help deal with the loss of a dog came to me, and for some reason, in rhyme! (Bad rhyme, I’ll admit!) That book is now firmly on the shelf but it got me into the kidlit world, so it definitely will always have a special place in my heart.

RVC: By “on the shelf,” you mean something like “tucked away in a drawer, never to be seen again,” right? To me, “on the shelf” means available in book form at Amazon or my local indie (which for me is Bookstore1Sarasota).

JW: Exactly.

RVC: Gotcha. At what point did you decide you were going to get serious about publishing kidlit?

JW: I decided to finally go to a SCBWI conference. I arrived and thought “yes…this is where I’m meant to be!” I also won a raffle for a one-​on-​one with an agent and felt like that was a big sign of encouragement from the universe. 😊

RV: Congrats on that!

JW: The advice I gained from the conference helped guide me to a few critique groups and ultimately to Renée LaTulippe’s Rhyme and Meter course (which is an absolute MUST if you are going to write in rhyme) where I learned meter (the real trick to writing in rhyme) and the proper way to rhyme. Once I felt confident in these craft skills was when I felt like I was getting pretty serious about it.

RVC: What’s the story of how The Three Canadian Pigs: A Hockey Story came about?

JW: I love fractured fairytales. I find them to be so fun and creative. I happened to be working on a different idea and was bouncing the idea off my mom. Then she just blurted out, “You should re-​write the three little pigs, but make them Canadian!” So, I have to completely owe the idea to her (thanks Mom!).

As soon as I figured out that the wolf would want to eat their Canadian bacon, the puns just started flowing.

RVC: What are you most proud of regarding this book?

JW: I think just the perseverance of how many edits it took to get it to where it is now and not stopping until it was just right. I think I had 47 versions of this story. When writing in rhyme, you’re constantly tweaking to make sure your readers don’t trip over your words.

RVC: If you could go back and do one thing differently to get you to that debut book deal faster, what would it be?

JW: I don’t think I could have got this book any faster, to be honest. I am absolutely an outlier when it comes to this. I have been so lucky in this industry so far and have a lot of people to owe my success to.

RVC: Tell me more about what happened.

JW: Once I had the idea mostly flushed out, I reached out to Shannon Stocker who I hired for her professional critique services. I met her the year prior when I didn’t get a PBChat Mentorship that I applied for but was awarded a critique from her. After some very helpful feedback, I applied to the PBChat Mentorship program in 2020 and was selected as a mentee by Lori Degman! She was amazing to work with and whipped my manuscript into shape.


Then as a finale to the mentorship, we had a showcase where agents and editors were invited to shop through our work. I didn’t get any interest until the very last day where Sarah Rockett from Sleeping Bear Press requested to see the manuscript. Then within a month, I was told we had a deal! I think that’s pretty fast compared to industry standards!

RVC: It sounds fast to me, and Sarah Rockett is terrific–we did an interview with her in 2020.

JW: Cool!

RVC: So, you like to write in rhyme (I know this from your social media names such as “Jocelynwritesinrhyme”). I’m a big fan of rhyme—I just wrote an article on that very thing for Writer’s Digest, in fact! What are some of the top tips I should’ve included in that article?

JW: I think any seasoned rhymer will tell you that rhyming isn’t for the faint hearted. Be prepared to work and work and work at it until readers don’t trip over any parts of your story while reading aloud. This takes tons of practice, patience, and wonderful critique partners. Also, another plug to take a rhyme and meter course and learn the craft. Check out Renée LaTulippe’s variety of rhyme and meter courses if you want to learn the right way to rhyme. She also has some great YouTube videos.

RVC: What’s something about your writing process that might surprise people?

JW: When I get an idea for a story, I come up with key words and then make a list of words that rhyme with them and see what kind of lines come to mind, then I start to build out the story from there.

RVC: What special strategies do you use for overcoming writer’s block?

JW: First, to write in rhyme, and goofy rhyme at that, I need to be in a mood that matches. I tend to listen to Adam Sandler, The Lonely Island, or any artist that sings funny songs–their silliness can really start to get the juices flowing.

RVC: You’re not sitting on your laurels—you’ve already got another picture book deal. And a collaboration, no less. 

JW: Oh, yes! I am very excited about that. At the end of my mentorship with Lori Degman, I pitched the idea of a sequel to her Travel Guide for Monsters book which came out with Sleeping Bear Press in April 2020. The book follows a group of monsters across the US visiting all the iconic landmarks. I remember seeing that book when she was promoting it, before we even knew each other and remembering how clever it was and the illustrations were so amazing. So, during our mentorship, I thought it would be great if the monsters could also go through Canada!

I can’t believe that she agreed to take a look at what I had written so far, but she did and then we pitched it back to Sleeping Bear Press (again with Sarah Rockett) and they agreed to publish it! It was quite serendipitous how it all came together; the mentorship, the book deal, and how the previous book lined up with the same editor and sequel, etc.

RVC: That’s an amazing story. Now, one last thing before we get to the final part of the interview. What are you working on these days? 

JW: Building my portfolio so I can be successful in querying an agent. But my current WIP is called The Cantankerous Canker…not quite sure where I’m going with it yet but “cantankerous” is becoming my new favorite word!

RVC: Good luck with the agent search, but now it’s time for the LIGHTNING ROUND! Zippy quick answers and zappy fast answers. Ready?

JW: Oh ya, fer sure!

RVC: #1 Canadian expression that Americans just can’t appreciate.

JW: I gotta go with the classic “Eh!” It is pretty iconic when you think of Canadians but it is so versatile.

  • Want someone to agree with you? Say “Eh?”
  • Need clarification on something? Say “Eh?”
  • Just really excited about something? Work “Eh!” into your sentence.

RVC: What word do you always misspell?

JW: “Convenience.” Did I get it right?? I always have to say “CON-​VEN-​I-​ENCE

RVC: If you built a themed hotel, what theme would you use?

JW: Probably something sports or board-​game themed. I love board game nights with friends!

RVC: What books are on your nightstand?

JW: Catkwondo, Jack B. Ninja, and The Three Ninja Pigs. My son is big into Taekwondo right now!

RVC: Most underappreciated but awesome picture book?

JW: It’s Only Stanley by Jon Agee. So clever and simple and in rhyme. I hope one day to write something like that.

RVC: Five words that sum up your picture book philosophy.

JW:  Make the grownups laugh, too!

RVC: Thanks so much, Jocelyn. Best of luck with your debut!

Picture Book Review: Life in Hot Water by Mary Batten

Life in Hot Water: Wildlife at the Bottom of the Ocean
Author: Mary Batten
Illustrator: Thomas Gonzalez
Peachtree
21 June 2022
40 pages

This month’s PB review is by Ryan G. Van Cleave (Owner/​Operator of Only Picture Books) and author-​illustrator Bonnie Kelso, a very good friend of the OPB family.

Ryan’s Review of the Writing

Mary Batten’s new picture book, Life in Hot Water: Wildlife at the Bottom of the Ocean, takes readers on a deep dive into one of the most extreme environments on Earth–hydrothermal vents. While a nonfiction look into an environment could easily be bland, Batten works to find beauty both in the subject matter and the language she uses to describe it. For example, phrases like “gushing plumes of superhot fluids” help nature come alive in ways kids might enjoy almost as much as Gonzalez’s evocative illustrations.

Batten also makes use of text placement such as how she describes the descent of a 1997 HOV (human-​operated vehicle) called Alvin:

Life in Hot Water helps readers understand that prior to the deep-​sea dives where these vent ecosystems were found, people believed that complex ecosystems could only thrive with sunlight and green plants. The basis for all food chains HAD to be photosynthesis. But after seeing life thrive in such a harsh environment without sunlight or green plants, scientists realized how wrong they were. In fact, this AHA moment–finding underwater vent ecosystem that were powered by chemicals inside the Earth–is “one of the most important discoveries of the twentieth century.”

In addition to offering lots of specific scientific facts (the temperatures that vent bacteria could live in, the difference between black smokers and white smokers, how there are 650 vents around the world, etc.), Batten also includes quotations both short and long from a range of scientists to help give voice and character to the discoveries that otherwise might feel didactic.

Kids who like icky or weird things will be drawn to facts such as: “Sharing the snail’s environment are crustaceans called Hoff crabs that have no eyes. They get their food from bacteria living in their chest hairs.” There’s also interesting medicine-​focused information such as how an antibiotic has already been made from the Pompeii worm’s bacteria or how the study of a specific enzyme led to the creation of a coronavirus test.

One thing I particularly appreciate is how Batten uses back matter. A book with this much science behind it could easily wax scientific in great length and detail after the main story, but it doesn’t. Readers instead get a readable two-​page, 10-​point “Learn More About the Deep Open” list along with a lively one-​page Author’s Note and a brief Glossary.

This will be a good addition for any school, library, or science lover.

4.5 out of 5 pencils


Bonnie’s Review of the Illustrations

Thomas Gonzalez’s atmospheric illustrations in Life in Hot Water: Wildlife at the Bottom of the Ocean capture a bizarre and seldom seen ecosystem that thrives at extreme depths. Using pastels, colored pencils, and an airbrush, Gonzalez masterfully portrays a craggy sea floor bursting open from rising geothermal steam. A sense of unworldly chaos is expressed through highly textured plumes of gray silt rising like geysers into an inky abyss. Mysterious eyeless alien-​like creatures cling to the crusty vents, feeding on nutrients or perhaps each other! Feathery tube worms, blind crabs, and iron-​clad gastropods cluster about in one intriguing spread where light shines into the distance, highlighting the blurred ripples of a rising thermocline.

Gonzalez does a great job of handling Mary Batten’s lengthy but fascinating text. He manages to achieve spaciousness even when illustrating hundreds of tube worms piled on top of each other. Each worm moves with the current, directing the viewer’s eye through the spread’s dynamic landscape. In another favorite spread, a lone amphipod floats on a spacious black background, stretching its body toward the life-​giving warmth of a nearby hydrothermal vent.

Even when depicting humans inside a submersible or on the deck of a research vessel, Gonzalez stays within his limited color palette and finds ways to continue his use of rich textures and dramatic lighting. Overall, this is a fabulous follow up to Life in a Frozen World: Wildlife of Antarctica and I can’t wait to see the next book in this series. I was the kind of child who would pore over books like these for hours. I know there are many children out there who will also enjoy dipping into this mysterious “hot water” world.

5 out of 5 crayons


Bonnie Kelso is a huge fan of everything ocean. She once dived off the coast of an active volcano and witnessed the awesomeness of CO2 vents up close and personal.

Bonnie’s debut informational fiction picture book Nudi Gill, about a feisty sea slug, releases March 2023 by Gnome Road Publishing. She is currently completing the final illustrations for In a Cave by Heather Kinser, also to be published by Gnome Road Publishing in 2023.

A graduate of the Rhode Island School of Design, Bonnie’s past experience in art spans a spectrum, from abstract painting on canvas to museum-​quality exhibit design. She has worked with clients such as the Smithsonian, National Geographic, and NASA.

She lives in Las Vegas with her partner, two sons, and an unruly cat. To learn more about Bonnie’s work, please visit www.BonnieKelso.com.

Agent Interview: Jacqui Lipton (Tobias Literary Agency)

After working as an Associate Agent and intern at several literary agencies, Jacqui Lipton founded Raven Quill Literary Agency in 2019 and, in 2022, the agency merged with The Tobias Literary Agency where Jacqui continues to focus on developing the careers of unique, high quality, engaging, and often underrepresented voices. She represents a little bit of everything from children’s books through the adult market in both fiction and nonfiction.

In addition to holding an MFA in Writing for Children & Young Adults from Vermont College of Fine Arts, Jacqui is a law professor and attorney with American and international experience in commercial and intellectual property law. She writes columns on legal issues for writers for the SCBWI BulletinLuna Station Quarterly, Catapult Community Page, and Savvy Authors, and she’s a frequent presenter on these issues around the country. She’s also the author of Law and Authors: A Legal Handbook for Writers (University of California Press, 2020).

Jacqui focuses on representing authors of picture books, novels, novels-​in-​verse, and nonfiction from middle grade through to the adult market.

Now that we’ve got a sense of what Jacqui is bringing to the OPB table, let’s get to the interview!


RVC: Which came first—the interest in writing/​publishing or the interest in law?

JL: I’d have to say I was writing LONG before I was thinking of going to law school. I was always an avid reader from a very young age and started writing bad poetry in elementary school, moved on to short stories in high school, and soon tried short novels and scripts. A major attraction of the law for me involved the narratives relating to legal disputes—different ways the same facts can be perceived and relayed by different parties–and the very human stories the law often deals with.

RVC: Way back when, what were you reading, and what influence did those books have on you?

JL: I started out with mysteries when I was young—I loved books that included puzzles to solve. I still love a good mystery or suspense story. I tend to like relatively fast-​paced stories that contain surprises along the way, but now I also enjoy slower paced, thoughtful literary pieces with beautiful writing craft.

RVC: You’ve got a connection to Australia. Care to explain how you went to university there?

JL: I actually grew up in Australia and moved to the States later in life, so I still have an Aussie accent and did most of my schooling in Australia. I went to the UK for my Ph.D., and also now hold that good old MFA in writing from Vermont College of Fine Arts.

RVC: Since you literally wrote the book on legal issues for writers, let me ask—why do writers need to know about the law? Isn’t it something their agent just handles for them?

JL: Well, to start with, not all writers work with agents or literary lawyers, so it’s worth understanding the basics of the contract you’re entering into! And honestly the main through-​line of the book is that it’s not necessary for authors to know a lot about the law, and that the law should never stand in the way of writing what you want to write because there’s usually a workaround for common legal problems that arise, many of which I discuss in the book.

So, the idea of the book is to explain in simple terms, with accessible pop culture examples, the basics of things like what a copyright is, the key terms authors will see in contracts with agents and with publishers (and the key differences between those contracts) and how defamation, privacy and trademark law can come into play in the writing life. The content of the book is really drawn from lots of questions authors have asked me over the years and my attempts to answer them in simple, accessible terms.

RVC: Simple and accessible sounds wonderful.

JL: There are other books out there that go into, say, publishing contracts in a lot more detail than my book. Mine is really intended as an entry point to give authors a heads up on the key legal issues they might face in their careers, and importantly, which issues can be easily handled without legal help, which may need legal help, and where to go to find effective and hopefully affordable legal help. It also has chapters focusing on self-​publishing where agents/​lawyers are less likely to be consulted. The book won’t make anyone into a lawyer, but hopefully it will give authors comfort about the scary-​seeming questions that often get raised and inaccurately addressed in a a lot of writing groups (online and IRL)!

RVC: I teach Introduction to the Profession of Creative Writing and The Profession of Creative Writing at my college, and something we talk about in those classes that shocks young writers is copyright and IP (intellectual property). They often don’t have any idea of the rights they’re surrendering for free by posting things on social media, for example. 

JL: That was a big reason I wrote the book—just to give authors some accessible and accurate knowledge about things like their intellectual property rights. And posting stuff on social media usually isn’t “giving away” rights in your work, but it may be infringing rights in other people’s work! It’s important to understand the difference between protecting your own rights and respecting other people’s rights—and I hope the book addresses some of those distinctions.

RVC: Gotcha–thanks for clarifying that! Now, you work as a legal consultant for writers and creative artists. What’s the most frequently asked question you get? 

JL: Definitely questions about including other people’s work (e.g. song lyrics, lines of poetry, photographs) in your own work—and the extent to which that infringes copyright. A lot of people think that giving attribution to the original creator avoids a copyright infringement problem and it really doesn’t because copyright isn’t about attribution—it’s about copying. Attributing the original creator is always nice, but it’s not a copyright issue. If the original creator gives you permission to use their work and asks for attribution in return, that’s a contract (it’s a contractual license to use their work with attribution).

The other common question is about defamation—say, someone is writing a memoir and want to know what they can “get away with” writing about real people in their lives without being at risk for a defamation suit. Luckily for authors, defamation is a pretty weak law in the United States as compared with other countries. Truth does tend to be a defense and statements of opinion, rather than fact, are typically not defamatory.

RVC: How did you go from being a lawyer to being a literary agent?

JL: I actually still do a bit of both (or at least a bit of contract consulting here and there). I also mainly teach law rather than practice. I’ve always been more of a teacher than a lawyer, which, I think, is part of the reason I wrote the book. The teacher in me just won’t stop! So, I tend to do a bit of everything but my main focus is a combination of teaching and agenting.

RVC: What’s something most people wouldn’t appreciate about being an agent?

JL: How much paperwork there is in terms of contracts, payments, just day to day emails. I think a lot of people have a kind of glamorous conceptions of agents on the phone doing big deals for books that become instant bestsellers. A lot of it is actually admin work behind a computer. I also think people assume agents make a lot more money than they do, a lot more quickly than they do over the span of a career. An agent only gets a commission on projects they sell, and, even then, it’s usually typically around 15% and most book deals aren’t six-​figure deals. So, you do the math! And bear in mind that unless you own your own agency, that 15% is split between the agent and the agency, so many agents only earn between 7.5 to 12% of the deals they do, depending on their arrangements with their agencies.

RVC: You’re a writer, too. How does your own writing inform your agenting?

JL: I’m not sure that it really does. I tend not to write in areas where I actively agent because I have trouble turning off my editor brain in the genres I work on for clients, which tends to interfere with my ability to write creatively myself in those genres. So, at the moment I write mainly prescriptive nonfiction for adults (the legal issues book and a forthcoming data privacy handbook—Our Data, Ourselves: A Personal Guide to Digital Privacy, coming out this fall with University of California Press). I tend to rep nonfiction more in the kidlit space and more narrative nonfiction than I write. And I don’t really write much in the way of fiction.

Never say never, but once my editor brain is switched on for a particular genre, I find it hard to switch off.

RVC: What made you take the potentially scary dive into launching your own agency?

JL: It was something that felt right at the time because I had trained for a while and I had the legal/​business background to do it. It also enabled me to call the shots and develop the business the way I wanted to develop it—with a wonderful team of agents and clients. I think it paid off in the sense that we gave a lot of newer agents and clients a wonderful start in the business and then, with the recent Tobias merger, we were able to quickly draw on the strengths and synergies between the two agencies to provide clients a deeper level of service and more opportunities more quickly than if we had continued on our own.

RVC: In all your experience with Raven Quill, what surprised you the most?

JL: We did manage to make a lot of deals very quickly, or at least more quickly than I guessed we would, particularly as we had newer agents and a lot of newer clients on deck. We were probably helped a bit by the pandemic because we didn’t have brick and mortar premises to deal with at a time when lots of people were trying to renegotiate leases, and we didn’t have a lot of existing contracts with pub dates being postponed due to school and bookstore closings, supply chain issues, etc. I guess I was also surprised by the amount of faith clients and editors placed in us so quickly and so graciously.

RVC: Let’s talk about picture books specifically. What are some of the picture books you’ve repped that are indicative of your tastes, both as an agent and for your agency?

JL: It’s so weird to think of myself as a picture book agent because it was one area I never specifically trained in, but I did end up selling a number of them. My picture book tastes are pretty eclectic and my list is currently pretty full in that regard so I’m more likely to look at a picture book author who also writes in other segments of the market at the moment.

One of my absolute favorite picture books (coming out in 2023 with Sleeping Bear Press) is Stephanie Gibeault’s Toby Tootles, illustrated by Mary Sullivan, because I was so delighted to actually sell a fart book! But what I love about the book is that it’s really a book about self-​acceptance that uses flatulence in a humorous way to get the message across.

I have to also give a shout out to Tziporah Cohen for two of her picture books, On the Corner of Chocolate Avenue: How Milton Hershey Brought Milk Chocolate to America, illustrated by the amazing Steven Salerno, and coming out this fall with Clarion, and Afikomen, coming out in spring 2023 with Groundwood (illustrated by Yaara Eshet). I love the Hershey bio because it’s about the way Hershey struggled to create a sweet treat accessible to the masses, and not just for the wealthy. And I LOVE Afikomen because it’s a wordless time travel portal fantasy about Passover. Writing the pitch for it was a lot of fun as you can imagine.

RVC: I’ll bet!

JL: Two of my clients have absolutely amazing picture books coming out on the Heartdrum list at HarperCollins, one about community with a particular shout out to people who identify as “two spirit” (Circle of Love by Monique Gray Smith, illustrated by Nicole Neidhardt) and another about a young girl coming of age and learning about how to make a ribbon skirt with her grandmother (Stitches of Tradition or Gashkigwaaso Tradition) by Marcie Rendon, illustrated by Joshua Mangeshig Pawis-Steckley.

Another one that I’m particularly excited about is Molly Golden’s debut nonfiction picture book, Becoming Real: The True Story of the Velveteen Rabbit, illustrated by Paola Escobar, forthcoming with Clarion (big shout out to Jennifer Greene for her editorial vision). While it’s a picture book biography, it’s really a story about using creativity to overcome grief and it was a perfect book to work on during the pandemic.

RVC: Sounds quite timely.

JL: I hate calling out particular client projects because I’ll always end up leaving someone out but hopefully this list shows you that when I do rep picture books, the actual genres within PB that I rep are pretty broad (although I definitely have a soft spot for nonfiction), but what I’m looking for is a meaningful theme at the heart of the piece. For example, I don’t want to see a biography that simply chronicles someone’s life. I want to see a story about hope or grief or love that uses the biography format (or whatever other format) as the vehicle to investigate that theme.

RVC: Something I’ve found to be true is that most agents get a ton of pretty good manuscripts. What helps a story stand out from a bunch of others that are totally solid and have a lot going for them but ultimately won’t make the cut?

JL: That’s a tough one to answer! The short answer is probably “narrative voice” but it’s really difficult to define what that means. When I end up passing on perfectly good projects that don’t have that special “it” factor, I usually write the author a note saying “I wasn’t drawn organically into the story through the characters and their voices; I felt like I could see the author’s hand telling me what was going on.” What I mean by that is there’s a difference between a character who just leaps off the page and into your heart and a character who is interesting, but interesting in the same way as a lot of other characters. I wish I could be more specific. And it’s also subjective, so a character that doesn’t speak to me on that level may well speak to other agents and editors. That’s why it’s almost impossible to define “voice” in a way that’s meaningful to writers! Each agent/​editor “knows it when they see it” and we’re all looking for slightly different nuances.

RVC: What’s your personal feeling on Art Notes from authors?

JL: I think they’re fine as long as they’re not overdone. Some pieces require more art notes than others to clarify what’s happening in the text. As long as the author isn’t being overly prescriptive and not giving any room for the illustrator to shine, or, conversely, the author isn’t leaving too much of the narrative to the illustrator because the author, say, doesn’t really know how the story ends (!), I think, with practice, it’s usually relatively clear where and when illustrator notes should be included.

Agents should be able to help with this, too. I’m often discussing adding illustrator notes (or removing them) with client work, so there’s no “perfect” amount of illustrator notes to include when querying agents, and an agent who likes your work should be able to discuss including or deleting illustrator notes. Same with backmatter and other supplemental information.

RVC: What DON’T you want to see in terms of picture book submissions? 

JL: I’m being very selective about picture book submissions at the moment because my list is pretty full on that front and pretty strong already. I’m not the best fit for anthropomorphized animal characters–or dragons. Actually, I’m probably not the best fit for any prince/​fairy/​dragon pieces!

RVC: What’s a favorite client picture book success story?

JL: I have one that I can’t talk about because it hasn’t been announced yet so ask me next time!

RVC: Consider us tantalized regardless! Now, what’s a favorite you CAN share?

JL: I really loved selling a beautiful picture book, Rising by award-​winning Canadian literary fiction author, Sidura Ludwig, which is being illustrated by Sophia Vincent-​Guy and published by Candlewick. Sidura is such a beautiful lyrical writer and the manuscript was so quiet and heartfelt, simply chronicling a day making Challah between a mother and daughter, but of course it was about so much more. It resonated with themes of family and community across countries and generations. It ended up being a competitive bidding situation between editors who really understood the message and felt passionately about it. At the end of the day, Mary Lee Donovan ended up editing it and she is an absolute dream for this piece. Jewish stories that aren’t about a particular religious holiday or the holocaust have been few and far between, so a simple family Challah-​baking story felt in some ways a tough nut to crack in the market, and I was so glad we found an editor—in fact more than one—who really had the most amazing vision for the piece.

RVC: That’s the secret–finding an editor with the right vision for a story. Awesome.

JL: I know you only asked for one story but I was also super-​excited about the sale of Lyn Miller-​Lachmann’s debut picture book, Ways to Play, illustrated by Gabriel Alborozo to Levine Querido. Lyn had always wanted to write a picture book and now calls herself a “triple threat” as a result of spanning the PB, MG and YA markets (and she’s also now written a chapter book as well—the Temple Grandin volume in the She Persisted series—so maybe she’s a quadruple threat). Ways to Play will be such a beautiful book dealing with children on the spectrum being called out for not playing with toys the same way as other kids; both Lyn and Gabriel are on the spectrum and it’s the perfect partnership for this piece.

RVC: Last question for this part of the interview. What would you like to brag about in terms of forthcoming client work? And/​or your own writing?

JL: All of it! Seriously, I can’t pick a project. I’m fortunate and so, so grateful that my clients have put their trust in me and shared their amazing creative work with me and supported me as the agency grew and changed and ultimately merged with the team at Tobias. If I have a brag at all, it’s that I think the market is going to see our clients’ work go from strength to strength in coming years and I can’t wait to see what the future brings for all of us.

RVC: Alrighty, Jacqui. It’s now time for the Lightning Round. Zippy questions and zappy answers, please. Are you ready?

JL: Uh, didn’t you notice the length of my previous answers?? I don’t think I can do this! HELP!!!

RVC: Favorite Crayola color (real or invented)?

JL: Memory Lane Indigo.

RVC: What always cheers you up when you think about it?

JL: My kids’ smiles.

RVC: What do you think you’re much better at than you actually are?

JL: Critiquing plays and musicals!

RVC: Guilty reading pleasure?

JL: ROMANCE!!!!

RVC: What’s the One That Got Away?

JL: Ooh, that’s a tough one. I probably can’t name her because she’s working with another agent and happily selling books I wished I’d had the opportunity to rep. (She knows who she is!!! Or does she???)

RVC: In five words or less, your picture book philosophy.

JL: Write with heart. Rinse. Repeat.

RVC: Thanks so much, Jacqui! 

JL: Thanks for having me!

Educational Activities: Sarah Rising by Ty Chapman

Sarah Rising
Author: Ty Chapman
Illustrator: DeAnn Wiley
24 May 2022
Beaming Books
40 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “Sarah starts her day like any other day: she eats her toast and feeds her bugs. But today isn’t a day like any other day. Today, her dad brings her to a protest to speak out against police violence against Black people. The protesters are loud, and Sarah gets scared. When Sarah spots a beautiful monarch butterfly and follows it through the crowd, she finds herself inside the no-​man’s land between the line of police and protesters. In the moments that follow, Sarah is confronted with the cruelty of those who are supposed to protect her and learns what it feels like to protect and be protected.

Inspired by the protests that happened during the Minneapolis Uprising after the police killing of George Floyd, Sarah Rising provides a child’s-​eye view of a protest and offers an opportunity for children to talk about why people take to the streets to protest racial injustice. Readers will gain a new appreciation for how important it is to be part of a community of people who protect each other.

Backmatter includes a note from the author about his experience growing up as a Black boy in the Twin Cities, information about the Minneapolis Uprising, and practical ways kids can get involved in activism.”


Need some reviews on Sarah Rising?

As a bonus, here’s an interview with the author at Tara Lazar’s blog.


Educational Activities inspired by Ty Chapman’s Sarah Rising:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • When and where do you think this story takes place?
    • What is the child doing on the front cover?
    • What emotion is that child feeling? Are the other people feeling the same thing?
    • What do you think this story will be about? What makes you think that?
    • What questions would you like to ask the author before you read the book?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • Were you surprised by the pets that Sarah had? What type of person has pets like that?
    • What did you predict was going to happen when Sarah’s dad said she wasn’t going to school that day but instead was going with him to a protest?
    • How did you react when the policeman smacked the butterfly?
    • When Sarah ran off with the injured butterfly and got lost, how did the art change?
    • At the end of the book, Sarah was yelling along with everyone else? Why didn’t she yell and chant before?
    • Which picture did you think was the most powerful? Why?
    • Did you like this book? Why/​why not?
  • DiscussingSarah Rising is a story about a very challenging topic. What questions do you have? How did it make you feel? Is there any part you didn’t understand? If you were Sarah, would you have done anything different? Whatever you think, feel, or wonder is perfectly okay. Read the book again with an adult family member or friend, then talk about what you think, feel, and wonder. Listen to what they think, feel, and wonder, too.
  • Writing–If this book had a sequel, what would it be? Write that story yourself in any way that you choose. Use colored pencils, crayons, or markers to create your own art, if you want. Consider sharing your story with a friend or family member.
  • Listening–Many real-​world kids are involved in real-​world activism. In the video below, how does Michael’s story connect with Sarah Rising?

  • Further Reading–Learn more about children and activism by reading these exciting books. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)