Editor Interview: Maria Modugno (Random House)

Maria Modugno has had an amazing career in children’s literature. Currently, she serves as Executive Editorial Director at Random House Studio, an imprint of Random House Books for Young Readers. Prior to that, she was vice president and Editorial Director at HarperCollins Children’s Books where she acquired such popular series as Pinkalicious by Victoria Kann and Splat the Cat by Rob Scotton. She also worked at Harcourt Brace Jovanovich and Little, Brown.

Some of her recent titles for Random House Studio include Uni the Unicorn by Amy Krouse Rosenthal and illustrated by Brigette Barrager, Grumpy Monkeywritten and illustrated by Suzanne and Max Lang, Penguin Problems by Jory John and illustrated by Lane Smith, and Attack of the Underwear Dragon by Scott Rothman and illustrated by Peter Oswald.

Yeah, I’m pretty excited to learn more about all Maria does. Let’s find out together!


RVC: You’re living in Chicago these days?

MM: When we went fully remote, I left New York after 20 years and moved to Evanston. It’s right outside Chicago.

RVC: I’m from Chicago myself. My brother still lives in the suburbs.

MM: Oh, it’s great. My family’s out here, too. Whoever thought businesses would go remote and then say, “Sure, take off! Go wherever you want!”

RVC: This industry is well suited for it.

MM: You’re right. We do everything electronically now. I can work from Chicago as easily as I could work with people back when I was in New York.

RVC: Let’s circle back to the start. You’re a lifelong lover of reading and books.

MM: I just loved books even though I grew up in a really small town with a really small library. Kids were only allowed to take out three books a week. Maybe it was because of that rarefied status that I knew books were something really great. My family says I have the Reading Gene. Those who have it, walk around with a book in our hands all the time.

Honestly, if I could do anything in the world, I’d just want to read!

RVC: Speaking of reading…what were some of your special early reading experiences?

MM: They’ve fallen out of fashion, but I love the Little House on the Prairie books. And there was a picture book from Italy called The Circus in the Mist which had opaque and different kinds of paper. I was fascinated by it.

I just loved picture books, like Millions of Cats by Wanda Gág. At one point, Tomie dePaola took me took me to the Kerlan Collection at the University of Minnesota where they have all this art. Tomie asked, “What would you like to see?” And I was able to look at the original art for Millions of Cats.

RVC: Terrific.

MM: I also loved Two Little Miners, a Golden Book. Young readers really don’t have very discriminating taste.

RVC: So long as you love what you’re reading, it’s all fine in my mind.

MM: I wish I could say something profound to your question, like “Oh, I loved The Little Prince.” But no, whenever you hand me something, I’ll read it, you know?

RVC: I totally get it. Now, when did you realize that kidlit was the career for you? Is that what you studied at University of Vermont?

MM: No, I was an English major who specialized in poetry mostly because that’s what I was drawn to. I started out being a science major, but I found I was spending most of my time in the stacks pulling down books and just reading. Studying poetry helps me with editing manuscripts because in a picture book, every word has to count. Every word carries a big burden–it has to say more than just one word typically does.

RVC: You brought up Tomie a moment ago. Rumor has it that he taught you how to become an editor.

MM: I was so lucky. I knew Tomie because my first job in publishing was in marketing. I had toured with him because of that, when Harcourt moved to California, they put me in charge of the editorial department because no one else wanted to pack up and move to the West Coast. I was young and stupid enough to say “Sure, why not?”

I found out we had a contract with Tomie and I said, “Tomie, what are we going to do? I don’t know how to edit.” He generously said, “Why don’t you come out to Whitebird for the weekend, and I’ll teach you.” And so I packed up my warm clothes and went. We talked through the idea of the whole book together–Merry Christmas, Strega Nona. We carefully went through the story and its arc. Then Tomie said, “Now I’ll go off and write it.”

Then he brought the manuscript back to me and said, “Go read it, but don’t change any of my words. Just question things in the margin if something doesn’t sound right. Read it out loud to make sure it sounds right–not just reads right.” And I did exactly that. Then we met up and discussed my comments.

Through that, Tomie instilled in me the importance of someone else’s words. You don’t just trash them off the page. The author put them there for a reason, so let the author make changes when something’s not clear.

That’s how I started as an editor.

RVC: Wow, you were so lucky to have worked with someone like that.

MM I was lucky indeed.

RVC: Fairly early in your career, you went from being an editor to being in charge of editors, which is more like an administrative role.

MM: That’s right. I went from being a marketing manager to being a director of the department. I did that at Harcourt and I did that at Little, Brown and then at Harper, though I was never really happy with that role. I really, really love working on books. That’s what I want to do. Honestly, in publishing, that’s not what’s valued most–what’s valued most is being able to run things and stuff like that. And so I’ve given up a lot of that.

RVC: But that allows you to have your hands on a lot of creative efforts these days, right?

MM: Oh, yeah. At the end of the day, that’s what I want to do. That’s what makes me happy.

RVC: Can you share what the acquisition process is like for picture books?

MM: I’m part of a very small imprint at Random House–it was just founded three years ago. It’s run by Lee Wade, our publisher who’s formerly of Schwartz and Wade, and there are four editors and two designers here. Basically, when I see something I want to sign up, I discuss it with Lee and we talk about what I want to pay for it. It’s as easy as that. I also have to run a P&L [profit & loss statement], which means I have to gather sales data and track information. But I never ask an author to make changes until they have a contract in hand.

RVC: That doesn’t seem to be the norm these days. There seems to be a lot of R&Rs (revise and resubmit) requests before the potential contract arrives. Or not.

MM: When I read a manuscript, it’s either there or it’s not. I can see what needs to be done, and I see that it can be done. I can’t take a manuscript that’s a good idea but is badly written and make that good. That’s not my skill set. But if there’s something there that’s good and I can see where it needs to go? I’m all in.

RVC: Could you talk a bit about working on some of the bigger projects? As you were working on projects like Pinkalicious or Splat the Cat how big they’d become?

MM: Here’s the truth. I never imagined going beyond the first book with any of these. I liked Pinkalicious simply because I thought it was a great idea. You eat too many pink cupcakes, you turn pink. I also like that the little girl sticks her tongue out at me–that’s such a kid thing to do. I was surprised when it took off. I think some of it was shrewd marketing on the part of Harper because Fancy Nancy had just come out and Pinkalicious rode the coattails of that success.

With Splat the Cat, I was at a stationery show and Rob Scotton was there selling mugs and prints. I saw this mug he had with a sheep on it, and that became Russell the Sheep. We just took that image and expanded it. The character of Russell was very involved, in spite of not really having a mouth. I found out that it’s really hard to have a character express emotions without one, so I said to Rob, “Let’s find another character that we can develop.”

Rob had done a set of dishware around this cat named Splat and I said I want it to be a kid. Rob showed me how he could make the head bigger, the arms a little shorter, the body rounder, which made Splat more kid-​like. It worked.

RVC: Yes, it did!

MM: One of the things I do with any book launch is have a promotional hook. That first Splat the Cat book was about going to school, so it was a back-​to-​school story and that helped get it on tables.

OPB: What’s the story behind Toot & Puddle?

MM: Holly Hobbie came to see me at Little Brown. She had heard about me from another artist–Jane Dyer. And Holly had just finished a 30-​year contract with American Greetings where they owned everything she did with that little bonnet girl. She came to me and said, “What do you think I should do?” I told her, “Anything you want.” I mean, she’s such a great artist. She could paint with an eyelash–she’s just amazing!

The first Toot & Puddle as a story about one pig. Then we realized that if you have two pigs, they can play off each other and be two halves of a whole. And they’re charming stories.

RVC: Totally agree.

MM: The first book was cobbled together by some existing artwork. To me, it looks like the seams are showing a bit, but it all worked out fine.

RVC: I’m a big fan of Grumpy Monkey, which is another of the books you edited.

MM: The Langs are so talented that I can’t even believe it. I think they were one of the first to tap into the whole social emotional learning trend because that book comes right out and says, “It’s okay to be grumpy. You don’t have to put on a happy face.” Their books are funny, but they all have this truth–something kids need to learn.

I want to add that I don’t deliberately publish books to teach kids anything. They get that elsewhere. If somebody gave me a book and said, “Here, this is a good book for women who can’t get along with their mothers!” I’d throw that book right back at their head. That’s not why I read books. I like to read books to read books, not to learn things.

RVC: If you learn something, it’s just a bonus. But it’s not the point.

MM: No. And if it is, there’s Sam Goldwyn, who said, “All I want is story. Let Western Union take care of the messages.”

RVC: What do you look for in illustrations?

MM: Among the first people I worked with was Tomie, who was obviously a gifted artist. I also work with a lot of animators because they have the ability to tell a story. What I’m always looking for is movement. I also look for funny because I think the world needs funny books. There just aren’t enough of them.

A lot of do at work requires me to substantiate my decisions with data. But honestly, sometimes I make a preliminary decision and then I look for the data to substantiate it.

RVC: That makes sense. The art+story package should generate a gut reaction.

MM: Yes, that’s right. I don’t like mood pieces. I don’t like fancy words that don’t add up to anything. I don’t like bad rhymes. I just want great stories.

RVC: What are your thoughts on marketing, particularly for debut picture book creators?

MM: It’s the hardest thing with picture books because we don’t market to our direct audience (because we can’t). The biggest marketing or promotion you can do for a book is to get it placement in a bookstore. I never sign up a book without envisioning where it’s going to go in the bookstore. I think about what’s going to compel a bookstore buyer say, “I have to have THIS book and not THAT one.”

Honestly, a beautiful book and a beautiful story isn’t enough. It has to fit into something that a bookseller will promote, like a holiday, or Black History Month, or some other event. You need to have that kind of promotional connection because most picture books have the shelf life of a quart of milk.

If you don’t get it out there and get it noticed, it’s gone.

RVC: Will you talk a bit about your own writing, such as Santa Claus and the Three Bears?

MM: I wrote that book on a lark for a friend. I love that classic story, and I love giving it a twist. But I don’t consider myself a writer at all.

At one point, I took drawing lessons, but believe me, there’s no hidden talent there. I just wanted to know what it felt like for an artist or writer to confront a blank piece of paper. What does it feel like to put that first mark on it?

Maybe that’s what I learned from Santa Claus and the Three Bears–I had to mentally see the story and where it was going to go before I could write it.

RVC: What’s the most important trait that you bring to the editing process?

MM: I never forget what it’s like to be a kid.

When my nephew Chris was four years old, he moved from a very old house in New England to a brand-​new house in the Midwest. I asked, “So, Chris, how’s the new house?” He said, “All the doorknobs are the same.” That’s the viewpoint of a kid. They’re not in our world. They’re in a world that comes up to our waist. You have to remember that. You have to remember the things that interest them.

Kids also like funny things, but a lot of editors prefer serious things. I think the world is serious enough already.

RVC: What are some of your proudest moments as an editor?

MM: I love when a new book comes in. And I love when books hit the bestseller list. Funny books don’t win awards, though. They don’t get starred reviews either. And it took me a long time before I figured that out. By the time I figured it out, I decided that winning awards wasn’t what I was about anyway.

I come from a working-​class background, so I always felt it’s my job to keep authors and artists earning money and working. I don’t like to make them wait for a response from a publisher because that time is time that they’re not making money.

RVC: A lot of writers are going to love that you said that!

MM: I’ll add this–a high point for me is working with Lane Smith. I’m in awe of him. Over and over again, he proves himself to be both brilliant and nice.

RVC: I’m not surprised. That seems to be the brand not just for Lane but also a lot of people in the kidlit industry. It’s good people and good audiences.

MM: You’re right about that.

RVC: Beyond the obvious–join SCBWI, read a lot, write a lot, etc.–what’s your advice for aspiring picture book writers?

MM: I think it’s more than just reading other books–it’s reading them critically. To do this, ask good questions.

  • What did I like about this?
  • What made me turn the pages?
  • Why didn’t I like this?

I also encourage writers of picture books to think visually. As they write, they should see the picture that their words are going to suggest. I’m not talking about art notes, but rather how you imagine these words looking when they’re illustrated. You have to tie the two together all the time.

RVC: Alright, Maria–it’s time for the Speed Round. Are you ready for some zip-​zappy goodness with super-​fast questions and super-​duper-​quick answers?

MM: Sure.

RVC: If animals could talk, which would be the most annoying?

MM: A gnat.

RVC: If you built a picture-​book-​themed hotel, what would the theme be and what would the rooms look like?

MM: Classic fairy tales because they’re so popular and I’d want people to come. Either that or The Nightmare Before Christmas.

RVC: What secret talent do you have that no one would expect?

MM: I make hats. I’m an amateur milliner.

RVC: What’s your dream project in the picture book world?

MM: I’ve already lived so many of them! But my dream would be to sign books without having to go to auctions. They’re really competitive and they rub me the wrong way.

RVC: What’s the One That Got Away?

MM: There’s one every year. That’s one of the things about a picture book–different editors will envision it differently. So, if I saw a book one way and somebody else published one another way, did it really get away or was that book meant to be what it became?

RVC: What is your picture book philosophy?

MM: Don’t forget kids are going to read it.

RVC: This has been a real treat, Maria. Thanks so much!

Educational Activities: A Good Deed Can Grow by Jennifer Chambliss Bertman

A Good Deed Can Grow
Author: Jennifer Chambliss Bertman
Illustrator: Holly Hatam
7 February 2023
Christy Ottaviano Books
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “Discover the ripple effects of doing a good deed in this interactive picture book about the importance of kindness. 

A good deed can grow like a seed.… 

Join a loving community as they work to create a better world. Whether planting a garden or visiting a sick friend, picking up litter or playing music at the senior center, kind actions—no matter how big or small—can spread like a ripple, impacting the lives of others for the better.

Jennifer Chambliss Bertman’s inspiring text and Holly Hatam’s joyful illustrations celebrate how anyone, young or old, can make a difference. It all starts with a good deed.”


Educational Activities inspired by A Good Deed Can Grow:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • What does the phrase “good deeds” make you think of?
    • How might a good deed grow?
    • What do you notice about the children on the front cover? On the back cover?
    • What questions would you like to ask the author before you read the book?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • Which idea pleased you most–that a good deed could be a seed, a ripple, a sunbeam, or a smile?
    • Have you ever felt too small to help a problem that seems so big? What could you do about that problem?
    • How did reading the book change you (or your viewpoint)?
    • What did you think of the book’s ending?
    • Which picture did you like the most? Why?
    • Did you enjoy this book? Why/​why not?
  • Taking Action–Since good deeds can have a positive effect in the lives of others, let’s look at what YOU might do. Consider doing any of the following (with an adult partner): 
    • planting a garden
    • visiting a sick friend
    • picking up litter
    • playing music or singing at a senior center
  • Crafting–I really like the community garden in this book–isn’t the art terrific? With that in mind, let’s enjoy making our own fun crafts about gardens! 
  • Further Reading–Learn more about by good deeds and kindness from these related books. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)

 

Author Interview: Matt Forrest Esenwine

Welcome to Matt Forrest Esenwine, the first Author Interview of 2023! Wahoo!

Last year, I joined PB22 Peekaboo, a picture-​book promotion group of which Matt was a member (along with a few dozen other fine writers). It was impossible NOT to notice how hard Matt was working and how much it was paying off in terms of publishing and PR successes. At one point, I made a mental note to find out more about that, and today’s the day to make it happen!

Matt’s work has appeared in various poetry anthologies by Lee Bennett Hopkins, J. Patrick Lewis, and others, though he’s also published a range of his own picture books including the OPB-​approved I Am Today, which came out in March 2022. He’s got more on tap for 2023 and beyond, so we’ll learn about that right here, too.

Now, without more ado, let’s find out more about Matt’s secret to success!


RVC: First and most important question—how often do people misspell your name? As someone with an (apparently) easily misspellable name myself, I’m unduly aware of potential spelling disasters, and your double r (Forrest) and single s (Esenwine) seem fraught with linguistic peril.

MFE: Linguistic Peril is actually the name of the new thrash metal group I’m forming, so thanks for the plug.

RVC: Happy to help. Rock and roll, baby!

MFE: As for people misspelling my name, the answer is: googol. And no, I don’t mean to look the answer up online. I’m talking about the mathematical googol (which, ironically, you’ll likely end up looking up online). Ten to the 100th power–that’s how often my name gets mangled. Over the years, both my father and I have seen just about every permutation possible, from Essenwein (the original Bavarian spelling) to Eisenstein to Entwhistle. I wish I were joking, but I’m not.

In fact, the most ridiculous spelling came from the State of New Hampshire when my father, Forrest Esenwine, was a selectman in our town. Someone at the state must have seen his name written in cursive and mistook the “w” for a “ur” and mailed out an envelope addressed to Selectman Forrest Esenurine. Way to go, New Hampshire.

RVC: [Making mental checkmark against the previously-​believed-​to-​be-​awesome-​state-​of-​New-​Hampshire.] At least your name is more prone to spelling problems than speaking. Is that fair? Mine gets mangled both in spelling and how people pronounce it. 

MFE: Well, like I said, whether it’s spelling or pronunciation, people still get confused. I mean, it seems pretty straightforward to me; it’s pronounced exactly the way it looks. “ESS-​enn-​wine.” But people invariably put an “i” after the “e” and say Eisenwine. At least they don’t do the “i before e” thing, because that would just be weird. I’m sure someone will one day, though.

By the way, if you happen to email me, be sure to spell my middle name correctly. My address is matt(at) mattforrest(dot)com, but if you only use one “r” it will end up in the inbox of Matt Forest, councilman for Ashford Borough in England–and a couple of days later he’ll forward it to me. We’ve known each other for nearly 20 years all because people forget the second “r.”

RVC: That British councilman should write picture books too just to confuse things! Now, let’s get back to the regularly scheduled interview. Prior to becoming a children’s book writer, you worked in radio. How did you find your way into that field?

MFE: I walked through the studio door once the “on-​air” light was off, and the DJs couldn’t get rid of me. After graduating from high school, I went to Castleton State College [now Castleton University] in Vermont for a Mass Media Communications degree and got a job working part-​time in Concord, NH my first summer there. I always loved radio, having grown up listening to my father’s vinyl records of old-​time radio programs like Fibber McGee & Molly and Lux Radio Theatre. I was also quite the geek in school (oh, who are we kidding–I was a geek 247), and I’d write humorous skits and record them–voices, sound effects, and all–onto my dad’s Panasonic cassette recorder. I was also in the drama club, so I think talking to people and telling stories was something that just came naturally to me.

You know how nervous kids get when they have to speak in front of the class? Not this guy.

RVC: What was the most rewarding part of it?

MFE: Free T‑shirts and CDs by artists no one has heard of. Seriously, I had a bunch of ’em!

RVC: Free swag is the best.

MFE: But as much as I enjoyed talking on the air and interacting with listeners–as well as emceeing club events and concerts–I really loved writing and producing commercials and comedy bits. With multi-​track production, I could add as many voices, sound effects, and whatnot as I needed to make whatever I was producing sound exactly how I wanted it.

RVC: Why did you shift your creative focus into the writing for children?

MFE: Because as much as I loved radio, radio did not love me. It was back in 2012 when I did the math and realized that if you subtracted daycare and commuting gas from my paycheck, I was netting $150 a month. Here I was, the production director of an 8‑station radio group, an on-​air personality with a college degree, and a wall of awards my department had received–and I was making $36,000 a year. So, I decided to be a stay-​at-​home dad and work on my voiceover business, and at the same time investigate the possibility of a children’s writing career.

I’d been writing poetry since I was kid and had several adult-​oriented poems published in various anthologies, and over the years had collected several children’s poems I didn’t know what to do with–so I figured children’s lit might be a worthwhile pursuit. My poetry writing style always seemed like it skewed to a younger audience, anyway. Modern academia loves poems that are obtuse and confounding, and that just wasn’t me. Writing for upper-​elementary level feels like a perfect fit.

RVC: Which skills from your radio experiences translated best into this new career path?

MFE: Short-​form writing! All my life I’d been writing short, tight little stories–from the skits I was recording on my dad’s cassette recorder to my poems to literally thousands of radio commercials where word economy is paramount. Transitioning to children’s lit was not that much of a stretch! Granted, we’re talking about a different style, age group, and other aspects that don’t translate from radio, but I never have a problem getting my word count down–if anything, once I’m done a picture book rough draft I usually have to figure out how to add words.

RVC: What books proved especially influential to you as you embarked on the writing career?

MFE: All the books I got my hands on. Really, the best education is to read, read, read and see what’s out there and learn how others are doing it. By reading children’s books, I not only learned the market but I also learned what others were doing and how they were doing it. It’s that old expression, “if you want to get better at something, surround yourself with people who are better than you.” That’s what I did! I created a blog to showcase my writing, I tried to connect with as many authors and poets as I could, and just tried to immerse myself in the industry–the creative side as well as the business side.

RVC: Great advice.

MFE: For the record, I like the creative side better. They have cookies.

RVC: If by “cookies” you mean “vanilla meringue cookies,” then you’re absolutely correct! Deliciously so, in fact. Now, your first published piece of children’s lit wasn’t a book, but instead was…

MFE: A poem titled “Apple-​Stealing,” which was published on the now-​defunct Young Adult Review Network (YARN) website, which the amazingly talented Kip Wilson used to help oversee. YARN loved the poem so much, they nominated it for a Pushcart Prize, which still makes me proud.

The first paid poem for which I signed a contract was “First Tooth,” which appeared in Lee Bennett Hopkins’ Lullaby & Kisses Sweet (Abrams Appleseed), published in March 2015. However, my first published paid poem actually appeared one week earlier, in Carol-​Ann Hoyte’s anthology Dear Tomato: An International Crop of Food & Agriculture Poems.

RVC: Let’s talk about your own books. What’s the story behind your first published picture book?

MFE: It’s one of those I‑don’t‑know-where-this-idea-came-from-or-what-it-is-but‑I’m‑just-going-to-keep-writing-and-see-where-it-goes kind of thing. Driving home late at night from an SCBWI Meet-​Up in Westford, MA, the words, “flashlight opens up the night” popped into my head. I rolled them around and wondered what I could do with them, and by the time I got home I had a few lines I hastily wrote down before going to bed. The rest of the week, I worked on it, thinking it was a poem–since poetry was all I’d written at that point–but about halfway through, I realized I had a picture book manuscript on my hands.

If you’re interested, I published a blog post detailing the entire life of Flashlight Night–from conception to publication. To a non-​author that probably sounds dreadful, but for those in the business, I promise it’s a very eye-​opening look at how a picture book comes together.

RVC: Thanks for that link! FYI to readers–I’ve covered Flashlight Night before in OPB when I interviewed Fred. What was your favorite part of working with him?

MFE: I actually remember reading that interview a couple of years ago–I had no idea that was your blog! Great interview, Ryan.

RVC: Aw, shucks! It’s easy to do great interviews when you have a great guest. And Fred’s top shelf. I mean, c’mon! His website is www.ilikefred.com after all. Talk about fun!

MFE: As for Fred and I working together, my favorite part was watching his Facebook posts about it. Because that was the extent of our collaboration, other than the back-​and-​forth he and I would go through separately with our editor, Rebecca Davis. We didn’t really work together at all, which is fairly S.O.P. when it comes to picture books–but Rebecca would occasionally show me what he was doing and ask my opinion (although she obviously had the final say), and a couple of times I had to adjust my text to better represent what Fred was doing with his illustrations.

For example, the original final line was “All was still, within, without…” but with everything Fred had going on with pirates and tigers and bear, oh my, nothing was still at all! So I changed it to “Adventure lingers, stirs about…” and it all worked perfectly.

RVC: What’s the biggest lesson that book taught you?

MFE: Patience is a virtue. Actually, I already knew that, but there’s nothing like the publishing industry to bring that point home. Being my first book, I didn’t realize how long it would take! I wrote it in Aug. 2014, Rebecca contacted me in Jan. 2015 to ask about purchasing it, we signed the contract a few months later, and the book didn’t come out until Sept. 2017. Whew!

I also learned how beautiful a book can be when the author’s words and illustrator’s images blend seamlessly, how involved marketing a picture book can be, and what a Kirkus star feels like.

RVC: That was a well-​earned Kirkus star. Congrats on that. 

MFE: Thanks!

RVC: You’ve published a good bit of poetry, both through your own books as well as edited anthologies. What is the most important thing people should know or understand about writing poetry for children?

MFE: That you don’t need to be the next Shel Silverstein or Jack Prelutsky or Dr. Seuss. (And folks, Dr. Seuss was never a poet–stop calling him that!) Write in your own style, your own voice. Again, READ. There are myriad ways of writing children’s poetry. And lots of it doesn’t even rhyme. That’s ok! Read, write, repeat.

RVC: What’s the most common misconception about poetry for children?

MFE: That it needs to rhyme or be silly. I come across really, really, tremendously horrible poetry more often than my stomach would care to admit, and it’s because people who don’t understand the craft are trying too hard to be something they’re not–or someone they’re not. I’m proud of the fact that esteemed folks like the late poetry cheerleaders Lee Bennett Hopkins and Paul Janeczko both told me how pleasantly surprised they were when they first read some of my poems because they realized I knew the craft, I understood rhyme and meter and such, and wasn’t trying to be funny all the time. Not that there’s anything wrong with funny poetry, you just don’t need to force it, that’s all.

RVC: In all of your experience in writing poetry for children, what has surprised you the most?

MFE: How difficult it’s been to get a collection published! I’ve been part of numerous anthologies, I have two of my own anthologies coming out in the next couple of years, I’ve even collaborated on a poetry collection with a highly-​esteemed children’s poet–yet finding a publisher who wants an entire book of my work has been an elusive task, alas.

RVC: How is your process for writing a poem similar to/​different than writing a traditional picture book text? 

MFE: It’s actually not that different, to be honest–the primary difference being that a poem doesn’t necessarily need a narrative. A picture book, even lyrical ones like the kind I tend to write–need some sort of loose narrative or structure to get the reader from point A to point B. With I Am Today, it starts with a young person thinking about how they want to make a difference in the world and concludes with them being satisfied with their accomplishment. With Once Upon Another Time, we show what the world used to be like before humans made their mark, compare it with the world as it is now, then travel back to when time began and finally work our way up to the present again–which admittedly sounds confusing for a picture book, but Charles Ghigna and I are delicate with our words and transitions, and it works nicely. Conversely, with a poem, I can focus on a scene, and image, a feeling–and not worry about a narrative structure.

RVC: You had a sizable blog tour with I Am Today—congrats on that! What’s your secret to landing guest blog gigs?

MFE: Bribes. Money, cars, penthouse suites–you know, the usual.

I suppose you could also say that I’ve been in the business long enough that I’ve developed a network of wonderful friends and fellow authors/​bloggers who are happy to help spread the news about whatever new book I have coming out. But it’s mostly the money and cars.

RVC: [Making mental note to acquire a fleet of Mercedes S‑Class W140s to use as bribes to support my own writing efforts…] What’s the key to making a guest blog a big hit? 

MFE: Being a guest on a top-​rated blog like Only Picture Books is certainly one way, along with providing compelling content that’s useful or entertaining. And bribes.

RVC: Wait a second…is there a bag of cash or a Mercedes S‑Class W140 en route? WOWZA! While I’m waiting for my goodies to arrive, tell me–what are your favorite tips to creating meaningful PR for picture books? 

MFE: Well, I approach picture book marketing like I approach my social media–because the two are intertwined, of course. I’ll share news about my books, reviews, etc., but I also share personal thoughts and funny interactions I have with my kids. No one wants PR, PR, PR all day, every day–people follow you for more than that. I’m just a regular guy and I hope followers recognize that. If you’re looking for insight into publishing or think I have an interesting enough life that you’d like to learn more about me, that’s great! If you’re looking for selfies of me wearing the latest faux-​leather leggings that are soooo trending right now–look elsewhere, my friends.

RVC: Who/​what are some of you biggest influences when it comes to writing picture books?

MFE: The biggest influence is Dorothy Aldis, the late children’s poet who wrote The Secret Place and Other Poems, among other books. This was the first book of poems I ever read (my parents bought it for me when I was very young) and I had no idea how big an impact it would have on my love of poetry as well as my style of writing. Not that I write like her, but she had a very easygoing, simple way of saying very thoughtful, insightful things. I’ve also been influenced by friends in the industry who have been, whether they know it or not, mentors to me as I’ve journeyed through this new career: Jane Yolen, Charles Ghigna, Nikki Grimes, David Harrison, and others–and of course, the late Lee Bennett Hopkins and Paul Janeczko.

RVC: It’s brag time! What do you have on deck for 2023?

MFE: Well, my picture book, Everybody Counts! (The Little Fig, LLC) just came out on Jan. 1, so I’m excited to celebrate the new year with a new book! It’s very unusual, too, as it teaches the reader how to count to 10 in twelve different languages, from German and French to Arabic and Navajo–and also teaches an ethnic name and food item.

RVC: Congrats on that!

MFE: Later this year (we hope!), I’ll have another picture book, The Thing to Remember about Stargazing (Tilbury House). I say “hope” because it all depends on how soon the illustrator, award-​winning Italian artist Sonia Possentini, completes the artwork.

I also hope to have a board book out sometime over the summer and there might be news about a couple of anthologies to which I’ll be contributing!

RVC: Okay, Matt—it’s time for the SPEED ROUND. Are you ready to bring your zip-​zappy best? Quick questions and fast answers, please!

MFE: Oh my God, the pressure.

RVC: What’s the funniest word in the English language?

MFE: Tintinnabulation.

RVC: If animals could speak, which would be the most annoying?

MFE: Not sure, but it would likely be one of mine.

RVC: What out-​of-​date slang do you regularly use?

MFE: Yo!

RVC: What’s the question nobody every asks you but you wish they would?

MFE: “Do you work out?”

RVC: What’s the answer?

MFE: “Nope.”

RVC: Who sets the standard for writing children’s poetry?

MFE: Trick question–no matter whose name I give, one of my poet friends is going to be miffed I didn’t mention them! So, I’ll say Jane Yolen because, well, who’s gonna argue, right?

RVC: In your best Radio Voiceover Guy Voice, tell us your picture book (or children’s poetry) philosophy…in 5 words or fewer.

MFE:

RVC: Consider me impressed. Thanks so much, Matt!

MFE:   Thank YOU for the invitation, Ryan! It’s been fun!

Only Picture Books’ 22 Favorites of 2022

Hello, 2023! While we’re really excited about the kidlit world and all that’s about to happen this year, we wanted to take a moment to reflect on some truly terrific picture books from the past twelve months.

This is a subjective list, so if we missed a great picture book, our apologies. Feel free to add your own suggestions in the comments. We’ll try to include those in future lists, if we can.

One last thing–since we’re running this in our regular Picture Book Review slot of the month, we’ll include our own 5‑word reviews along with a link to the Goodreads reviews. Creating these haiku-​like mini-​reviews is as challenging as it is fun. Try it yourself sometime!


Berry Song by Michaela Goade (19 July 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Luminous, dreamy, pro-​earth joy. Berrytastic.

Goodreads Reviews


Chester van Chime Who Forgot How to Rhyme by Avery Monsen, illustrated by Abby Hanlon (15 March 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Rhyming read-​a-​loud hilarity. Interactive fun.

Goodreads Reviews


A Gift for Nana by Lane Smith (10 May 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Quirky. Cute. Maybe for adults?

Goodreads Reviews


All Star: How Larry Doby Smashed the Color Barrier in Baseball by Audrey Vernick, illustrated by Cannaday Chapman (4 January 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Unsung hero. Door-​opener. Fascinating. Timely.

Goodreads Reviews


Bedtime for Bo by Kjersti Annesdatter Skomsvold and Mari Kanstad Johnsen, translated by Kari Dickson (9 August 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Joyous, snuggly bedtime love. Imaginative.

Goodreads Reviews


The Blanket Where Violet Sits by Allan Wolf, illustrated by Lauren Tobia (30 August 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Lyrical cumulative rhymes. Picnicky fun.

Goodreads Reviews


The Depth of the Lake and the Height of the Sky by Kim Jihyun (19 April 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Evocative wordless storytelling. Enchanting debut.

Goodreads Reviews


Dodos Are Not Extinct by Paddy Donnelly (8 February 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Extinct animals aplenty. Storytime silliness.

Goodreads Reviews


Good Night Little Bookstore by Amy Cherrix, illustrated by E.B. Goodale (29 August 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Cozy, charming Goodnight Moon pastiche.

Goodreads Reviews


I Am Mozart, Too: The Lost Genius of Maria Anna Mozart by Audrey Ades, illustrated by Adelina Lirius (22 February 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Gender injustice–Mozart’s prodigy sister.

Goodreads Reviews


John’s Turn by Mac Barnett, illustrated by Kate Berube (24 February 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Embrace your talent. Gloriously so.

Goodreads Reviews


Knight Owl by Christopher Denise (15 March 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Owlish wordplay. Bravery. Radiant art.

Goodreads Reviews


The Legend of Gravity: A Tall Basketball Tale by Charly Palmer (4 January 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Splendrous colors. Fanciful facts. Teamwork!

Goodreads Reviews


Lizzy and the Cloud by The Fan Brothers (3 May 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Pet clouds are awesome. Beautiful.

Goodreads Reviews


Love in the Library by Maggie Tokuda-​Hall, illustrated by Yas Imamura (8 February 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Detainment camp. History. Heartbreak. Books!

Goodreads Reviews


Monsters in the Fog by Ali Bahrampour, illustrated by Cannaday Chapman (14 June 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Humorous mountain journey. Beware “monsters”!

Goodreads Reviews


Nigel and the Moon by Antwan Eady, illustrated by Gracey Zhang (19 July 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Childhood dreams. Heart-​melting ending.

Goodreads Reviews


The Rise (and Falls) of Jackie Chan by Kristen Mai Giang, illustrated by Alina Chau (29 March 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Goofball acrobatics. Vibrant art. POW!

Goodreads Reviews


Standing in the Need of Prayer: A Modern Retelling of the Classic Spiritual by Carole Boston Weatherford, illustrated by Frank Morrison (20 September 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Glorious tribute. Discussion-​starting. Ear-​pleasing. Timely.

Goodreads Reviews


Strong by Rob Kearney and Eric Rosswood, illustrated by Nidhi Chanani (10 May 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Becoming an LGBTQ+ strongman. Empowering.

Goodreads Reviews


Uncle John’s City Garden by Bernette Ford, illustrated by Frank Morrison (3 May 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: City gardens. Family. Recipes. Delicious.

Goodreads Reviews


The Year We Learned to Fly by Jacqueline Woodson, illustrated by Rafael López (4 January 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Lyrical history lifts up readers.

Goodreads Reviews


I got so excited going through my shelf of 2022 picture books for this end-​of-​year list that I completely forgot to go back through the books we reviewed here at OPB (which I keep on a different shelf in a different room). I’m not bumping any of the 22 above books because they all belong here, but so do the following three titles.

I supposed that makes this post more accurately “Only Picture Books’ 22 25 Favorites of 2022.”

 

Mommy’s Hometown by Hope Lim, illustrated by Jaime Kim (12 April 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Hits me just right. Sensitive.

See the original OPB review here.

 

Wally, the World’s Greatest Piano-​Playing Wombat by Ratha Tep, illustrated by Camilla Pintonato (18 October 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Passion. Pride. Participation. Pianos. Potent!

See the original full OPB review here.

 

Wombat Said Come In by Carmen Agra Deedy, illustrated by Brian Lies (6 October 2022)

OPB Five-​Word Review: Friendship. Empathy. Safe and secure.

See the original full OPB review here.

OPB Favorites: Best Agent/​Editor Interview Moments from OPB in 2022

Thanks to having such a GREAT crew of writers, artists, and industry folks visit OPB this past year, tons of terrific/​useful/​exciting things came out in the interviews. For this final Industry Insider post, I decided to compile some of the most memorable agent/​editor interview moments right here in one handy-​dandy end-​of-​the-​year post.

**If their answers required a lead-​in/​framing questions, I included those. Many of these gems, however, stand well enough on their own.**

Did I miss a great line or idea from a 2022 Industry Insider interview that really stuck with you? If so, go ahead and tell me in the comments.

See you in 2023!


Reka Simonsen (Editorial Director, Atheneum)

RVC: What’s the most common misconception about editors?

RS: Even in the book world, I find that most people still think that editing means correcting grammar and punctuation—the kind of red-​pen editing that a lot of us are familiar with from the notes teachers wrote on our school essays. More experienced writers and agents know otherwise, of course, but first-​time authors still often expect that the first thing they’ll see from an editor is a detailed line-​level edit of the manuscript, which is usually a much later step in the process, rather than a letter or conversation that looks at the bigger picture aspects of the story, which is more often the first editorial step.


Kayla Tostevin (Senior Editor, Page Street)

RVC: What important lessons did editing that book teach you?

KT: This book was probably my first big lesson on how incredibly subjective publishing is. The author-illustrator–my bosses–and I all had many different ideas about the best way to handle many aspects of this book, and I realized, oh, being an editor is much less about fully controlling the development of a book than it is about finding the best route to solid middle ground between multiple visions. It’s not steering the car so much as politely giving directions from the shotgun seat, while sometimes the driver ignores you to make their own rogue turns, or the backseat passengers argue, or your maps app dies and you have to ask everyone to pull over and be patient with you while you reroute.

It’s a kind of chaos I’ve learned to fondly embrace. Having to come up with a new title that satisfied everyone was an especially hard piece of this lesson.


Frances Gilbert (Editor-​in-​Chief, Doubleday Books for Young Readers/​Random House Children’s Books)

RVC: Let’s help some of the aspiring writers out there. What’s a common misconception about kidlit editors?

FG: I know our industry can feel opaque when you’re trying to break in. One thing I always let people know is that we’re always earnestly trying to find exciting new works. I think people have the idea that we enjoy rejecting things, when in truth it’s the opposite. We’re always avidly trying to find great writing. We don’t enjoy saying “No” as often as we must. “Yes” is always more exciting.

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RVC: One more question for aspiring writers—what are your feelings on art notes? 

FG: If I don’t know what you envision happening in the book without art notes, then give me art notes. It’s that simple. I don’t understand why people worry about them so much.


Catherine Laudone (Editor, Paula Wiseman Books)

CL: Today, I make time to read for pleasure (and for school), and I go to the library once a week to check out picture books and graphic novels. Although I will admit that I consume novels mostly in the audiobook format these days. It’s easier to listen while doing the dishes, making dinner, or driving somewhere than it is to find time to sit down and read a physical copy.

Allison Cohen (Editor, Running Press Kids)

RVC: All the time, I see editors moving into the field of agenting. You did that, but then you boomeranged back to editing. That’s really quite rare.

AC: I loved being an agent. I loved working with writers across genres—children’s and adult, fiction and non-​fiction, etc. And the relationships I built with my authors were unbelievably special. But the 247 hustle was a lot. You’re not just an agent—you’re an editor, an accountant, a lawyer, a therapist, etc. I often found myself pulled away from some of what I loved best about the job—working with authors on developing their manuscripts. Don’t get me wrong, being an editor requires hustle—nights and weekends reading and editing—but it’s a different kind. I had been talking to an editor friend of mine about life and maybe making a change but not really knowing what that change was.

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RVC: What’s one thing that a lot of people just don’t quite understand about picture books?

AC: There is SO much that has to come together to make a book. That’s why schedules can be so long. It takes a lot to create synergy between the text and illustrations—you have the manuscript, then you find the right illustrator, then you get the sketches (almost always adjustments are made), then you see the color art (more adjustments are made). You’re getting together materials to share with sales so they can sell in to their accounts. You’re building marketing/​publicity plans to launch the book into the world. All this is happening while the managing ed and production teams are doing their best to make sure the books are printed, shipped, etc. There are so many hands that touch a book. It takes time. It’s a lot of work, but then you get the advance copy, hold it in your hands and think, THIS IS WHY. It is incredible when everything works out.


Lisa Rosinsky (Senior Editor, Barefoot Books)

LR: Early mornings are still my favorite time to write…when my creative brain is still loose and dreamy, before my critic/​editor brain has fully awoken.
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RVC: Who or what has influenced you as an editor?

LR: That’s a tough one…I’d have to name every book I’ve ever read and every editor I’ve ever had the privilege to work with. Most recently, though, I have to say that reading books with my two-​year-​old has taught me an enormous amount about editing. There’s nothing like reading a book over and over with a toddler to show you where the plot lags or fails to hold a reader’s attention, where the syntax is clunky or there are missing details. And picture books are a shared experience between an adult and a child—you have to think about the grownup buying and reading the books as well as the young audience. My new test for a manuscript when I’m reading submissions is, “Would I still want to read this one again after reading it at bedtime every single night for MONTHS?”

RVC: That’s a high bar, indeed!

LR: Absolutely.


Tricia Lawrence (Agent, Erin Murphy Literary Agency)

RVC: What’s the most important things authors should know or understand about effectively using social media to support their careers?

TL: That social media DOES NOT MATTER without the writing. It supports the book, but it doesn’t supersede the book. You only need a massive social media platform if you’re writing nonfiction for the mainstream adult trade market, say, if you’ve got a new approach to phlebotomy or something (ha!), but the story matters the most in children’s literature and teen literature. It’s ALL that matters.

That said, pick the social media tools you enjoy and leave off the rest. If you don’t like Twitter, it will be obvious. If you LOVE TikTok, go with god and have fun.


Jacqui Lipton (Agent, Tobias Literary Agency)

RVC: You work as a legal consultant for writers and creative artists. What’s the most frequently asked question you get? 

JL: Definitely questions about including other people’s work (e.g. song lyrics, lines of poetry, photographs) in your own work—and the extent to which that infringes copyright. A lot of people think that giving attribution to the original creator avoids a copyright infringement problem and it really doesn’t because copyright isn’t about attribution—it’s about copying. Attributing the original creator is always nice, but it’s not a copyright issue. If the original creator gives you permission to use their work and asks for attribution in return, that’s a contract (it’s a contractual license to use their work with attribution).

The other common question is about defamation—say, someone is writing a memoir and want to know what they can “get away with” writing about real people in their lives without being at risk for a defamation suit. Luckily for authors, defamation is a pretty weak law in the United States as compared with other countries. Truth does tend to be a defense and statements of opinion, rather than fact, are typically not defamatory.

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RVC: What’s your personal feeling on Art Notes from authors?

JL: I think they’re fine as long as they’re not overdone. Some pieces require more art notes than others to clarify what’s happening in the text. As long as the author isn’t being overly prescriptive and not giving any room for the illustrator to shine, or, conversely, the author isn’t leaving too much of the narrative to the illustrator because the author, say, doesn’t really know how the story ends (!), I think, with practice, it’s usually relatively clear where and when illustrator notes should be included.

Agents should be able to help with this, too. I’m often discussing adding illustrator notes (or removing them) with client work, so there’s no “perfect” amount of illustrator notes to include when querying agents, and an agent who likes your work should be able to discuss including or deleting illustrator notes. Same with backmatter and other supplemental information.


Natalie Lakosil (Agent, Irene Goodman Literary Agency)

RVC: What are some of the lessons you learned by agenting children’s books?

NL: What I learned over the years was that you’re going to suck at it for a little bit. You have to push past that, the “I don’t know what I’m doing, and nothing is selling–why is nothing selling…WHY?” because you’re kind of figuring out your own path.

Obviously, I didn’t NOT sell anything, but I have a much stronger sell-​through rate now. Back then, I was still building connections. I learned that you have to stay flexible as an agent. Don’t be afraid to branch into something new, even though it’s going to take work. You’re going to have to do a lot of research. You’re going to have to talk to colleagues. You’re going to have a lot of trial and error and not be perfect in your style and process. That could all take years, but it’s worth it in the end. You just have to push past that learning curve.

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RVC: What is the hardest part about being a literary agent?

NL: The emotional roller coaster of the industry. I get rejection daily. I pour my heart and soul into projects that don’t sell. I fall in love with projects that I don’t get to work on. I get horrible news when a book is cancelled, or something bad happens and something’s in jeopardy for an author or client. There are so many things that shift daily that you have to practice self care a lot so you can manage the ups and downs.

It’s commission work, too. Not everybody works on commission, but at least for me, it means there are ups and down throughout the year. You could have a fantastic first quarter that makes your year, then maybe nothing comes in for the next couple months and you’re questioning, “Am I ever going to sell a book again?” because you’re seeing other agents doing amazing things. And you’re thinking like, “Oh, should I be doing that?” There’s a lot of comparison going on. It’s like the Facebook thing, a lot of people shouting about all their amazing things. But they don’t share the hardships, and we all experience hardships.


James McGowan (Agent, BookEnds Literary Agency)

JW: What was the most helpful lesson you learned as an intern?

JM: Ask questions. I am by nature a question-​asker but it is crucial that every intern abandon any level of fear and just ask the question they have. There is no stupid question when you’re learning a field. Also, it makes you look engaged, interested, and people remember you better when they talk to you more.

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JW: Was there anything about the process of having your book published that took you by surprise, having worked in the industry?

JM: Ha! No, not really. I knew what to expect. Well, maybe just the general anxiety of it all. I did not realize how much pressure one can feel when gearing up for a publication day.


 

And since OPB underpromises and over-delivers…here are a few inspirational SCBWI FL conference highlights from this year’s Orlando event, as well!

(If you want to see all of them, here’s the full write-​up on it @ OPB.)

 


Brett Duquette (Executive Editor, Little Bee Books)

BD: Revising can be hard. One idea is to take it like a cake in layers. Don’t try and do everything at the same time. Because if you’re like me, all you’ll do is just work on making verbs and nouns prettier. Have a language layer or a plot layer or a character layer. It might help to think about it like you’re painting.

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BD: When I was younger, my brother gave me a photo of myself as a baby and said, Would you be mean to that person? So, if you’re hard on yourself, look at a photo of yourself as a child, and remember that you deserve love. Be gentle to yourself.


Aneeka Kalia (Associate Editor, Viking Children’s Books)

AK: Be patient, be persistent, and be kind to yourself.


Laurent Linn (Art Director, Simon & Schuster)

LL: Be true to your purpose. Because your purpose is one of the few things in life that you control.

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LL: Be honest with your readers or readers who aren’t reading yet…no matter what their age or stage of development.


Joyce Sweeney (Agent, The Seymour Agency)

JS: Go ahead and feel the sorrow when something bad happens in your career, then get back up and say, Okay, well, what can I do now? What’s the next thing?

Educational Activities: Giant Island by Jane Yolen

Giant Island
Author: Jane Yolen
Illustrator: Doug Keith
1 August 2022
Flashlight Press
32 pages

Book description from Goodreads: “Two children and a dog explore the coves and caves of a tiny island. Under the watchful eye of Grandpa, the kids are thrilled to discover a huge surprise: the craggy rocks, tufted grass, and wind-​swept trees on Giant Island are much more than they seem.

Visit Giant Island, where fantastical adventures await.”


Need some reviews on Giant Island?

As a bonus, enjoy this interview at Tara Lazar’s website with author Jane Yolen about Giant Island.


Educational Activities inspired by Giant Island:

  • Before Reading–From looking at the front and back cover: 
    • What do you think of when you think about the giants? About islands?
    • Where and when does this story seem to take place?
    • What kind of animals lived on and around Giant Island?
    • What questions would you like to ask the author before you read the book?
  • After Reading–Now that you’ve read the story: 
    • Were you surprised by the size of the island?
    • What other secrets and surprises did the island hold for Ava and Cooper?
    • Why did Grandpa call the island “old friend”?
    • What did you think of the book’s ending?
    • Which picture did you like the most? Why?
    • Did you like this book? Why/​why not?
  • Drawing–Since an island might be an island, what else might be a giant, too? A cloud? A hill? A tree? Use colored pencils, crayons, or markers to create your own giant something. Consider sharing your work with a friend or family member.
  • Crafting–Since the island plays such a big role in this story, let’s enjoy some crafts based on islands as well as the things/​creatures on and around them! 
  • Further Reading–Learn more about by giants these related books. Which of these have you already read? Which of the others would you want to read first? (Click on any book cover for more information on these titles!)